Riyan Zabackie

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WickedP. · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 1:10 pm Post subject:

2 things. 1 is that google images is blocked so i cant do it and 2 i already apologized so dont get on my case about it ok

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Shadowdmn · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 1:24 pm Post subject:

So as previous Mods said;

-Appearence. You say you can't access Google Images? Use Photobucket.com Its the, if you want, more Anime-ish Google Images, in a way. Also, on Nrc, Text Appearance is more likely to get approved.

-Main Favored Weapon. What kind of Sword. Custom or Not? If custom, you need to wait 'till 100 post or get a higher member to make it for you.

-Personality. A little vague. Increase on Hard Facts of his Personality.

-Background. Looks good although you could be more vague about his Parents death. Also, if he got rescued by an Uchiha, what the hell was he doing in Oto Territory?
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Tobikuma Kobayashi
Taisei Uchiha

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Shinobi Rank: Genin, A-Rank ~ Genin, E-Rank ~ Genin, E-Rank
Village: Iwagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Kumogakure
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Ari Phoenix · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 1:31 pm Post subject:

It's not the fact your not using an Image, it's the fact that you have so little in your physical appearance description, that you need to write that up to atleast a paragraph, AKA five sentence/lines. I got a little exasperated not at you, but at someone else.
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Otori, Shizuka Miyu
Ava Kimera
Amimura, Jato
Sampson, Ashe
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Shinobi Rank: SS Chunnin-D Genin-E Genin-E Genin
Village: Missing-Kumogakure-Iwagakure-Kirigakure
Fame: 915~0~200~0
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Inventory: Fan Sword Kazemasa, 10 Senbon, 10 Kunai, 3 Blank Scrolls, and 1 Peice of Chalk -

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Ari Phoenix · Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 9:33 am Post subject:

Alright thats better, now lets see, what kind of sword, yu realize that there is over 100 different veriaty of swords out there in the world?
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Reilina(Inactive)

Roleplaying Characters:
Otori, Shizuka Miyu
Ava Kimera
Amimura, Jato
Sampson, Ashe
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: SS Chunnin-D Genin-E Genin-E Genin
Village: Missing-Kumogakure-Iwagakure-Kirigakure
Fame: 915~0~200~0
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evermember · Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 12:58 am Post subject:

Long Sword x2

i think his favered is a sword as in just swords but he owns two plain long swords
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Inzuka Charoo
Kera Hazaigo
Naru Kezempi
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Shinobi Rank: Konohagakure joinin rank A/suna rank C/ Kumogakure rank C
Village: Konohagakure/Iwagakure
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Inventory: Soul Divination , 90 senbon, 2 tekagi, 20 Explosion Tags, 5 soldier Pill, 30 Medical Senbon wire 50ft Poison Senbon 30 /

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WickedP. · Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 8:44 pm Post subject:

it should all be fixed now so hopefully im accepted

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Ari Phoenix · Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:22 pm Post subject:

Approved.

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Reilina(Inactive)

Roleplaying Characters:
Otori, Shizuka Miyu
Ava Kimera
Amimura, Jato
Sampson, Ashe
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Shinobi Rank: SS Chunnin-D Genin-E Genin-E Genin
Village: Missing-Kumogakure-Iwagakure-Kirigakure
Fame: 915~0~200~0
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Training Points: 1711
Inventory: Fan Sword Kazemasa, 10 Senbon, 10 Kunai, 3 Blank Scrolls, and 1 Peice of Chalk -

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