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Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 9:16 pm Post subject: Zephyr Saegon |
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Name: Zephyr Saegon
Age: 12
Gender: male
Height: 5 ft 6 inches
Weight: 130 lbs
Appearance: Zephyr wears black wind pants and a black sports top. He has shinobi sandals. He has a positive aura radiating from him. The looks shabby early in the morning, but is sharpest late morning. He has short spiky purple hair, and funky eyes. They are blue (where white is normally) and red pupils. He usually carries around his bo with him.
Race: Caucasian
Hair: purple
Eyes: blue outside with red pupil (genetic for now not bloodline)
Body: skinny with sign of some muscles in development
Ethnicity: Water Country (the coast)
Rank: E-Rank
Reputation: 0
Village: Mist
Bloodline: N/A
Main/Favored Weapon: Bo
Element: Water
Fighting Type/Style: Genjutsu Specialist / Ninjutsu Minor
Starting Inventory: Bo, Senbon, Wire
Personality: Zephyr is always cheerful despite inner trauma from the past. He believes that emotions help not hinder a shinobi. This is usually good, but he always tries to help to the part of sometimes neglecting himself. He can be slightly shy around new people, but quickly becomes outgoing and expresses affection through actions rather than words. He jokes around only around close friends. He can be slightly over worried for comrades lives which is the only negative he sees in emotions on the battlefield. This makes him a good support fighter, not a head on. He is the ideal teammate.
Special Abilities: N/A
Jutsus:
Henge
Bushin
Kawarimi
Bloodline jutsus: N/A
Jutsus you want to Learn:
Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique D
Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique C
Kai - Release D
Suiton: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique C
Suiton: Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave C
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background: Zephyr grew up in the Coastal regions of water country in a nice quaint village. At the age of 10 enemy ninjas invaded and razed the village to the ground. Zephyr survived by hiding in a tree nearby the village. He stood traumatized in front of his village for 2 days. Then, he aimlessly wandered from town to town. Then, since he had no money, he collasped in front of a medical unit of the Mist, who were on a mission. They took him back and restored him to full health. Zephyr then began studying at the ninja academy. Despite the trauma, Zephyr forced himself to smile. He remains perpetually cheerful. He is constantly picked on for being new and his funky eye color. He just laughs it off...
Roleplaying Characters:
No RPC
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Village: Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: N/A Inventory: Empty
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Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 9:30 pm Post subject: |
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Here I come to give teh mods a little break~
Ok first off race is, caucasian, Black, asian, alien that kind of thing. (Don't put alien I was just kidding XD) so replace it with one of those.
Apperance could be longer, though I suppose if he looks just like the pic it might be ok, but it couldn't hurt to have more on it y'know?
Title is Gennin not N/A, since Rank, and title are different, as Rank represents how strong your character is, and title represents what they go by. {as an example I am about to get an A ranked character, but she is still a gennin even though technically she would be as strong as a jonnin, just doesn't have the title.}
Personality is decent, but more detail couldn't hurt too bad, other than this I think it would pass.
You can;t be in konoha right now, either be missing from there, or be in another awesome village like Kumo, or Kiri, or Iwa, or Suna, honestly Konoha isn't all that super special awesome~
Other than these small things the profile is good, just a bit more detail, and this guy is all ready to go~ _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Hio [D-Class.Missing-Nin] [S-Rank]
Erika Guren [Jounin, S-Rank] {Guren Clan Leader}
Kaede, [Genin, E-Rank]
Chachamaru, [Genin, A-Rank]
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Rank, S-Rank, E-Rank, A-Rank Village: None/Iwagakure/Iwagakure/Konohagakure Fame: 100, 400, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 750 Inventory: See profile's, 6 Extra rank trains
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Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 9:56 pm Post subject: |
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| Pikminavenger wrote: | Here I come to give teh mods a little break~
Ok first off race is, caucasian, Black, asian, alien that kind of thing. (Don't put alien I was just kidding XD) so replace it with one of those.
Apperance could be longer, though I suppose if he looks just like the pic it might be ok, but it couldn't hurt to have more on it y'know?
Title is Gennin not N/A, since Rank, and title are different, as Rank represents how strong your character is, and title represents what they go by. {as an example I am about to get an A ranked character, but she is still a gennin even though technically she would be as strong as a jonnin, just doesn't have the title.}
Personality is decent, but more detail couldn't hurt too bad, other than this I think it would pass.
You can;t be in konoha right now, either be missing from there, or be in another awesome village like Kumo, or Kiri, or Iwa, or Suna, honestly Konoha isn't all that super special awesome~
Other than these small things the profile is good, just a bit more detail, and this guy is all ready to go~ | methinks im done 
Roleplaying Characters:
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No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Village: Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: N/A Inventory: Empty
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Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 10:08 pm Post subject: |
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lol I know, but the mods needed some help out, and I thought it would be nice to give them a bit of a break, and I have plenty of free time.
Yep sorry I didn't catch that, go ahead, and do that by specifyingwhich is spec, and which is minor, and I will give you my approval. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Hio [D-Class.Missing-Nin] [S-Rank]
Erika Guren [Jounin, S-Rank] {Guren Clan Leader}
Kaede, [Genin, E-Rank]
Chachamaru, [Genin, A-Rank]
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Rank, S-Rank, E-Rank, A-Rank Village: None/Iwagakure/Iwagakure/Konohagakure Fame: 100, 400, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 750 Inventory: See profile's, 6 Extra rank trains
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Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:56 am Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | Name: Zephyr Saegon E-Ranked Genin Mist | Don't need to put your Rank/Title there. _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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Looks fine to me. Objections? _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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