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PostPosted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 6:32 am    Post subject: Phoenix Summons (wip) Reply with quote

Name: Vane
Age: Unknown (its not polite to ask a lady)
Gender: Female
Height: 16cm
Weight: 1kg

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Level/Rank: Minor
Type: Taijutsu
Contract: Phoenix

Main/Favored Weapon: None
Element: Fire
Fighting Type/Style: None
Starting Inventory: Nothing

Personality: One of the younger phoenixes, Vane  none the less holds herself quite seriously and gets quite annoyed at people when they attempt to put her down/make fun of her. She takes great pride in her role as the clans greatest scout, and is happiest when she is allowed to do what she does best, though she does take risks sometimes that would be best avoided.

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Name: Vane Gaze
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Vane
Description: One of the secrets of her Scouting excellence, Vane is able to link her senses to that of her summoner or other phoenixes, allowing them to see and hear everything that she can.

Name: Phoenix Burst
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Phoenix/Signed the Phoenix contract
Description: One of the Jutsu's known only to the phoenix clan, this appears at first to be a combination of the body flicker and the replacement Jutsu, which is an accurate description of it, or at least what it does, though the appearance is different. This sounds the user in a brief stream of fire, where they disappear with a crack before appearing to appear somewhere else. However this is merely a trick of the light, with the movement being at body flicker speeds with the fire acting as a brief shield.

Background: The youngest of the phoenix clan that is allowed to be summoned, Vane is the only one of her family clutch that is allowed and available to be called upon, something that has brought them great honor among the others. For her this honor is something of a double edged sword, as while it means that her family is respected, it also means that she has to deal with those that she is unused to even seeing, let having to talk to and listen to. While she still looks forward to each day that she is able to enter the shinobi world, she  also fears it inside, something that she tries to hide with bluster and seriousness.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 2:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

There has already been a pheonix summoning.....
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 4:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

None of those Summons are remotely usable, hence why I was given permission to remake it.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

16cm? that is the tiniest Summon i have ever heard of. certainly for a phoenix. I would suggest making it, visually noticeable from more then five feet away. hehe
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Have you ever seen a sparrow fluttering around your garden? Its basically that size
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 12:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes I know, but when i think Phoenix, I think something about the size of a vulture, only you know, beautiful.

Like a fiery peacock or something.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 12:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And thats what some of the other ones will be. The reason why its taking me so long to make them (it took me a week for that one) is trying to keep them balanced. After all, a vulture sized Boss Summon (with all the strength that implies) would be extremely OP, due to it being hard to hit. Besides, not every part of the summon has to conform to stereotype, and I'm trying to think of other reasons why people would use a summon, not just combat tool.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 10:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pokes Sucal

This is still active, so I can complain about it? Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 8:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sure its still Active, and nothing has stopped you from complaining about it before. Ive just run into a little bit of blockage when it comes to thinking about the summons
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 1:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Keep working on this...



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