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Falcon boss (pergin:no not my bird)Name: Pergin
Age: 380
Gender: male
Height: 8' 3''
Weight: 280
wing span: 12 feet from end to end 3 feet wide. (yes they're massive)
Appearence: 
Race: falcon
Hair: appearance
eyes: jet black
Body: appearance. extremely muscular especially in the chest and wings.
Ethnicity: Wind Shire Clan
Level/Rank: Nin-falcon/summoning
Village: the village of who ever summons him
Bloodline: none
Main/Favored Weapon: An adamite spear. The blade is 3 feet long and 7 inches wide, with two metal pieces that have a unknown inscription upon them that run down like wings that are used for blocking. Has the ability to create wind current, like a fan.
Element: Wind
Secondary Element: Water
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Strengths:
-extremely intelligent
-very strong
-agile
-flight
-size
-years of battle experience
-knowledge of most jutsus
Weaknesses:
-bad attitude
-some times is summoned drunk
-unwilling to obey anyone that is not extremely powerful (so he'll just go away if you call him if he doesn't deem you powerful enough)
-slow flight
-trouble fighting in small areas
-weakened reflexes from age. (hes the oldest boss i think)
Justus:
C-Daikamaitachi no Jutsu [Great Cutting Whirlwind Technique]
C-Fusajin no Jutsu [Dust Wind Technique]
B-Fuuton: Daitoppa [Wind Release: Grand Blast]
B-Fuuton: Mugen Sajin Daitoppa [Wind Release: Infinite Sand Cloud Great Breakthrough]
A-Kaze no Yuba [Wind Blade]
Background: A great and powerful warrior who is in charge of all the bird of the sky. the Wind Shire Clan worships him, and consider him to be the God of wind and storms. Pergin has fought against several opponents through out history. Everyone who has faced him has been beaten, or severely damaged from the battle. He respects the Wind Shire Clan, and agrees to do the biding of the leader of their clan only. He gives the rest of the clan access to the rest of his many servant birds. the high levels of Chakra he holds make being around him seem to be in divinity. Though he is no stronger than any other boss of a certain creature or nature.
Sample Post:
(ok tell me what i need and the background is kind of vague i know tell me what needs changed and ill adjust and probably add to the background later.)
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Uchiha Katsuga
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There are some typoes in there, some caps need to be done, and I'm not sure about the Jutsus. I know it says that he can't use them, so what's the point of putting them down?
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airknight12
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i mean he has knoldege of like every jutsu. like ones people have used infront of him you know. he can still use the ones he has thou.
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Ky Inuzuka
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No Rejected, not yet.
2 things
-he has no battle weaknesses
-Midare Senbu [Chaos Fan Dance], I can't find this jutsu anywhere, so can you show me where it is?
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airknight12
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ok added some weakness and its the only M in the tiajutsu list
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Uchiha Katsuga
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Ok, now you say that he's agile, which was from before, but he's slow at flight. Is that even possible?
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airknight12
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agile refers to balance or grace, slow flight just means he doesnt fly fast because of his size, and age.
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Uchiha Katsuga
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Ah...let me see then..... Alright, looks good now!
ACCEPTED AND MOVED!
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airknight12
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ok changed that part.
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Uchiha Katsuga
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Due to new information, this will be moved back to the "Profile" to be edited.
Needs to be edited:
Jutsu number count needs to come down to five or six.
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IamCanadian
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Its 5, I don't know where 6 came from and the basic jutsu don't count (henge, bushin, so on.)
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OzanaruSyra
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Is it just me, or does this look more like a valkeryie rather than a falcon? Which, to note, or not related.
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airknight12
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ok brought it to six jutsu's
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IamCanadian
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| Myself Earlier wrote: | | Its 5, I don't know where 6 came from and the basic jutsu don't count (henge, bushin, so on.) |
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airknight12
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fixed
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Rorschach
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Re-ACCEPTED
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