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Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 5:51 pm Post subject: Mizunaka, Ukachi *UNFINISHED* |
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Name: Mizunaka, Ukachi
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Height: 5'7
Weight: 105 lbs
Appearence: He has chestnut brown hair that goes down to around the bottoms of his ears. His skin is tanned because he lives in Suna. He wears a thin, tanned shirt with sleeves that go past his fingertips so you cant see them. However, when in a fight he brings his hands out to fight. His pants are pretty much the same and they are bandaged to his ankles so they bag slightly. He wears a blood red bandana around his neck most of the time. His eyes are green. He is fairly muscular, training with the style of his bloodline how could he not be. He wears the normal ninja sandals.
Race: White
Hair: Brown. Looks black when wet.
Eyes: Green
Body: Athletic
Ethnicity: Land of Wind
Level/Rank: Genin
Village: Sand
Bloodline: Sabaku Ken Fu
Main/Favored Weapon: Favors his fists and sand weights overall other weapons. Though he will use other weapons to strike his opponent when they dont expect it.
Element: Earth
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory: 10 Kunai
Strengths: Ukachi's strength's lie in the battlefield. Well, a certain percentage of them anyway. Obviously, his greatest strength lies in close combat, though he can attack at a range, he only uses it so he can get in close once more. His forte's in close combat include the obvious agility and strength.
His mental strength is the fact that he can plan around things. he is able to think on the fly and use unique strategies that suit his situation. He is also quite kind to virtually everyone in his village. Especially those in his clan and within their trust.
Weaknesses: Ukachi has the most trouble with ranged combat. As he was trained to run in, evade attacks and then attack. Anything that gets out of the range of his sand or fists is a challenge to hit.
His mental weaknesses reside in not being able to talk that well with people outside of his so called 'circle of trust.' Also, if he is outnumbered, he will sometimes panic and use the incorrect strategy. This will most of the time get him injured unnecsacarily.
Jutsus:
Kage Bunshin no jutsu
Kawarimi no jutsu
Henge no jutsu
Bloodline jutsus:
Mizunaka Sabaku Ken-fu(Desert Fist Syle) (Stage 1)
Jutsus that wants to learn:
Sabaku Ken Fu (Stages 2-5)
(Can I just add more later? Its a miracle I worked up the energy to do this.)
*When it says 'B/A Rank' That Means Mostly B, But one or two (NO MORE THAN two) A Ranks.*
*Genin: E-C Rank
*Chuunin: E-B/A Rank
*Jounin: E-A Rank
*Kage, Sannin: E-S-Rank
*Missing-Nin:
Remeber It matters on what you WERE when you became a missing-nin. For Example: You Became A Missing-Nin When You Where a Chuunin, that means you can only use E-B/A Rank Jutsus. This counts for all ranks.
Remeber How Much:*
*Genin:Up To 8 Jutsus
*Chuunin: Up To 10 Jutsus
*Jounin: Up To 15 Jutsus
*Kage, Sannin: Up To 20 Jutsus
*Missing-Nin: Same as Above (matters what Rank you WERE.)
Missions Completed: (All 0 For Now)
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background:
Sample Post:
This is so we know that you atleast know what RPing is and how to do it. If you ARE a noob at this Check out some RP's on this forum.
ATLEAST have 2 paragraphs here. (remeber a paragraph is ATLEAST three sentences.)
Roleplaying Characters:
No RPC
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Village: Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: N/A Inventory: Empty
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OzanaruSyra Status: Online!  Head of RPG

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Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 6:50 pm Post subject: |
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You'll have to lower his height by at least a foot to have that weight and age. And for your favoured weapon, please put a single weapon without any other information. Unfortunately I know nothing about the Sabuka Ken Fu, so you'll have to wait for someone who does. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0 Reputation: Training Points: 1875 Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles
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Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 1:39 am Post subject: |
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I realize this is incomplete.
I don't believe the stages of Sabaku Ken Fu count towards jutsu count, so in brackets beside the bloodline, just put "(Stage 1)". Your height is fine as long as you add 50-100 lbs, as you have an athletic body type. I've seen 6-foot-tall 14 year olds (my brother for example).
Since you're from Sand Village, your home country will be Land of Wind. You need to more clearly define your strengths and weaknesses. Close combat strengths can vary from agility to speed to strength. For your weapons, just try to be reasonable. You can't carry 50 kunai on your body, for example. _________________ May the shadow embrace you and guide you unto death.
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Tenshi's Gata Kaihen Changes: N/A
Kei's Gata Kaihen Changes:
-Flawless skin
-Hair 3 inches long and slightly spiky
Roleplaying Characters:
Hyuuga Malekith
Idzuna Tenshi
Ichigei Iro
Kei
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: (SS)S-rank Missing-nin (Sannin of Konoha) ~ Genin(E) ~ Genin(E) ~ Genin(E) Village: None ~ Iwa ~ Iwa ~ Iwa Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: 0 Inventory: Chakra Bo, Shoku, Twilight Bracers, 10 Smoke Bombs, 5 Soldier Pills, Coyote Contract, Tamotsu's Headband ~ Five-foot Wooden Pole, 25 Fuukiri Shuriken, 4 Kunai, 100 feet of Wire, 10 Smoke Bombs ~ 2 Pouches of Clay, Electricity-Modified Wooden Pole, 5 Smoke Bombs, Scroll (25 extra pouches of clay) ~ 5-foot Wooden Pole (with small spike on the butt end), 5 Kunai, 50 ft of Wire, 5 Smoke Bombs
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Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 1:58 pm Post subject: |
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I can understand about carrying the Kunais, but....what about that one person who had 150 ARROWS being carried on him/her? That's way too much, and it still got accepted.... O.o As for the number he can carry, I'd suggest between 10-20 for each one. As far as his height, I'd say bring it down, because, let's face it, we're trying to be "typical" here, not saying that you're brother's wierd or anything, not at all, but let's keep it basic here, ok? And he needs to put down that he's weak versus Genjutsu. That's all I can see. _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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DENIED AND LOCKED!
Due to inactivity of not editing, this RPC is now locked! PM me when you wish to continue.
_________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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