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Chiisuchianu
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Shihōin ChiisuchianuName: Shihōin Chiisuchianu (Last Name First Like Japanese Names)
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Height: 6’ 1”
Weight: 170 lbs
Kinda like that with brown hair/green eyes
Appearance: Chiisuchianu has brown hair which is curly on the sides, going up like wings. The rest of his hair flows wavy on his head (Similar to “hockey hair” but longer). He has green eyes, that are very vivid and bright green. His face is soft and has a pleasant look to it. His eyes are slender and he has slightly thicker (but not gross like Lee) eyebrows. His lips are supple and soft, as is his face. He is fairly attractive, and seems almost celestial or heavenly. His body is defined with muscle and strength, seeming almost cat-like. He is skinny, but you can tell he is toned and highly athletic.
Clothing: Chiisuchianu isn’t a fan of restricting clothing. His garb varies greatly from his Imperial Regalia all the way to casual everyday clothes (which he prefers to wear). However, despite this, he is most commonly seen wearing a gi suit like outfit (kinda like what Jiraiya wears when training with frogs in flashback while fighting pein). This outfit has a sash varying in thickness and he usually keeps the top portion open, exposing his chest, but also making it easier for him to throw off when fighting. This outfit has a trim on it; the trim depends on the color his outfit is, though his most common is black/white combinations or ones with gold. He usually does not wear shoes, and sometimes wraps his hands. Now that he is a Jounin he also has a black colored Jounin outfit and a light blue version Jounin outfit aswell. Along with the traditional green flak jacket. Though he either wears his flak jacket with no top or his top with no flak jacket.
While on the "lamb" as a Missing Ninja Chiisuchianu most comonly wears an outfit exactly like the picture. His flack jacket is a light tan color and his pants are black. He is well known for his desguises, changing his appearance constantly to help ward off hunter nin. He also has a black hooded cloak to hide himself and protect from the elements. He still wears his signature shoelace belt.
Race: Caucasian (White)
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Green (Vivid)
Body: Athletic (Like a male version of Yoruichi)
Ethnicity: Konoha/Land of Fire
Level/Rank: Jounin, S Rank
Village: Leaf
Bloodline: None
Main/Favored Weapon: N/A
Elements: Wind(Fuuton) and Earth(Doton)
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu/Genjutsu
Starting Inventory: Kunai, Shuriken, Wire, Ink, Brush, Blank Scrolls/Paper, and Smoke Bombs
Chuunin Inventory: Explosion Tags, Soldier Pills, Medical Senbon, Poison Senbon, and Bird Summoning Scroll
Jounin Inventory: N/A
Medical Inventory: Field Medical Kit (i.e. Bandages, Scalpel, Antibiotics/Antipoison Kit, Needles, Sewing String, Smelling Salt, Forcepts, Test Tubes, Morphine, Blood/Plasma ect.)
Strengths:
- Agile, quick on his feet and in combat due to his fast paced taijutsu style
- Good at Chakra Control
- Intelligent and skilled thinker, especially in creativity and the abstract
- High Stamina due to intensive taijutsu training
- Large Chakra Pool gained after training to become a Jounin
- Heightened Senses due to his "blindfold training" to increase his taijutsu skill
- Capable of Genjutsu and Fast Handseal usage.
Weaknesses:
- Extremely lazy and doesn't like to do much work
- Bad at making friends and not sure why
- Bad at teamwork due to his solo fighting style
- Social weakness, he is generally quiet and bad around people
Jutsus:
Basic Jutsus:
Henge
Bushin
Kawarimi
Art of water walking
Tree climbing
Rope untying
Genjutsu release
E-Ranked Jutsu:
D-Ranked Jutsu:
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
C-Ranked Jutsu:
Name: Fuuinjutsu: Charka Nyuuko no Kin [Sealing Technique: Seal of Charka Storing]
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C (For C-Ranked, Need Moderator Permission)
Requirements: None
Description: This jutsu creates a seal over the user's heart which idly stores any excess charka he/she produces for later use. This stored charka can't be used without reversing the jutsu and breaking the seal. The main problem to using this seal is that it takes longer to recover charka while the seal is active.
Name: Control Over Stone
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Element Earth
Description: This technique is more of an ability. The user has control over the surrounding stone. The greater the user's power, the greater control they have. Genin level can listen to the stone, which will tell them of things far off, as well as control surrounding rocks. Chuunin level can control slabs of stone to intercept an attack or launch at a person or object. Jounin level can make portals through solid stone that only they and others they choose can walk through. Gonin/Kage have complete mastery and can make the stone do almost anything (within reason).
Name: Control Over Wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Element Wind
Description: This technique is more of an ability. The user has control over the surrounding wind. The greater the user’s power, the greater the control they have. Genin level can detect things through air currents, as well as control surrounding wind. Chuunin level can control the wind to intercept an attack or launch at a person or object. Jounin level can greatly increase jumping distance and maneuver themselves midair or break their fall. Their control also increases allowing them to make sharp piercing or slashing attacks and more powerful interceptions respectively with each rank. Gonin/Kage have complete mastery and can make the wind do almost anything (within reason).
Konoha Senpuu [Leaf Spinning Wind]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This taijutsu attack uses a combination of speed, strength, and the element of surprise. It is a perfect move to link up with other aerial attacks. For this taijutsu, the ninja first disappears using a really fast movement. The opponent, obviously, is totally confused. However, seconds later, the attacking shinobi appears just below their opponent, and by raising his dominant leg, kicks the enemy right on the chin. This would send the victim flying up into the air. The attacker can then proceed with an even more devastating follow-up attack. Leaf spinning wind is very hard to dodge, since the movement is so fast the opponent won't probably know about the attack until he gets kicked and is already high up in the air.
Kage Buyou [Leaf Shadow Dance]
Rank: C
Requirements: Konoha Senpuu [Leaf Spinning Wind]
Description: An attack which on its own does pretty much nothing yet can inflict great damage when in combination with other jutsus. This jutsu is an aerial set-up, meaning the enemy has to be in the air for it to fully function. Once in the air, the shinobi positions himself just below the opponent while in the air. Thus, the ninja becomes their opponent's shadow, leaving the opponent unable to escape from a follow-up attack.
B-Ranked Jutsu:
Name: Fuuinjutsu: Zairyou Nyuuko Kin [Sealing Technique: Material Storing Seal]
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Scroll, Brush & Paint/Ink to write with.
Description: By writing the proper "spell" on the scroll with a big circle and the symbol for the material you wish to store inside the circle, you can open a "portal" within the circle by using your charka on the scroll, with which you can pour and dump the material indicted in the symbol written in the circle inside, but only the written material. This allows you to store a vast amount of a single substance in a small space, the amount of material one is able to store based on the amount of charka used to make the portal. To reopen the portal, all anyone has to do is open the scroll and apply a steady amount of charka to keep the portal open.
Chakra no Mesu [Chakra Scalpel]
Rank: B
Requirements: Medical History / Proper Medical-Ninja Training
Description: This ninjutsu technique is used primarily for field surgery. The ninja concentrates a powerful aura of chakra around their hand, creating a blade capable of tearing through muscles and arteries, or breaking bone, without actually breaking the skin of the person they're using it on.
A-Ranked Jutsu:
Name: False Reality Technique
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: None
Description: This genjutsu allows the user to create and manipulate false images of any form of matter even jutsu. This is done by creating the form of the desired object(s) through illusion and moving it in motion with the target(s). A skilled shinobi can make every bit of the illusion seem real and even make the pain feel real (though it only affects them mentally, through the nervous system). This particular genjutsu is harder to dispel because of the fact that it seems so real the person under the effect of the genjutsu often does not notice until after the fact... assuming what is happening is indeed reality because it follows its basic concepts unlike most genjutsu
Meisai Gakure no Jutsu [Hiding Camouflage Technique]
Rank: A
Requirements: None
Description: This jutsu renders the user invisible to the naked eye, and can deplete their presence and smell. However, special bloodline techniques or abilities are able to detect the user performing this jutsu.
Chiyute no Jutsu [Healing Hands Technique]
Rank: A
Requirements: Medical History / Proper Medical-Ninja Training
Description: A ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses chakra into the palms of their hands, creating a small ball of healing chakra. This chakra, when concentrated, can instantly repair physical damage done to another person or themselves.
Kuchiyose no Jutsu [Summoning Technique] (Bird Contract)
Rank: A (Kinjutsu)
Requirements: Approved Summoning Animal
Description: Having signed a contract in blood; any ninja with this ninjutsu technique can summon a beast, or beasts, from another plane of existence to use in battle. The user must use their own blood as a "sacrifice" to summon them, after performing the hand seals corresponding with their animal. There are many variations to the Kuchiyose, and some of which include the substitution of a life as a blood sacrifice, or even no sacrifice or hand seals at all. Not all things summoned are animals. People and items can be summoned.
Dokunuki no Jutsu [Poison Extraction Technique]
Rank: A
Requirements: Medical History / Proper Medical-Ninja Training
Description: A jutsu used to remove the poison from an infected victim. This is a very hard technique to perform and requires precise chakra concentration and control.
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique]
Rank: A (Kinjutsu)
Requirements: None
Description: Being a forbidden and advanced ninjutsu, only a few people know this technique perfectly. It is similar to the Bunshin no Jutsu since the main function is to create clones. However, Kage Bunshin no Jutsu doesn't create mere illusion clones. This jutsu can create clones that are real, and can deal physical damage. They disappear after being hit by an attack.
S-Ranked Jutsu:
Name: Shunkō (Flash Cry)
Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: Good Chakra Control, Taijutsu/Ninjutsu Specialty, Shunshin, Taught by Chiisuchianu
Description: A technique that combines both taijutsu and ninjutsu into the perfect fusion. By concentrating high-pressure chakra energy around the body the user’s speed and strength both increase exponentially, gaining a glowing appearance of energy around the user’s body. It also allows the user to fire their chakra at opponents like a blast since there is so much chakra around the user’s body waiting to be released. It can also be used to instantly neutralize an opponent's movement by stopping or reversing their flow of chakra with one’s own energy.
NOTE: The amount of chakra used for this technique varies by how much the user increases their speed and strength as well as how large of chakra blasts are fired.
Secret Oral Rebirth Technique
Rank: S (Kinjutsu)
Requirements: None
Description: This technique allows a shinobi to experience a near total rebirth of his physical form. Should a significant portion of his body be damaged in battle, he can emerge from his mouth and cast off the skin of his former body. This new body will not bear the damage of the previous incarnation; however over-use of this technique seems to greatly weaken him.
Bloodline Jutsus:
Jutsus that wants to learn:
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:2
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background: Chiisuchianu was born into the noble Shihōin Family. This meant he had obligations and duties, as well as high expectations, from the very start. As a child Chiisuchianu joined the academy as told, and carried out what was expected from him by his family. This was primarly upholding duties and being a so called “genius” at the academy. However, Chiisuchianu soon grew out of this faze, getting sick of never being able to be himself, and of all the class systems. This began to be an issue at a young age when his parents told him he could not play with some of the lower class villagers because of their family line. Chiisuchianu saw this a stupid and became sort of a rebel of his family ever since. He began to ditest authority and hierarchies, at this point he began to act more like himself and realized it was important to be who he really was. He still trained hard to be strong, this was one thing he could not get rid of in his subconscious, no matter how lazy he felt, there was always an inner drive to grow stronger and stronger each day. It almost tormented him, a lasting mimento of his family’s beliefs. He still upholds the family name and is heir to his father’s many estates, however, he has become somewhat neglected and is unsure if he will inherit them. This doesn’t bother him anyhow, though he will act in the courts for his family when needed, he prefers not to.
When at the academy he received top scores until the very last year, where he began to see things for himself. He was always top of his class, and all the girls seemed to like him. He was somewhat subject to the other children disliking him as a result. Those who took the time to get to know him found he wasn’t as stuck up and serious as everyone thought, he actually was more chill and, well, normal. He graduated early from the academy because he was so far ahead of everyone else, and there his story began.
As a genin Chiisuchianu worked hard completing missions and training with all the others of his class, but there wasnt much to highlight in this part of his life. He had great potential but he didnt make much progress until he earned his title as a Chuunin ninja. From there he began to make his family proud.
Chiisuchianu had far more responsiblities as a Chuunin but he still partook in drinking sake with all the other young "hoodlum" ninja, tagging, partying, and snowboarding whenever possible. He was lazy and really just enjoyed enjoying himself, but that didnt stop his inner drive. Chiisuchianu was quick to earn his stripes as a talented Medical Shinobi and even continued to master many difficult jutsu for his rank. His family put in a recomendation, and with their influence he was allowed special training to obtain the rank of Jounin. However, it was just before this that he was met by a most untrustworthy shinobi known as Ezekiel. Ezekiel acted nice at first, offering to teach Chiisuchianu difficult jutsu, but once they were taught Ezekiel was quick to reveal his true intentions. Ezekiel threatened Chiisuchianu's life saying that if he didnt come with him to the rock village, he would kill Chiisuchianu or make him an experiment. Chiisuchianu feared for his life, but continued training hard so that if he didnt want to defect to the Rock Village, he would at least be able to put up a decent fight...
While training Chiisuchianu was approached by the new Hokage, they talked of much on their philosophies and importance of protecting the people. Chiisuchianu saw him as a good man to follow and decided it was right to put his life on the line for such a cause. Later that week Chiisuchianu was called to the Hokage's office for some secret words... no one knows what happened during that meeting other than Chiisuchianu and the Hokage himself, but afterwards Chiisuchianu attempted a false assasination on the Hokage to convince people that he was a deadly missing ninja, after which he defected to become a missing ninja and join the rock if Ezekiel were ever to approach him again...
During his time as a missing ninja he kept in mind his morals and values for the care of the people... not just one country's people, but all people. As such he continued to train to further his cause and that of anyone who shared his ideals.
Some say he walks a difficult and broken path, while others truely see what he is trying to do for the world and deeply respect him for it...
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Teddy
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7 years of age is a tad young... Maybe bump up a few years?
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Chiisuchianu
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I made him age 10 is that okay? I'm not really sure how old ninja typically are when they graduate from the academy, however i definately want him to age as he gains higher ranks and progresses in RP.
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Teddy
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We normally suggest 12-14 as the age for Genin. 10 is ok but still young and hard to communicate with.
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MinatoNamikaze
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that signature techique and that speciality technique is not really a strength if you look at it.
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-Tries to avoid conflict if at all possible.
- Doesn’t act like he’s from noble family.
- Doesn’t always respect authority.
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I dont buy into those weaknesses balance your weaknesses with even amount of strength or more weaknesses and less strengths. As you grow so will your shinobi and as you get higher in rank your weaknesses get lower and lower.
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Teddy
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Yes... like he said, your genin's strengths put him on par with a Jounin... and that's not acceptable... your weaknesses are very unbalanced and the ones he noted a social weakness and that really doesn't count much.
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Chiisuchianu
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Alright age changed to 12 and weaknesses added. Tried to balance better. =/
ADD is harsh, I have it... =/
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MinatoNamikaze
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Okay do this, take all of your strengths and weaknesses off right? next do 3 physical strengths and 3 physical weaknesses. And do 2 mental strengths and two mental weaknesses. That is about as much as simple as it gets, but make sure you make each of them at least on part with the other.
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Teddy
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In other words...
If your Strong then your weakness would be speed.
So like this...
Strengths: Above Average Strength
Weakness: Below Average Speed.
Strengths: Above Average Chakra Pool
Weakness: Below Average Chakra Control
A balance out for your strengths.
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Chiisuchianu
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Changed, even labeled, but errr didnt quite do what AJ said, did it before i saw the post.
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Teddy
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If you can do it in the suggested way, it'll be fine. In other words, you're balancing out your S/W accordingly...
For example from another one of the Accepted Genin list... this was his S/W's:
Strengths:
-Very fast
-Very smart
-Above average of chakra supply
-Above average genjutsu defense
-High Anylitical skills
Weaknesses: -Bad at making freinds due to his recluse nature
-Very lazy
-Bad chakra control
-Below average stanima
-Bad at using teamwork
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Chiisuchianu
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Oky dokie, sry if i did kinda like your example, but its fixed.
You see I guess the reason I'm doing these S/W all wrong is 1. Cuz im nooby 2. Cuz i used airknight's character as an example (and i just now realized it was hokage... no wonder he have so many strengths compared to weaknesses =P
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Kaeor
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| Quote: | Strengths:
- Agile
- Chakra Control
- Intelligent
Weaknesses:
- Lazy
- Bad at making friends
- Bad at teamwork
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Still doesn't balance. For a good example check out other genin profiles or click Sesshomaru Ozanaru in my sig for his example.
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Chiisuchianu
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Ok
The suspense!!!
People start checking my character!!! =P
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MinatoNamikaze
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Well add another weakness I guess, something like low endurance or socially weak.
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Chiisuchianu
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Ok its done, social weakness added.
Wasnt sure low endurance would be exceptable with a fast paced taijutsu style.
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MinatoNamikaze
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add another physical weakness and I think I shall accept it.
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Chiisuchianu
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Physical weakness added. =)
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MinatoNamikaze
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Approved
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Uchiha Katsuga
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RE-APPROVED!
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Zieg
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Strengths:
- Agile, quick on his feet and in combat due to his fast paced taijutsu style
- Good at Chakra Control
- Intelligent and skilled thinker, especially in creativity and the abstract
- High Stamina due to intensive taijutsu training
- Large Chakra Pool gained after training to become a Jounin
- Heightened Senses due to his "blindfold training" to increase his taijutsu skill
- Capable of Genjutsu and Fast Handseal usage.
Weaknesses:
- Extremely lazy and doesn't like to do much work
- Bad at making friends and not sure why
- Bad at teamwork due to his solo fighting style
- Social weakness, he is generally quiet and bad around people
Really? That is the worst balance of strengths/weaknesses I have ever seen.
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Chiisuchianu
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How the hell did my character get moved out??? This is bolony. Im sorry but that actually makes me mad...
Okay, I started with 3 strengths and 5 weaknesses. Ive ranked up 3 times and your telling me that getting rid of 1 weakness and adding 4 strengths is unbalanced??? Not to mention taking a look at other characters who have "excellent chakra control" and "immense chakra pools" and other strenghts. Mine are only at like "good" level at best and I still have the same or less strengths then them, and more weaknesses...
Okay third point here... I cant edit these changes in... mods and admins have to approve them and add them in, so how the hell can it even be unfair? I feel this action of "rejecting" my character was unfair. But I suppose im not in position to say that am I?
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Sench
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http://narutorpcenter.com/sutra73432.php#73432
You twit ><
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Chiisuchianu
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Woops, and I was chewing ppl out... my appologies, but what I said about str/weak still stands
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Chiisuchianu
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Okay, here's what I did. I decided not to be part of the bloodline(Sorry Sench its just not my style). Meaning I now have no bloodline. I exchanged Shunpo for Shunshin, both of which are/were D rank jutsu. And I added a little bit to the bio and the appearance.
So it should be good to go now.
EDIT: Crap... double post, really sorry I forgot about that one...
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Sench
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Ok... I can only say that's really stupid because the main part is the same as a zanpakuto... but w/e
Re-approved
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