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 Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 8:45 pm Post subject: Tokage Hirosho |
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Name: Hirosho, Tokage
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Height: 6’ 4”
Weight: 180 lbs.
Appearence: Tokage is a rather dusty looking person. His hair always seems to have sand in it, as well as sand on other parts of his body, such as arms, and when visible, legs. His brown hair is usually never combed and messy, although he keeps his face clean-shaven of some, if any, stubble. Unlike most ninja, Tokage keeps his hair short, as long hair interferes during combat and training. His most striking features are his eyes. He was born with blue eyes, yet his eyes turned yellow as he aged. Not really sure why, Tokage jokes it is because of all the sand he’s gotten in his eyes from living in Sunagakure. He normally wears a black sleevless shirt, with the symbol of a scorpion on the back. He will wear pants in other countries, usually because it isn’t as hot as Sunagakure, and will wear shorts with his kunai strap usually located on his shin. He has several scars on his body, the most notable being right across his nose, several on theback of the neck and the shoulders, as well as the arms. In fact it is hard not to find places Tokage has scars.
Race: The Japanese/White that is found in Naruto
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Yellow
Body: Athletic, but with long legs
Ethnicity: Sunagakure (Sand)
Tokage is calm. Peaceful. He keeps a level head. Tokage is naturally anti-social, but has come out of a shell ever since the Ninja Academy has forced him to be more social. He spends many hours a day meditating, as the soul of a ninja is even more important than the body and the mind. As a calm individual, his friends and peers often ask him for advice. He would prefer to absolve something peacefully, rather than fight, and is usually able to come up with a solution to solve a matter, and is a natural mediator. Tokage is for the most part kind and polite to the people he meets. He has a carefree disposition and will usually do things he wants to rather than expected of him. Recently he has become more aloof and indifferent to people a he has other thoughts on his mind.
Level/Rank: Chunin level, but not missing nin
Village: none
Bloodline: None
Main/Favored Weapon: Nekode
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: 1. Taijutsu 2. Ninjutsu
Strengths: Tokage is fast and quick on his feet. That is his main advantage, as well as his ability to keep a level head in battle and concentrate. Very agile, he can dodge most blows, and likes to get in close combat to land blows and defeat opponents. Tokage has a high endurance as well, and can think up strategies quite fast. He can also take a large amount of pain.
Weaknesses: In a fight against brute strength or more powerful ninjutsu, Tokage can only hope for the best and wait it out. He isn’t one for long-distance combat, and prefers medium to close combat battles. His skill with thrown weapons isn’t very good either and he has poor aim. He occasionally has flashbacks of torture by the Jashin priests that leaves him helpless until they pass.
Jutsus:
Basic Jutsus
Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique]
Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
Genjutsu Kai [Genjutsu Release]
Tree Climbing
Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking]
Other Jutsu
Suna Shunshin no Jutsu [Sand Instantaneous Body Skill]
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: The user will be able to disappear from previous current position in a flurry of sand and reappear elsewhere. The distance they reappear to depend on the amount of chakra they choose to use.
Name: Suna hau [Sand Crawl]
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Sand Only
Description: This is a jutsu used to get around the deserts of Sunagakure, and for some basics in combat. The user will be surrounded in a light blue chakra that enables them to crawl along four legs, like a lizard, at considerable speeds. This jutsu will more or less increase speed and traction, as well as agility.
Doton: Dochu Eigyo no Jutsu [Earth Release: Underground Projection Lure Technique]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent.
Renge [Lotus]
Rank: C
Requirements: Good Physical State
Description: Renge, a series of high-speed hand-to-hand combat moves. Because of its high speed and power it requires a lot of stamina and it strains the muscles. Should be used with caution.
Kaze no Yaiba [Wind Blade]
Rank: A
Requirements: None
Description: A ninjutsu technique where the ninja creates a whirlwind blade around their arm with chakra. The blade slices through almost anything and cannot be easily blocked, as it is said that "nothing can stop a blade of wind."
Hiru Bansho: Boka no Jutsu [Leech All Creation: Attack Prevention Technique]
Rank: B
Requirements: None
The user merges with or within a nearby object, taking on its properties, and avoiding any damage. They can then use the properties they merge with as an attack by using Douka Yahumuki [Assimilated Blizzard].
Douka Yahumuki [Assimilated Blizzard]
Rank: C
Requirements: Hiru Bansho: Boka no Jutsu [Leech All Creation: Attack Prevention Technique]
Description: After performing the Hiru Bansho: Boka no Jutsu [Leech All Creation: Attack Prevention Technique] to fuse with an object, the user controls the object's materials that made their "body" and can send the materials to clash against the target.
Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Sasori Yakujou (Summoning Technique: Scorpion Contract
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A (Kinjutsu)
Requirements: Blood on Hands when performing, name in Scorpion Contract which is possessed by Jingu Hirosho (Tokage’s Grandfather)
Description: When the jutsu is used, scorpions will burrow from underground and assist their summoner in combat or any way possible. The amount and size of the scorpions depend on how much chakra is sued, but there are three basic kinds: a small regular sized scorpion which is black and very poisonous, a scorpion the size of an average dog which is less poisonous but has crushing claws, and a large scorpion about four to five feet long which has large claws and a sharp spined tail but isn’t poisonous. They are usually used to surprise an enemy or trap them and in battle rely more on speed than on power. The scorpions are mindless and obey their summoner to the death.
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Background: Tokage was not raised actually in Sunagakure, but was raised by his grandparents a short distance outside of the city, inhabiting a small house where Tokage’s grandfather worked as a small weapons smith, creating kunai and shuriken, which the Sand ninja would buy when Tokage’s grandfather would go into town about twice a week. Tokage had never known his parents, and his grandparents never told him anything about them when he was younger. Because he didn’t live in the village, Tokage spent most of his free time climbing the desert rocks and creating Nekode. He became very frustrated with his quiet life and no knowledge of his parents when he was about 10. He set out in the desert searching for rocks to climb and vent his frustration on. He got lost in the desert and was forced to survive for a week in the wilderness before his grandfather and two ninja found him. He nearly slipped into madness as dehydration and hunger overwhelmed him. During that time a change occurred in Tokage. He was no longer a frustrated, angry, foulmouthed adolescent. During his time lost in the deserts, he was able to find his inner self and reflect on his life so far. After that for two years, he became a calm individual, accustomed to being able to meditate a problem away.
After becoming more peaceful, Tokage asked his grandparents if he could be enrolled in the Sunagakure ninja academy. Although this had surprised him, Tokage was given permission, and he began to become a natural user of taijutsu and ninjutsu, yet lack in the fields of genjutsu and thrown weapons. He still carries the Nekode he used to climb rocks with, but now has converted them to serve more of a weapons purpose. Although still curious at his parent;s identities, Tokage has refused his grandparents request to tell him of their identity. After his experience in the desert, he believes they will be revealed in time.
Tokage spent an eventful time in the shinobi academy, making many friends, and sparring with a number of students, and ditching classes before going to the genin exams. He was on a team with Rio Hyuuga and Kumo Uchiha of Konoha, and fought in the forest of death and in 1 vs. 1 combat in the arena against Ky Inuzuka. He also met individuals that would later become very powerful such as Renima Henjay. After returning home to Suna, Tokage spent half of a year training himself, and trying to keep down a battle-lust and anger that had appeared in the genin exams he felt was inhuman. Most of the time was spent meditating and working on taijutsu. His grandfather taught Tokage the Dochu Eigyo, Genjutsu Kai, and Lotus techniques. Tokage himself began training with weights on his legs, defining his fighting style based on speed and blitzing the enemy. He increased his speed even more than it was, and has become a much more disciplined person, but his ranged fighting skills are still terrible. After he had finished training under his grandfather, Tokage became more interested in helping with Suna ninja matters, to further his chances of creating a perfect world with no violence or war.
Tokage took the chunin exams when he was 15, and fought against a Ninja from the Hidden Cloud Village in the tournament. The ninja used a deceiving genjutsu on him and Tokage was defeated, but the proctors were very impressed with the battle and awarded him the title of chunin anyway. Over the years since becoming a ninja, Tokage has earned the nickname “Sand Flash” in Suna because of his speed. Tokage has been working on forming his own jutsu that will ensure him as the fastest shinobi of all time.
Tokage became a hunter-nin through ANBU and tracked down many missing ninja, not bothering to hear their stories of why they left their village, because in Tokage’s eyes all missing ninja deserved to die. Tokage tracked down an A-ranked missing ninja for weeks one assignment, before he was ambushed and taken prisoner in the dungeons of the ninja’s new village. One in the remote sections of the world dedicated to the worship of Jashin. Here Tokage was tortured and interrogated to get information about Sunagakure, as a chunin, he only knew a small amount. The Jashin priests believed he was hiding things from them so their interrogation continued relentlessly. Tokage frantically wondered why Sunagakure had abandoned him and why no one was coming to his rescue. For three years Tokage put up with torture until by accident, a band of missing ninja stumbled upon the Jashin hideout and killed all the priests, freeing Tokage. Tokage returned to Suna, a completely different person, living in a country he no longer recognized.
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Village: Iwagakure / Sunagakure / Sunagakure
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| Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2007 5:10 pm Post subject: |
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Hien [Flying Swallow] means you have to have blades. Your Nekode are just spikes. Though there are different variations, I'd say it's safe if you could put a picture of the type of Nekode you are using, to clear up any further issues.
Also, your element is "Air" ((Fuuton)) meaning you need wind jutsu, and you can't have the Doton, unless you have a dual affinity and thusly need to have that listed. But even so, fuuton is your primary element and should out number your doton jutsu. But your Fuuton : Doton ratio is leaning towards Doton ((1:2)) So if you could fix this problem by adding in more fuuton jutsu, or taking the doton jutsu out, then we can further evaluate your profile.
((yay me, first post as an official jutsu mod =D))
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well I'm alright with the lotus, just so long as this is the last lotus user. Seeing as we don't want tons of people with it. And the nekode, as syra stated, are not blades, just longer spikes.
And, changing the element would be ok, if it weren't for the fact he's had fuuton as his affinity for two full ranks. Changing it is against the rules. And also, it isn't a fuuton jutsu unless it says Fuuton. Hien is not an elemental jutsu, because it is taijutsu.
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