Zakuri Minamoto - Konoha Genin

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Zacklee · Last edited by Zacklee on Sun Oct 04, 2009 6:24 am; edited 5 times in total

Name: Zakuri (Zak) Minamoto
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Height: Short (135cm / 4'5")
Weight: Light (83lbs / 38kg)

Appearance:

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Short and swift, Zakuri is a small kid, but he doesn't mind it. He wears a blue coat over his white tee and his leaf headband around his neck. Around his waist is a pair of short denim-like pants, with bandages around his legs and runs on a pair of traditional sandals.

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Rank: E-Rank
Village: Leaf

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Bloodline: None.
Main/Favored Weapon:
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: Specialist in Ninjutsu, Minor in Genjutsu.
Starting Inventory: 5 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, 20ft of Wire, 6 Smoke Bombs

Personality: Zakuri is definetly not what you would call a loud person. If anything, he's the exact opposite. He'd rather sit outside in a tree out of sight then have social get togethers or play games with his classmates. He's never been good with talking to people and having a decent conversation. It's not that he's socially disabled, he'd just rather keep to himself. The only person he has had a lengthy discussion with would be either his grandma who he lives with or his pet parakeet at home and even then there are plenty of awkward holes and silences. His idea of a good night is to sit at home in bed or in a tree somewhere quiet looking out at the stars until he falls asleep.

Special Abilities: None.

Jutsus:

Bloodline jutsus: N/A

Jutsus you want to Learn: Anything wind related as well as summoning jutsu that could somehow involve his pet parakeet and a jutsu that could help his parakeet become a stronger and larger.

Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: Zakuri doesn't mind not having parents; It was he who made the final decision on it anyways. His parents are ninja of the leaf and never had time for Zakuri and if they did, they were always doing something else. Whenever he made an achievement, his parents were either preparing for their next mission, practising and developing jutsu or anything else ninja related. Over time, Zakuri got used to his parents' absense and started to shun any social contact, no longer caring or wanting attention. His parents one day, when he was 5, decided that he was too much of a burden on their lives. Zakuri, being as young as he was, still resented his parents for the lack of attention he gave them and agreed that he wanted to move in with his mother's mother. His grandma was different to his parents and loved and respected him, which was what he needed, although still would rather be without the attention of people, except his grandma. His parakeet, Chia, was given to him on his 6th birthday by his grandmother so he could have someone to talk to who wouldn't ignore him like his parents. His grandmother owned a large assortment and various species of birds in her house and Chia was the offspring of her two favourite.

Zakuri joined the academy to try and regain the attentions of his parents. He felt that maybe if he was to excel at the academy, they would give him more attention. His efforts were in vain and they continued to ignore him, barely even visiting him when he was living with his grandma. He now wishes to be a ninja for the reason of something to do with life and hopes to find some kind of dream to suit him on his travels and missions.

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 2:08 pm Post subject:

Here's what I see wrong:

1. Take that part out from the beginning. We know you're a newbie, but that's ok. We're here to help. ^_^

2. Put down either "None" or "N/A" under "Bloodline" instead.

3. Take out "He's not fussed on much" in "Favored Weapon".

4. Take out "None that he knows of" in "Special Abilities", and put either "None" or "N/A".

5. Your Summon would most likely be a "Custom Jutsu", which we have an application for, but you have to meet the requirements before you can post for it.

Everything else seems fine.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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Zacklee · Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 3:26 pm Post subject:

Thanks for your help! I'll leave that summoning there and I'll post an application for it when I can.

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 3:28 pm Post subject:

Need to put "N/A" under "Bloodline Jutsus". Also, since you don't have a Bloodline, you're allowed one of the following for your "Fighting Style":

1. Specialization in one
2. Specialization in one, Minor in another
3. Major in one, Minor in one or two

Whichever you choose, please specify if it's a Specialization, Major, and/or Minor.
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Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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TriggerHappyTurtle · Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 3:32 pm Post subject:

It looks pretty good, on fighting style You need a specialization and a minor

Nin specialist then Gen minor as your current one.

On your starting inventory you need how many/how long/ etc. those things are, other than that it looks good.

Edit: Damn you Kats!

The rest of my points still stand.
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Zacklee · Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 10:58 pm Post subject:

How many ninja tools of each is standard? I'm not quite sure.

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TriggerHappyTurtle · Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 11:04 pm Post subject:

Let's say about 5 kunai, 15 shuriken, twenty ft of wire, and 6 smoke bombs.

Sound good?
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Zacklee · Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 11:08 pm Post subject:

Okay, cool, thanks!

And because I'm going to add his pet parakeet as a pet-nin, does he have to have a specific bloodline for that, and which i have to apply for? And I'll have to change the whole history and stuff as well? Because if I change his age which he moved with his grandma to something younger with a logical reason behind it and him having the bird since he was little, does it really count as a bloodline?

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TriggerHappyTurtle · Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 11:12 pm Post subject:

I'm not sure I'd look through the library/custom Bloodlines, but I don't believe so.
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Zacklee · Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 11:18 pm Post subject:

i was just reading through the pet-nin/summoning application sheet and it said:

"Note, while any character can have a pet, having a pet capable of battle counts as a bloodline"

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