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PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:16 am    Post subject: Otaki Bloodline Reply with quote

Bloodline Name: Otaki (Cascade)
Clan Name: Seirei
Leader: Baku Seirei (Upon Clan to be Approved.)
Village: Takigakure (Origin), Unknown Residence

Clan Description:

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The Otaki clan runs its heratige back many years, although well hidden from the ninja world many famous ninja have secretly belonged to this clan, while keeping it a hidden ability from the people they come into contact with. The clan itself is rather small, only passing onto one male ninja in every generation per set of parents, this is the nature of it's power. It is unknown why the bloodline will only pass down to males, possibly the chromasomes it appears in are unqiue to the male biology. Many members of the clan find themselves becomming ninja due to their innate abilities, although it is not impossible for a member to go through life without activating the powers of the clan.

The bloodline has always been rooted to the village of Takigakure, a lesser shinobi village in the land of waterfall, the entrance to the village is kept a close secret to help stay safe from invasion as the village produces very little shinobi.



Clan Traits/Characteristics:

Members of this clans traits and characteristics tend to include oddly blue colored hair, this hair color is natural and all members are unable to dye it do to unknown reasons (The dye never bonds with the hair). Due to the nature of the bloodtype this clan only has males. The most identifiable feature of a clan member is the way they store powerful water for their technique, a crystal gourd container, approximatley 1 foot less than the height of the shinobi wielding it.

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(Size increase/decreased to the heigh of the shinobi, the guord itself is very durable, but massed produced and breakable)



Clan Personality:

Members of the clan are usually described as cold and calculating, their abilities function much better when a situation has been thoughtout and a tactic created. It is not unknown for a member to display a seperate attitude, but it is frowned upon by the other surviving members.

Bloodline Description:

The Bloodline can only be described by a living member of the clan, others will not know of its existance (unless a clan member becomes public about their powers, or reveals them in combat). It allows the user to manipulate water without using jutsu, the water itself becomes surrounded by the users chakra, strengthening its impact by a substantial amount. Many techniques have been developed by clan member's experimenting with their manipulation. The strength of the techniques are directly represented by the water being used, pure and natural water (such as the runoff of a glacier at the source) is so potent it could increase a users damage with clan techniques by very substantial amounts. (unfourtanetly such water is not easily located, and can be lost, Glacier Water is resistable to evaporation if stored properly). The second best would be taken directly from the base of a waterfall, although less powerfull and more easily lost it is easier to restore).

Bloodline Limits:

The Bloodline offers a very unqiue and usefull skill, total manipulation of water while the bloodline is activated (exlcuding single-use water created by jutsu of another). This ability is limited depending on the users rank:

E-Rank: None
D-Rank: 1 Litre
C-Rank: Full Gourd
B-Rank: Pond
A-Rank: Half of a Lake
S-Rank: Full Lake
SS-Rank: No Limitation

Unfourtanetly while the user has the ability to control the water they do lose the ability to perform jutsu, as their chakra is changed to an outerbody function. This ability also has another phase, the user must unlock the bloodlines "eyes" in order to begin manipulation, and once activated the eyes constantly drain the users chakra by a small amount (almost unnoticable, but if their stripped of chakra, they lose control and the eyes turn off).


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The eyes themselves are seen depending on the control over water the clan member has achieved. appearing most wild and unruly at the first stage, and complete at the final one.



Clan Jutsus:
Gentai Release: Ebb

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Name: Gentai Release: Ebb (Pic under Limits)
Type: Doujutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Member of the Clan, Rank D+
Description: "Ebb" is the name of the bloodline ability all members of the clan posses, but it requires unlocking (usually through a tramatic effect, the ability will manifest itself if the user is drowning almost immediatley and project the water away from the member). The ability itself is the opening of the clan "Eyes" which allow the user to control and manipulate water. This is the core ability of any clan members arsenal. (Required for all other techniques, other techniques also require the users hand movements to cordinate the water somewhat).

This eye technique can be turned off quickly, but cannot be activated once again in the same post.

Name: Gentai: Body Projection
Type: Unclassified
Rank: N/A
Requirements: Gentai must be activated
Description: (This is not necissarily a technique, but rather something commonly done with the gentai active, as such its in the smae spoiler becuase it comes with the gentai) Whiel Gentai is active the user has complete control over all forms of regular water, therefore as they control it, it can shape into basically whatever they want as long as it remains attached to a body of water the form will be constantly fed new sources of water. Users will often be seen projecting the water in the form of their own body/parts. This is done because the control over the water is done through body movements and if its a direct projection then the water will work in the EXACT same fashion as the user. (This turns into a technique of its own, see Gentai: s Avatar)


Gentai: Projectile Scales
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Name: Gentai: Projectile Scales
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Gentai must be activated
Description: Projectile Scales is a core ability for a clan member, basically manipulating the water into a form of projectile (Commonly V shaped scales), and thrown from the manipulation in masses dependant on the chakra usage. These have the same effect as a shuriken in most situation (Like shuriken these are sharp all the way around, and are only effective in large masses, the chakra required for each shuriken is low)


Gentai: Poseidons Footing

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Name: Gentai: Poseidons Footing
Type: N/A
Rank: D
Requirements: Gentai Active
Description: The user of Gentai can force the water underneath them (if such exists) to compress, allowing them to walk and use it as they would normal ground, this area is specified to what the user condenses.


Gentai: Poseidons Gift

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Name: Gentai: Poseidons Gift
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Gentai Active
Description: Poseidons Gift is a very basic jutsu, but can be potent in the right conditions, It allows the user to spew large amounts of water out of their mouth similar to a Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave, except the users water is not used as an attack, rather for the purpose of creating water to work with.


Gentai: Protective Sphere

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Name: Gentai: Protective Sphere
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Gentai Active
Description: Protective Sphere can be used both offensively and defensivly, either encasing yourself in a protective "bubble" (The bubble is tough to taijutsu of an attacker the same rank and immune to those below, but easily broken by those of a higher rank, Ninjutsu will break the bubble in most cases, and genjutsu remains the same.) the Bubble can also be used to entrap an opponent, under the same conditions. This ability requires a flow of chakra to manifest and contain, although the user remains there freedom on movement.

Oxygen flows through the bubble, so the user/victim will be able to breath whilst inside. This bubble must remain round in shape and can be prevented from shrinking and constraining a target as easily as pushing against it.


Gentai: Javelin of Poseidon

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Name: Gentai: Javelin of Poseidon
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Gentai Active
Description: Javelin is a technique attributed with being the most potent of gentai technqiues, using the water the user controls they will condense it, forming a javelin shape (this technique requires an amount of concentration), the water will continue condensing until its extremely supercondensed. The user then has two options, wield it in a charge (stabbing motion) or use it as a projectile, on eithers impact the javelin will remain condensed, stabbing the victim and as the user releases his control over the water it will burst at a rapid rate. (the force is enough to snaps bones). This ability cost 5% of the users maximum chakra to use, and requires two hands in the gentai stage.


Gentai: Poseidons Avatar

Spoiler:

Name: Gentai: Poseidons Avatar
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C/A
Requirements: Gentai must be activated, (large body of water for A rank)
Description: This in most cases is similar to the water clone technqiue, and can be used to make clones dependant on the amount of water availible. (clones/avatars appear as water, but in the form of the user, meaning there is no way to mstake them for the original). The advancement of this ability (A-Rank, Must be learned once again.) Is the user learning to control the water into a skyscrapper sized clone, the clone is only the user from the waist up, but posses any weapons they wield (still water). The A-Rank Avatar can fight on par with most summon bosses, and does not disperse so long as water remains to refill it.

(The clones/avatar is a direct replica of the user, no additions may be added. Water on the avatar itself may be used as a weapon technqiue still, but it takes water away from the avatar making it weaker.)


Ryuudo Release: Flow
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Name: Ryuudo Release: Flow (Pic Under Limits)
Type: Doujutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Gentai and all other Techniques unlocked, Traumatic Event
Description: The user can only active this ability while Gentai is in effect. While this is active the user will gain a boost to their chakra dependant on the moisutre touching their body (underwaters boost will be 50%, less acordingly). In this state the user will no longer require concentration to maintain water control on any level and techniques will become second nature, no longer requiring them to even consider the chakra their using. (Gentai remains active)

After five posts the user will return to their normal state, unable to activate Gentai for three posts, and they will lose a considerable amount of chakra, exhausting their body. The user unlocks the ability to use the clans most powerful of abilities at this stage.

Ryuudo: Rain of the Gods

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Name: Ryuudo: Rain of the Gods
Type: Kinjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: Gentai/Ryuudo Active, One use per activation. Large body of water
Description: The most potent ability any clan member can ever use, causing the weather itself to change. Water surrounding the user and created by the user will evaporate at an incredible speed, summoning a mighty rain cloud in the sky. The cloud itself will cover a large distance (1 Mile), and immediatly begin to rain after creation, The rain itself sharpened to the highest extent possible. Rain will begin slow for one post, drizzling. After that its buckets baby, all of which fall at an amazingly fast rate, impossible to dodge between, the user will remain in place while the jutsu is active, surrounded by their protective bubble, unable to stop the rain even if they try.

The rain is powerful enough to crack and destroy solid rock, usually creating a lifeless crator in the area its used (unless an amazing ability or form of cover is used to prevent it from destroying such.) This ability comes at a terrible price, the user will immediatly leave Gentai and Ryuudon after the rain begins, unable to escape their own bubble (which forms involuntarily around them). Theyre chakra level lowers to dangerous points of 2% of maximum, and their body is completely exhausted. They will require rest for alteast two posts, and even afterword will be unable to use Gentai for the remaining thread. This ability is a last resort option.


Final Release: Ushio Teishu

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Name: Final Release: Ushio Teishu (Tide Master) (Pic in Limits)
Type: Doujutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: Gentai and Ryuudo Accomplished (Ryuudo must be used in the training of this ability, once Ryuudo is activated the user must begin training after its use. Meaning the user cannot use the bloodline in the training. The training of thsi ability is treated similar to Rank training and must meet the standards of a mod and the current clan leader.)
Description: Ishio Teisho, is a title rather than an ability, and it describes a clan member who has achieved a sort of enlightenment when it comes to the ebb and flow of water, they no longer see the world as a single substance and seprate water from the world all together. In this form a users vision changes, percieving reality at .8 of its actual pace, a sort of slow motion although not slow enough to track superfast movement. The most important parts of this ability is its continual existance, it cannot be turned off and drains no chakra on its own (although chkra must still be disperesed to maintain control over water in the previous fashion). The user cannot active Gentai or Ryuudo while in this form, nor is it required. All jutsu previously allowed in one of the forms can be used in this one, and others can still be trained except for "Rain of the Gods" which becomes impossible for the user to ever use again. (although it permantly stakes the jutsu slot, unable to be removed, along with Gentai and Ryuudo).

The user remains his/her ability to control water, and even improves it, being able to control the water used by others in jutsu at the expense of the same amount fo chakra they used being expelled unto it to control it. The user also loses the need for hand movement, the water is directly contolled by the users chakra. (In which still must surround the water in a thin layer).

Listed For easy reference:
- Cannot be turned off, ever.
- Percieve everything as .8 speed. Slowing time to them slightly.
- Drains 0 Chakra on its own
- Chakra is lost when it must be replaced over water, and the initial control
- Gentai, Ryuudo, and Rain of the Gods may no longer be activated, although they lock into their previous jutsu slots, unable to be removed unless the user loses this ability.
- User learns to control all forms of water, even those summoned by others (so long as they expell the exact same amount of chakra as the other to counter and control the ability)
- No longer requires hand movement to control water, the mind is the new control system



Number of Members Allowed: 7 (Male) 1 (Female), This Will be Added Later as a Special Plot Achievement, PM if your interested. If you wish to join the clan as a male you must be a direct decendant of Seirei, or have a family related plot. Cousins are highly possible xD.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 10:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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(The Very last ability is quite magnificient, and will most likely need revamping)
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 1:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Name: Gentai: Posidons Footing
Type: N/A
Rank: D
Requirements: Gentai Active
Description: The user of Gentai can force the water underneath them (if such exists) to compress, allowing them to walk and use it as they would normal ground, this area is specified to what the user condenses.
 Ummmm, there's a Jutsu here that already kinda does that, and it's called "Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking".  O.o

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Name: Gentai: Posidons Gift
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Gentai Active
Description: Posidons Gift is a very basic jutsu, but can be potent in the right conditions, It allows the user to spew large amounts of water out of their mouth similar to a Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave, except the users water is not used as an attack, rather for the purpose of creating water to work with. (This ability spews the water at a fast rate, but the user must remain still while summoning the water, if they lose concentration the flow will stop.)
 I say make this at least A-Rank on account that you're saying that it's creating water equal to that of "Suishouha no Jutsu".

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Name: Gentai: Protective Sphere
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Gentai Active
Description: Protective Sphere can be used both offensively and defensivly, either encasing yourself in a protective "bubble" (The bubble is tough to taijutsu of an attacker the same rank and immune to those below, but easily broken by those of a higher rank, Ninjutsu will break the bubble in most cases, and genjutsu remains the same.) the Bubble can also be used to entrap an opponent, under the same conditions. This ability requires a flow of chakra to manifest and contain, although the user remains there freedom on movement.

Oxygen flows through the bubble, so the user/victim will be able to breath whilst inside. This bubble must remain round in shape and can be prevented from shrinking and constraining a target as easily as pushing against it.
 I say at least B-Rank if it's immune to attacks.

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Name: Gentai: Javelin of Posidon
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Gentai Active
Description: Javelin is a technique attributed with being the most potent of gentai technqiues, using the water the user controls they will condense it, forming a javelin shape (this technique requires an amount of concentration), the water will continue condensing until its extremely supercondensed. The user then has two options, wield it in a charge (stabbing motion) or use it as a projectile, on eithers impact the javelin will remain condensed, stabbing the victim and as the user releases his control over the water it will burst at a rapid rate. (the force is enough to snaps bones). This ability cost 2% of the users chakra to use, and requires two hands in the gentai stage.
 Being that it's B-Rank, it's going to cost a lot more than just "2%" of the user's Chakra to maintain it and such.

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Name: Gentai: Posidons Avatar
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-A
Requirements: Gentai must be activated, (large body of water for A rank)
Description: This in most cases is similar to the water clone technqiue, other than the fact it requires no hand seals and can be used to make clones dependant on the amount of water availible. (clones/avatars appear as water, but in the form of the user). The advancement of this ability (A-Rank, Must be learned once again.) Is the user learning to control the water into a skyscrapper sized clone, the clone is only the user from the wait up, but posses and weapons they weild (still water). The A-Rank Avatar can fight on par with most summon bosses, and does not disperse so long as water remains to refill it.

(The clones/avatar is a direct replica of the user, no additions may be added. Water on the avatar itself may be used as a weapon technqiue still, but it takes water away from the avatar making it weaker.)
 Because you say that it doesn't require any Handsigns, it's going to be at least B-Rank, possibly Kinjutsu.

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Name: Ryuudo Release: Flow (Pic Under Limits)
Type: Doujutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Gentai and all other Techniques unlocked, Traumatic Event
Description: The user can only active this ability while Gentai is in effect. While this is active the user will gain a boost to their chakra dependant on the moisutre touching their body (underwaters boost will be 50%, less acordingly). In this state the user will no longer require concentration to maintain water control on any level and techniques will become second nature, no longer requiring them to even consider the chakra their using. (Gentai remains active)

After three posts the user will return to their normal state, unable to activate Gentai for three posts, and they will lose a considerable amount of chakra, exhausting their body. The user unlocks the ability to use the clans most powerful of abilities at this stage.
 Because of the amount of boost of Chakra they're getting, I would make the limits to being able to use the Doujutsu again longer than just three posts.  I would say at least five.

The Final Stage seems to be quite a bit overpowered...  "Draining no Chakra"?  Not happening.  "Extended lifespan"?  How exactly?  "No copying the ability"?  That's common sense anyway!  O.o  Even the mighty Sharingan can't copy Jutsus from a Special Bloodline.  Even Kakashi said that.  O.o
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like this clan. If I can think of a good character, I'll join. Maybe a guy this time...

Oh, and it's poseidon.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OzanaruSyra wrote:
I like this clan. If I can think of a good character, I'll join. Maybe a guy this time...


No comment to my comments, Syra-sama?
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uchiha Katsuga wrote:
OzanaruSyra wrote:
I like this clan. If I can think of a good character, I'll join. Maybe a guy this time...


No comment to my comments, Syra-sama?


No, you seem to have a good handle on it.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 1:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry had to drive to montana and back up to canada yesterday. couldnt post quicker. anyways I agree with most of the changes and the final ability.. well I had no idea why but I wanted to keep adding to it... anyways Im making most of the changes.

On an additional note, recreated jutsu are becuase with Gentai active the user cannot use regular jutsu. theyre limited to the technqiues of the bloodline. (Water Collision, Clones, Water Walking, everything)

also changing it to poseidon thanks xD

Edit: Made Most Changes Suggested. Some techniques were edited to maintain rank capabilities, such as the clone (avatar, which in C rank is weaker than the original technique since they cannot be mistaken as the user, max rank being A will be re-written to include chakra and handseals downsides), final technqiue was a lol, took out lifespan, added as to why it still took up chakra (which it always did, but having the doujutsu active does not, becuase it cannot be turned off), took out no copying (lol).
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 1:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, makes sense to me.
I like this, pretty kewl :3
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bump: 2 Days. (Im trying to get this thing rolling xD, but I understand people are busy, and Bloodlines are probably hard to judge)
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks good, but I haven't thoroughly read all the jutsu.



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