Kaguya, Riken [Jounin] -(Suna I guess)

Riken · Kaguya, Riken [Jounin] -(Suna I guess)

Name: Kaguya, Riken
Age: 20
Gender:Male

Height:6'1''

Weight:190

Appearence:Riken is a slender man with a very toned body, though his hair used to be black, with gaining new knowledge in the Kaguya and Shiraku bloodlines, it has turned white like all Kaguya hair does at one point, it runs down to his chest. Every morning he wraps his stomach with bandages, sort of a habit. Riken wears a black type of robe/trenchcoat always, though it is made of very soft material, and has intricate gold lining and says "Kaguya on the back. Riken wears nothing for a shirt, but as leggings he wears baggy grey pants-Headband- Riken wears his headband around his right upper arm

Race:Caucasian
Hair: White
Eyes:Blue
Body:Slim, but muscular/toned
Ethnicity:Suna(Sand), Wind Country

Level/Rank: Jounin

Village:Suna (Sand)

Bloodline:Kaguya

Main/Favored Weapon: His Bloodline

Element: Not really sure, lets go with Earth

Fighting Type/Style:Taijustu centered, uses ninjutsu as needed in battles.

Starting Inventory: 50Kunai,50Shurkien,100Poison Senbons, 10Wires, 50 Explosion Tags

Strengths:Riken has high stamina, he mainly fights using his bloodline, and uses upclose melee attacks. He also has a very stubborn and dominating personality, making him hard to intimidate, and he hardly ever gives up on a battle. Is extremley fast and strong in close combat, is very hard to predict and counter. Has standard level Ninjustu skill

Weaknesses: Ranged attackers and strong genjutsu can neutralize his attacks and be very effective against him. Strong Ninjutsu will be hard for him to overcome, has a tendency to underestimate his enemies and be very calm until it may be too late for him to use any last resorts in a battle.

Jutsus:

0.Nawanuke no Jutsu [Rope Untying Skill]
Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking]
Genjutsu Kai [Genjutsu Release]
Kinobori [Tree Climbing]
Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique]
Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]

1.Tsubaki no Mai - Dance of the Camellia(C)
Tsubaki no Mai is a form of Taijutsu. It is the second of five dance forms. Using his ability to manipulate the bone structure, a clan member will remove a long bone in the form of a sword from his shoulder. Because of the bloodline, the density of the bone can be increased many times so that it is as hard as steel. Using fluid and precise movements, targets are easily cut through within striking distance.

2.Teshi Sendan - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets(C)
Teshi Sendan is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Kaguya clan. A Kaguya will use his/her fingers to fire distal phalange bones as bullets. As the bones fly through the air, they will rotate and drill into their target once they make contact.

3.Tessenka no Mai - Dance of the Clematis(B)
Tessenka no Mai is a form of Taijutsu developed by the Kaguya to take advantange of his/her bloodline ability. It is the fourth of five dance forms. The user will remove his spinal column from his back to create a flexible bone vine. Because the vine is flexible, it can wrap itself around an opponent to rip them to pieces. Using this dance Kimimaro will also form a large flowering bone spear which he can also use to pierce any shield his opponent raises.

4.Dance of the Willows(D)-Makes swords out of hands and arms.

5.Dance of the Larch(C)-Makes many bones come out the ribcage, and many other body parts, server as a good defense against taijustu attacks, and can be used offensively aswell.

6.Hone no Bunshin(D)
Requirements:Ability to create bones (Kaguya)
Description:Like many elemental style clones, the user creates skeletons that appear and using genjutsu quickly gain skin, and take the exact looks of the user. This clone can take more hits than usual (2-3) but are slower than most other clones, when they are destroyed they fall into a pile of bones and do the *poof*

7.Koppen Ameashi(C)
Requirements:Ability to create bones (Kaguya)
Description:The user sticks his/her arms up towards the sky, sending an amazing amount of bones, or bone fragments into the air, the user does this very fast, so the opponent may not notice. The bones take the shape of small arrows or bullets and then pelt the the opponent from the sky. (Basically a shower of arrows as strong as steel)

Jounin: Extremely hard to dodge, takes strong Taijustu fighter

8.Dance of the Pines(Current Rank(C)
Requirements:Kaguya Bloodline
Description:The user will make bones come out of the ground like a forest, extreme radius at maxed level. The user can also travel in and out of these spiked bones from the torso up and can attack that way, though there are ranks.

Jounin(A)- 100 Bones, Huge Area

9. Name:Kutai Yoroi(Skeletal Armor) (A)
Requirements:Ability to create bones (Kaguya)
Description:This is one of the Kaguya's only ultimate defenses, the user creates an armor of bone stronger than any metal under their skin, making it so nothing can crush them, and the skin just comes off if attacked, no blood. The armor also makes taijustu attacks useless, probably hurting the attacker. This will be used only in extreme cases, and takes a lot out of the user.

10.Name: Red Beast style
Type: Ninjutsu for Taijutsu purposes
Rank: D at Academy Student, the use of the Jutsu will improve with age. Now (A)
Requirements: Shiraku bloodline
Description: Grows massive bone claws added huge damage bonus to his Taijutsu attacks. Gives access to a raging fighting style that is used in close combat. Blood is allowed to flow around him (Like Gaara with his sand) and can be used in different ways. This jutsu’s full power is release in several stages called a Helix.
Riken has obtained the 2nd Helix Phase(Jounin Level)

Jutsu Riken Wants To Learn:
1.Bloody Manipulator(D I believe)
2.Bad Blood(B)
3.Flesh Hook Puppet Strings(A)
4.Kankaku Gyoutai [Sensory Release](C)
5.Kuchiyose(Summoning Technique)

STORY( The "reason" i've been gone on this forum.)

BACKGROUND:
Riken had set out from his home village, the Hidden Village of Sand about 2 or 3 years ago. Before leaving, he trained extremely hard with a Shiraku friend of his, and quickly learned the Red Beast Style jutsu. After saying his farewells to Gaara and Megume, he set out into the desert.

With each new town he reached, he battled enemies, and made new friends, yet something was going wrong with his Shiraku training, he trained nearly everyday so that he could show Shinku what he'd down with his jutsu's. After reaching what Shinku had told him a year before was called the 2nd Helix, he became more bloodthirsty, and picked fights, yet now he didn't have compassion, he slayed all he came across, he thirsted for their blood and flesh... Riken took missions from private investors to murder people.

After learning to control his urge and murderous ways, he returns to Suna, his home town. He still takes as many missions where the intent is to kill so he can feed.

Riken was born in Suna, he never knew where he came from, but guessed from Kiri since his extinct(to his knowledge at that point) clan was based there. In Suna he met friends at he academy, and became very close to Megume, a fellow student, he trained with her with Gaara and Shinku, who's bloodline was a branch off from his own many generations before. He also trained with him to learn many Shiraku bloodline secrets(sorry if you think its godmode, I will try hard to be fair, approved by Lava). He doesn't know what happened to his two friends on his journey to the other shinobi nations, and hopes to be reunited with them someday.

Missions Completed:
Not sure, Lava can you help me with this? I participated in a few last time I was here, and was in the Suna/Sound war.. But for now
E:0
D:0
C:0
B:0
A:0
S:0

Uchiha Katsuga

Ok, question. Did you make this RPC before the rules was changed about Bloodlines being outside the Village? If not, I can't allow him to be in Sunagakure because the Kaguya Bloodline hails from Kirigakure.

OzanaruSyra

In all technicality he made this character in 2006.

Uchiha Katsuga

Alright, fair enough. Don't Jounins have more Jutsus than that....? Or is that what the "Learn Jutsu" spot is for?

OzanaruSyra

Maybe he's leaving slots open for now... Anyway, I don't see any major problems.

Zeke Jamora

Oh, I just remembered that I never finished the Kaguya Clan. I'll get onto that.

Sench

Kaeor

Riken

lol, that red beast technique was ALLOWED for me to have, all the jutsus I have now are from CHUUNIN so they were approved, me and crimson have an agreement that we would be able to learn each other jutsus, but i'll think about it reasonably because I understand, Lava approved the agreement btw, so don't talk about things you don't know thanks

I've been gone for a long time, and i've been on this forum and made moderator and chuunin when ranks were rarely given unless and event, so I really dont like the sarcastic shit Sench, maybe I don't know all the things that have changed in the last 7months

Sench

Yeah, the fun thing is, you can't have two bloodlines. those are the rules

Riken

No, the fun thing is, we discussed this with lava, if he wants to come in here and tell me that he takes that back then thats fine. Until then I don't want you to keep coming up and add nothing to this, except show that you can't do anything but be unnecessarily sarcastic.

Seriously, stop being the forum cool guy, I got instant hostility from you.

Sench

Not my fault you are so ready to find enemies everywhere. Or that you can't take a bit of sarcasm. Seriously, you need to chill. And just like you said, a lot of things happened since your last visit. The double bloodline thing might have worked out back then, but now, it's just plain unfair towards every other person on the forum.

Kaeor

Guys, guys cmon! Riken Sench and I were only trying to point out potential errors that we saw. In no way did we mean to get you upset. We didn't know that Lava had allowed you to have such stuff so you could've have put somewhere at the end of the profile that Lava was letting you have it. We were just pointing out potential errors that the moderators might have not been paying close attention too so don't get mad at us. Even if you had been staff before and provided rank ups with chunnin, that doesn't exempt you from your character being criticized. We are allowed to criticize the character just as long as its helpful and thats all we were trying to do our in the midst of this turmoil and pandemonium.

Though I am only speaking about the profile, whatever you and Sench having going on with sarcasm and the "cool guy" is between you two. I was just trying to criticize your character. I didn't know that Lava gave you permission. I didn't know if you were trying to get away with a jutsu or was confused and put that jutsu in your post. All I knew was that Kaguya members don't have that jutsu and I went by what I knew. I didn't know about Lava's special permission. But ok, Riken. Good luck with your character and I apologize if I offended/angered you in any type of way.

Riken

Haha, i'm very chill, I didn't come here to 'easily' find enemies, but I take it as disrespect as most people do. It's the kind of person I am, sarcastic people don't find friends too easily i've found, maybe on a forum buddy.

Look, stop saying that k? Go look at the shiraku bloodline jutsus, it says "Trained by Shiraku OR Kaguya" because we talked with Lava and got it approved, i'm going off what I was personally told, you weren't on here for it, so just... stop k?

Sorry about getting a little mad though, just right off the bat coming back I felt it was a little much with the whole dont cheat and sarcasm

OzanaruSyra

Okay, that's it, please don't post in this profile unless your a moderator, or you see specific problems. Without sarcasm please. And no offence Riken, but he's never trying to disrespect. That's just who he is. Now let's all calm down, and since It's fine as long as you don't god mod (I'll keep my eye on you).

I only see two problems. You'll need a background, and I would prefer a little more detail in the weaknesses. Maybe one more, nothing major.

Riken

Ok, before you approve if you're going to, need some questions answered.

I added 5 jutsu's to those I wanted to learn because I thought that I had to learn any new jutsu before I could use them, is this true?
Or could I just add them to my jutsu list? Couldn't find it anywhere but i'm sure it's explained someplace, thanks.

OzanaruSyra

Here's the short version: All jutsu (except basic and bloodline) need to be learned. So, you can put them in your want to learn but not your actual list yet. You can train later in RP by posting the required amount. Then you can post in template changes and a moderator will add it to your list.

Riken

Alright, added more to weaknesses and background, think i'm done.

OzanaruSyra

Wonderful. Have fun Rping again. Accepted.