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PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 4:41 pm    Post subject: [Kinjutsu Train] The 3rd Gate Reply with quote

OOC: Training for the 3rd hachimontonkou. I need 6 points because it is B-ranked.

IC: Jikota sat steadily meditating. He had been focusing his mind, making his mind uncrowded with thoughts of anger and torment. It had been just about a month since he had left his village, Sunagakure no sato. Jikota was a man of tall stature, dark skin, with long black hair and green eyes. As he sat quietly within the plains, the calm and peaceful wind blew across his body as if he were nothing but a tree. Several insects hand seemed to crawl around his body and had been sitting there. His body and mind, and even his spirit was at complete peace and trainquility.

It had been days since he said a single word to anyone. For several days, no one has detected him within Fire Country. Nor have they said a word about him. Even though he had left his village, because Jikota had seemed to be such a peaceful person, it had appeared that they care to find out where he was. Or to find out what he was up to. Jikota didn't just leave his village on a mission, he literally LEFT his village as a rogue shinobi.

Suddenly, Jikota's eyes snapped wide open and as all the bugs were about to run away, he had quickly opened the first gate of chakra, the Initial Gate. "KAIMON!!!" he yelled at the top of his lungs. His chakra had then began to burst out all around him. because his chakra ha been released with such intensity, you could actually see his chakra around his body. Unfortunately, his chakra had burned the insects that were all around his body within seconds.

"It appears that  have grown stronger." he says. His muscles began to bulk up severely. For about 10 minutes when he had felt that his muscles were slightly giving in but, just then he had begun to open the second gate of chakra, the Heal gate. "KYUUMON!!!"

After releasing his second gate of chakra, Jikota felt ready for the next. Quickly, his body had been repaired due to the effects of the second gate. Jikota's physical strength had been multiplied by 5 by the first gate. The next objective, was to open the 3rd gate. It had been a long time since Jikota attempted to open it, and when he did, he was a Genin with not nearly as much experience as he had today. Opening the 3rd gate may aswell be a sinch for him.

At the top of his lungs, Jikota screamed in agony as he tried to open the 3rd gate. He could fell the gate literally opening inside of his chakra system, and his chakra was flying wild. Slowly, the pupils of both of hs eyes went blank, and his eyes were nothing but solid white. As his forehead protector flies off his head, and his dark skin becomes 10x darker then what it was before. Slowly, his body begins to take it's final form of the 3rd gate being open. It appears that Jikta was able to successfully open the third gate of chakra, the Life Gate.

"SEIMON!!!"

My...body...my body can barely move... he said to himself. Looking infront of him, he had saw a log that he had set up when he was ready to begin jutsu training. The log was about, 150-250 pounds, about 10 feet long and 4 feet wide. A great barnering pole for Taijutsu. Focusing all his stamina, and all of the muscles in his body, he began to attack the log directly.

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 5:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(OOC: If I was a mod... I would give you 1.5 points... possibly 2)

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 5:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 6:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: Sometimes, I have no idea what is wrong with you Mods. Seriously, I hardly made any spelling mistakes, not bad role playing either, hardly any grammar mistakes either.

IC: Jikota could feel his body giving in from the release of the 3rd gate. And he felt it giving in quickly. With no time to waste, he charged straight towards the log. When he got within 2 feet of a range from the log, he kicked the log directly into the air. Once in the air, Jikota appeared behind it and was about to deliver his combo but, he started to feel a small shock within his arm. Ignoring it, he began to punch the log several times in the middle of the log. In a humans case, it would probably be their stomach or abdomen. His arms were moving so fast, that Jikota himself could barely keep track of how many times he was punching the log.

Slowly, the log began to descend back to the ground, and because of Jikota's jump into the air, he was slightly still ascending. Unwrapping the tap around his arms, he released his lotus chain to wrap around and ensnare the log. He pulled up the 200 pound log and held his arms around the huge log. Ofcourse, next was going to be his Lotus technique, however, today, Jikota was going to add a spin to it.

Jikota and the log began to descend to the ground. Both of them were about 40 feet into the air, and they were dropping at about 30 miles per hour. Jikota began to spin at high speed in mid-air with the log with him. When they reached about 10 feet, Jikota let go of the log and then, powering all of his force and stamina into his foot, kicked the log into the ground.

KRAK!!!!

Before the log even reached the ground, it shattered into a million pieces. What was left of it were several small fragments and shards of the log. Jikota drops to the ground and feels the release of the third, second, and first gate all close. He stands up to look at the damage and smiles, giving himself a thumbs up. Though slightly, he feels the effects of opening up the chakra gates.

Jikota begins to cough heavily. Luckily, there was no blood coughed up, which meant that his body had enough physical stamina to hold up against the release of the 3rd gate. Unlike when he was a genin and passed out after releasign the first gate for the first time. Walking over to a tree, he had sat under the shade of the tree and rested. His camp was about 40 miles away, there he would be able to apply first aid.

He took off his shirt so that he wouldn't feel so hot. The sun was blazing at the time, he hadn't noticed that due to the extreme calming meditation he had earlier. He felt the cool breeze flow through the Open Meadows. Shortly after, his body hadn't felt heavy and tired anymore, but he had decided to sleep a little anyway. His mind was calm and soothed, and his spirits was not as high as usually, but he plainly felt more relaxed then usual. His body, mind and soul, was once again at peace.

It had been a few hours of sleep, and the cool yet hot afternoon, went to the dark and frigid time of night. Jikota picked himself up, put back on his shirt, and began Taijutsu training once again.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 2:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 3:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

IC: Jikota woke up from after a small bit of rest. Weirdly, even though he had never once opened the third gate, his body wasn't that weak from opening it. Most likely because his body was use to stress. But, just then, a thought appeared into the back of his head. I haven't done any basic Taijutsu training in quite a while. Perhaps if I do some old fashion training my body might recover faster fro mthe rlease of Hachimon. I mean, I have gotten quite lazy the past couple of days. My body probably isn't use to using my jutsu as it use to be.

Gracefully, Jikota got up onto his feet. He went over to another tree, where he had laid down a gaint scroll. He opens up the scroll and on the scroll, are two placements for two hands. Performing a small string of hand seals, and then molding his chakra, Jikota focused his chakra into his palm and then onto the scroll. From the scroll, summons a wardrobe.

Opening up the wardrobe, Jikota looks at his luxurious amounts of training equipment. There were several weighted clothings, that weighted from 250- to almost 800 pounds. He picked up a jump rope, and a steel barnering pole. He also picked up several weights including, two sixty pound wrist-band weights, a one hundred-fifty weighted gi, and two one hundred leg weights. Altogther, he was adding about 500 pounds of weight onto his body. It was a bit extreme, but that was exactly how Jikota trained.

Slowly, putting on his weighted clothing, Jikota could feel the weights over take his body. Oddly, Jikota was able to easily get up, he jogged in place to a moment and then waited a minute or two. "Weird, these weights don't seem to tire....Whoa!" Strangely, as Jikota put down his guard, the weights seemed to pull in on him. Within a instant, Jikota dropped to the ground. Luckily, he was able to break his fall and catch himself with the palm of his hands.

From a few miles away, you could feel the earth shake for just a bit. Animals, such as birds and squirels ran as fast as they could away from Jikota. This was no problem for him, it was but, he wouldn't let you know that. "Okay, I'll do two-hundred...no, five-hundred push ups!" he said to himself.

He seemed to have been struggling, doing his push ups. After doing about 5 push ups, Jikota could feel his arms, shoulders and his lower back cave in though, nothing like this would stop him. When he set his mind to an objective, he would finish it. If he could not finish his quest, he would punish himself with another quest. He picked this rule up from his father, who got this same rule from a Konoha Jounin in the past.

It had been about one hour, and Jikota's arms began to get adjusted to the weight. Or so he thought. "Four-hundred-fifty-eght, four hundred-fifty-nine, four-hundred and sixty!" Jikota dropped to the floor, and anyone around could hear his bones cracking. Though, as his sensei said, "If you can atleast breathe, then you can still fight." and with that, Jikota got up back onto his feet, and began to jump rope.

"If I can't do 500 push ups, then I'll do 1000 jump ropes!"

With a balzing passion, Jikota jumped up and down, jumping rope. With every jump came a small earthquake along with it. Everything around him could feel the earthshake. At around 300, Jikota's legs had began to give out on him, though, like the little train who could, he kept chugga chugga chuggin!

It was dark at night, perhaps 3 at night. Even though it was extremely late, you could still hear the the constant shakes of Jikota. Though, the shakes had gotten faster, they were still just as loud. "nine-hundred ninety-seven, nine-hundred ninety-eight...Ah!"

Jikota grab hold of his tired legs as he fell to the ground. It had been nearly an entire week of training in general, though Jikota wasn't in the mood to quit just now. With a hurt leg, Jikota stood on his good leg and began to shadow box.

"If I can't do 1000 jump ropes, I'll do.....2000 Shadowboxing punches!"

Jikota began to shadowbox, punching the air several times with no real target. First, it will be the right hand, then the left hand, and then simultaneous back and forth. Surprisingly, his body hadn't begun to given in early. Then sun had rised when Jikota reached three-hundred. He was jabbing the air slowly, but he was atleast getting his progress done. Any normal human would've died several hours ago, however, Jikota was determined to complete his training.

Quickly, without even looking at the time, the sun had rose directly into the middle of the sky. Which had meant it was 12 o'clock. With the massive heat amount of heat that the sun was giving out, one would think that atleast Jikota would take a short amount of time to rest up. Though, at this point, it'd be either Reckless or perhaps just plain stupid to keep going but, Jikota's determination drove him on.

The blazing heat nearly burned his skin to death, and create a small puddle of nothign but sweat around his feet. Though, Jikota wasn't planning on quitting not just yet. "one thousand-three hundred-ninety-eight, one thousand-three hundred-ninety-nine....ONE THOUSAND -THREE HUNDRED- FOURTY!...Just 660 more to go!"
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 3:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 4:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: If this is enough to get me one-point, then good.

IC: "2000!" Jikota screamed to the top of his lungs. He couldn't beleive that he actually completed two thousand shadowboxing punches. Barely able to breathe, Jikota could feel his chest breaking in. Falling to the ground, he began to rest his weary body.

It was about 5 hours later when Jikota awoken from his slumber. A small bird was pecking at the top of his head, perhaps seeing if he was dead or not. Now, it had been late at night, and the stars were shining bright. Whew! I haven't trained like that in a while. he said to himself. Struggling to pick himself up, he sat up and faced towards the stars. Quickly, Jikota took off his weights. His body was extremely weary, though it was no time like the present to finish his last amount of training.

Using Medical Ninjutsu, he teneded to his small woudns here and there. He had several cuts and bruises, though he hadn't mind. For once, he actually finished his training. And a nice and impowering training session. Anxious to test out his body, Jikota summoned his wardrobe, placed his weights back into the wardrobe and then walked back into the tree's that were on the outskirts of the meadow. In the tree's he then unsummoned his wardrobe back into the scroll.

Finally, Jikota look at a tall tree. The tree was about 15 feet tall and a nice and firm tree. To test his new body Jikota was going to strike the tree down. My body probably didn't get much stronger. he said to himself. With a single jab, Jikota demolished the center of the tree without using much power.

"But?! I barely used any of my force.....If I'm able to do that. Then I wonder what I can do with the 3rd gate?"

Focusing all of the energies from his left over amounts of Stamina, Jikota began to open the celestial gates of chakra. "Kaimon!......Kyuumon!" he said as he easily opens the first two gates without a breeze. Jikota felt his body returning to 10% health, aswell as his muscles tightening up. Finally, his skin began to get much darker as he releases the 3rd gate of chakra, the Life gate.

"Seimon!" Jikota said, easily releasing the gate. Suprisingly, even with the small amount of training he made, he made a huge progress towards his overall goal to become a stronger shinobi. Even though the gate hadn't seem to make Jikota tired at all, he quickly closed the gate.

"I created a lot of commotion. I'm quite sure Konoha might be sending their shinobi to investigate. I'll cover up my tracks and hang low for a few days. Atleast enough time for me to rest."

Gathering his equipment together, Jikota headed towards a small cave on the outskirts of the meadow. Though, he would later on return to the Open Plains to proceed in opening the 4th gate.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 4:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: I'm done Kinjutsu training, close it up, I'l lstart another topic for gate # 4.
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