Race: Ape
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Crimson
Body: Well muscled, clad in armor
Level/Rank: Minor
Type: Solo
Contract:Ape Contract
Main/Favored Weapon: Bo Stave
Element: Fire
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu / Taijutsu
Starting Inventory: Armor, Bo Stave
Personality: Karn is probably the least agreeable of the apes. He seems to constantly be in a bad mood. Even when he is summoned; he makes it clear that he only serves the summoner out of respect to Makel.
Jutsus:
Name: Katon: Karyuudan - Fire Dragon Missile
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: None
Description: A technique resembling Housenka rather closely, it doesn't take many hand seals and is almost the same in principle. The difference is that the fireballs created by this technique are faster and more potent, able to deal considerable damage in a direct attack.
Name: Bo-Flame
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: By channeling this chakra through his Bo-Stave, Karn is able to super-heat it. Anything that comes into contact with the stave will suffer moderate burns. Yet seeming as this effect is caused by Karn's chakra, he is safe from the technique.
Background: Like most of the apes of Makel's clan; Karn is only sociable towards the other Ape's which he calls family. Due to his, he has lived in solitude since birth. Other than his clan, the only contact he has had with other people have been due to the actions of his summoner.
Personality: Probably the friendliest of the family; Lyzaa is the baby of the clan. Being the youngest, Lyzaa is always eager to impress everyone; particularly his summoner. Due to this, he always seems to be friendly and giddy. Which is someone odd considering how deadly he is.
Jutsus:
None. Lyzaa posses no element, but is unmatched in hand-to-hand combat.
Background:
Lyzaa is the youngest of the clan. He was rescued by Makel when he was first born and has from that day on, been apart of the Summoning Family. Lyzaa has always had a good relationship with his summoners, likely due to his personable demean our; due to this, he has had little incident in his time as a summon.
Personality: Makel is the oldest and wisest of his clan, aswell as the figure-head leader. Due to his age, he is wise. He has always gotten on well with his summoners due to his generally good, even peaceful nature.
Jutsus:
Name: Suiton: Taihoudan - Pressure Cannon
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: None
Description: After forming the necessary hand seals, the shinobi will use their water natured chakra to create water and expel it through their mouth in a powerful stream. This attack is not very large, but very fast and the damage dealt by the water stream is quite high.
Name: Water Encampment Vortex
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: This jutsu is performed by the user first spraying water from their mouth. Once this has been done, the water flows around the target; forming a 10foot high wall of water on each side. The wall circulates at a blinding pace, meaning anyone who touches it is rebounded. Though this isn't an offensive Jutsu, it can keep an opponent confined and therefore open to other attacks.
Background: Makels role was somewhat thrust upon him. The previous leader of the clan having disapered, Makel was left to step up and bear the mantle of leadership amongst his family. Despite his new found power, Makel is still resentful of his post, awaiting the day when the past leader will return to relive him of his burden. In the mean time however; Makel has served well as the leader of the clan.
Name: Rynax
Age: N/a
Gender: Male
Height: 60'
Weight: 1500lbs
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Race: Girallon
Hair: White
Eyes: White
Body: Heavily Muscled
Level/Rank: Boss Summon
Type: Solo
Contract:Ape Contract
Main/Favored Weapon: Giant Katana (Blade Length is over 50')
Element: Katon
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory: Giant Katana
Personality:
Not much is known about Rynax. He was the original leader of the Ape Clan; the leader whom dissapeared and left the mantle to Makel. He has not been seen in hundreds of years, supposedly dating back to the origins of Shinobi. Due to this; his personality remains a mystery.
Jutsus:
Name: Ape Spit
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: None
Description: This techinque was developed by Rynax himself. He discovered that when he mixes chakra with his own spit, if becomes high corrosive to anything it touches (Other than him). Thus, he forms this chakra-driven saliva in his mouth and spits it at enemies. He spits up to 25 liters in one attempt. This is corrosive to the point where if not washed off within a minute, it will literally melt flesh away from bone.
Name: Katon: Zukokku - Head Mincing Pain
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: Fire as first element
Description: This is a devastating fire element technique. After forming the necessary hand seals, the user will expel a huge mass of fire from their mouth in a wide arc. This fire spreads along the ground like napalm and is hard to put out. Once the jutsu reaches the maximum distance, which is about sixty feet, the fiery mass combusts again, causing a large explosion. Only someone with a strong affinity for fire element can execute this technique.
Name: Katon: Karyuu Endan - Dragon Flame Missile
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: None
Description: A strong fire element technique. After making the necessary hand seals, the user will take a deep breath and exhale a large stream of searing flame. This is, without doubt, one of the most powerful fire ninjutsu. This flame can be expeled continuously for a constant, but not very high, chakra drain.
Name: Katon: Haisekishou - Burning Ash Accumulation
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: None
Description: After forming the required hand seals, the user will expel a vast cloud of ash from their mouth. It effectively blocks the sight of anyone caught inside, and when the user clicks their teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion. Someone unfamiliar with this technique may be fooled into thinking it's supposed to block their sight and take heavy damage as a result.
Name: Katon: Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: None
Description: This is a strong fire element technique. After the user forms the necessary hand seals, they will expel large dragon head shaped fireballs from their mouth. These fireballs are quite strong and fast and can punch through concrete. Strangely, they have a rather solid form and can actually bite the opponent and tackle them, while burning them with the flames at the same time.
Background: Next to nothing is known about Rynax. All we know is that he was the original leader of the Ape clan, aswell as the being the only ever sighted Girallon in history. Stories of the 'Great White Six-Armed Ape' have been passed down throughout generations of Shinobi, so it is almost impossible to tell exactly how old Rynax may be though it is suggested that he is as old as the Shinobi themselves and is also perhaps one of the original 'Great Beasts'. Roleplaying Characters: Rai, Sophia Saren, Willow Ria 'Kaguya', Isabella Hyuudou, Skye RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: SS Raikage ~ S-Jounin x 2 ~ Missing Nin Village: Kumo x 2 ~ Kiri ~ None Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: 440 Inventory: All have many of the following; Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon, Wire, Katana, Speacilized Weapons.
Is is just me or do the minor summons seem pretty powerful?
And absolutely no to 170 feet. The toad thing in Naruto was at most 60 feet.
And I just looked at one jutsu so far (the corrosive one), and it is too powerful. _________________
Just picking out the minor things, but I think there's some coding issues here with the URL's and -points to Karn's personality- Snake? I thought he was an Ape? O.o _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Samuru Mikage Ahira Henshin No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Genin||Genin Village: Kirigakure||Sunagakure Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: N/A Inventory: Katana, 10xSenbon, 10xKunai, Spiked Chains, 50ft Wire
Is is just me or do the minor summons seem pretty powerful?
They fit the restrictions and aren't powerful compared to some of the other minor summons out there.
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Karn's personality- Snake?
Hah, forgot to change that one. I originally made a snake summon; then realized someone has it at the moment. _________________ ****Midnight Shadow**** Roleplaying Characters: Rai, Sophia Saren, Willow Ria 'Kaguya', Isabella Hyuudou, Skye RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: SS Raikage ~ S-Jounin x 2 ~ Missing Nin Village: Kumo x 2 ~ Kiri ~ None Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: 440 Inventory: All have many of the following; Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon, Wire, Katana, Speacilized Weapons.
First of all, I thought it was 48 hours then bump.
Also, isn't 50 Litres of Acid a little much?, Not to mention the fact that it apparently dissolve flesh and bone in a minute. I also think the size of the boss is a little overkill, but as I don't have that much experience with summons, Ill let someone else decide.
Spoiler:
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Name: Water Pulse
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: The user gatherers chakra to his throat, before expelling it in a high-powered beam of water. This attack is not very large, but very fast and the damage dealt by the water stream is quite high.
With
Name: Suiton: Taihoudan - Pressure Cannon
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: None
Description: After forming the necessary hand seals, the shinobi will use their water natured chakra to create water and expel it through their mouth in a powerful stream. This attack is not very large, but very fast and the damage dealt by the water stream is quite high.
Since they are basically the exact same thing.
Spoiler:
Also
Name: Ape's Breath
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: By conjuring katon chakra to the throat, the user is able to exhale multiple fireballs in constant succession. The fireballs created by this technique are fast and potent, able to deal considerable damage in a direct attack.
is pretty much a weaker version of
Name: Katon: Karyuudan - Fire Dragon Missile
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: None
Description: A technique resembling Housenka rather closely, it doesn't take many hand seals and is almost the same in principle. The difference is that the fireballs created by this technique are faster and more potent, able to deal considerable damage in a direct attack.
So you might as well change that as well.
Also this isn't quite as important, but I would like to see some more detail in the personalities and the backgrounds, as well as perhaps making Makel a Major summon just to reflect his more 'advanced status'. _________________
Sucal wrote:
What ever you say Sench... I mean Syra
OzanaruSyra wrote:
First staff warning for the following reasons:
1. Flaming is against the rules and will not be tolerated.
Roleplaying Characters: Sucal Shrike Vieux Tesla Lissica Pyra Res Vil RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: E Ranked Genin Village: Mist Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: 640 Inventory: Short bow, Quiver, 30 arrows, 3 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 50 Makabishi
Considering the size of the Ape, 50l isn't that much; but I lowered it to 25, aswell as lowering his size.
Changing the Jutsu's is honestly just pointless, though I've done it anyway.
And when it comes to summons, the backgrounds and personalities don't matter as I wont be roleplaying these for anything other than combat, to be honest. Also, as I explain to you on msn, Makel doesn't need to be of an elevated rank as he is simple filing the post. _________________ ****Midnight Shadow**** Roleplaying Characters: Rai, Sophia Saren, Willow Ria 'Kaguya', Isabella Hyuudou, Skye RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: SS Raikage ~ S-Jounin x 2 ~ Missing Nin Village: Kumo x 2 ~ Kiri ~ None Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: 440 Inventory: All have many of the following; Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon, Wire, Katana, Speacilized Weapons.
Re-Bump...
Wow, bumping twice in a row. _________________ ****Midnight Shadow**** Roleplaying Characters: Rai, Sophia Saren, Willow Ria 'Kaguya', Isabella Hyuudou, Skye RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: SS Raikage ~ S-Jounin x 2 ~ Missing Nin Village: Kumo x 2 ~ Kiri ~ None Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: 440 Inventory: All have many of the following; Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon, Wire, Katana, Speacilized Weapons.
_________________ ****Midnight Shadow**** Roleplaying Characters: Rai, Sophia Saren, Willow Ria 'Kaguya', Isabella Hyuudou, Skye RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: SS Raikage ~ S-Jounin x 2 ~ Missing Nin Village: Kumo x 2 ~ Kiri ~ None Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: 440 Inventory: All have many of the following; Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon, Wire, Katana, Speacilized Weapons.
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