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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:09 am    Post subject: Yuutsu Mikake Reply with quote

Name:Mikake, Yuutsu
Age:13
Gender:female
Height:5'6"
Weight:110 lbs

Appearance:Yuutsu has shoulder blade length white hair and wears a leather no sleeves vest studded with gold tiger heads (her family symbol). She wears leather gaunlets on her forearms, and never leaves anywhere without her schimitars. Wears leather long shorts.

Race:human
Hair:white
Eyes:amber
Body:slim/athletic/tall
Ethnicity:white

Level/Rank:Genin
Village:Iwagakure
Bloodline:Mikake clan (like the Kiba clan except with big cats w/ tigers as the main branch)
Main/Favored Weapon:twin schimitars (a middle eastern sword with a sharp curve)
Element:fire
Fighting type/Style: Genjutsu and taijutsu
Starting inventory:Kunai x10, shuriken x10

Strengths:Genjutsu and taijutsu

Weaknesses:ninjutsu

Jutsus:

Bloodline jutsu:Yabure Tamashi no jutsu{Tearing Soul Technique-Genjutsu} Benitora no Tsume no jutsu {Crimson Tiger's Claw Technique-transformation like Kiba and Akamaru's jutsu}
Jutsus that wants to learn:

Missions completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: Yuutsu is the only daughter in the Mikake Clan and is usually shunned for her unique features. She is the third in her family to earn the title of Benitora (Crimson Tiger) at such a young age and aims to pass her father in skill and strength. She is highly defensive and short tempered but compassionate. Not one to trust people much, Yuutsu's only companions are a panther named Fushigi and a white tiger named Aoi.

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No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
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Shinobi Rank:
Village:
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Empty
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

1.  Race is not human.  Its white, black, asian, and such.

2.  You need your bloodline approved

3.  There is no Iwagakure at the moment.

4.  Genin can't wield scimitars

5. More strengths and weaknesses

6.  Ethnicity means what country do you come from, such as Fire Country, Wind Country.

7.  You start off with the three basic jutsus.  Henge, Bunshin, and Kawarimi

8.  Need more information in your history
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Roleplaying Characters:
Kaeor Arumashi
Sesshomaru Ozanaru
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Kage ~ Jounin
Village: Iwagakure~Sunagakure
Training Points: 0
Inventory: Kunai x6, Shuriken x 15, Poison Senbon x30, Nodachi strapped at his left waist and hiltless katana at his back, Explosive Tags x15, The Harvester~x9 Kunai, x18 Senbon, x30 Shuriken, x1 Wakishizi, x1 Katar
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Forum Credit: 14

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 7:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Another thing to add is athletic / tall / slim are three different body types. They're not quite the same either. And for that matter your character is extremely tall and heavy for her age.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Kidaku Itichi
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin
Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure
Training Points: 185
Inventory: 1 Katana
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 5 FC

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

1.  As far as the Bloodline, as Kaeor pointed out, you'll need to get it approved because that's a Custom Bloodline.  If you want it approved, you can ask someone who meets the requirements to post it for you, or take another Bloodline, or not have one at all.

2.  Though they are three different body types, one CAN be like that.  I'm 6' tall, slim, and kinda athletic.  ^_^

3.  Iwagakure is the Rock Village, since we don't have that, you'll have to fix it to either Konohagakure, Otogakure, Kirigakure, or Sunagakure.

4.  As noted, can't have Schimitars.  Genin can only have basic weapons like Kodachis, Wakizashis, etc.  Basically, small weapons.

5.  Definitely need more Strengths and Weakness, as well as putting a little detail into them.

6.  Work on everything else that was noted.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 12.5

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uchiha Katsuga wrote:
1.  As far as the Bloodline, as Kaeor pointed out, you'll need to get it approved because that's a Custom Bloodline.  If you want it approved, you can ask someone who meets the requirements to post it for you, or take another Bloodline, or not have one at all

4.  As noted, can't have Schimitars.  Genin can only have basic weapons like Kodachis, Wakizashis, etc.  Basically, small weapons.



Custom's are closed.

Scimitars are allowed and also they must be come made, Do not say, He can't.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Ballian Mizunaka
Fuji Aomori (The Joker)
Kawada Sun
Kogi
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Kazekage~~~A Rank Missing nin
Village: Suna~~~None
Training Points: 0
Inventory: Fuji's sakura, Summon scroll, Kantana and scroll of rasegan, Holy grail
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Forum Credit: 121

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kaeor wrote:
1.  Race is not human.  Its white, black, asian, and such.

2.  You need your bloodline approved

3.  There is no Iwagakure at the moment.

4.  Genin can't wield scimitars

5. More strengths and weaknesses

6.  Ethnicity means what country do you come from, such as Fire Country, Wind Country.

7.  You start off with the three basic jutsus.  Henge, Bunshin, and Kawarimi

8.  Need more information in your history


I'm not the one who said it first....  O.o
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 12.5

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DENIED AND MOVED!

Due to inactivity, this RPC is denied!  PM me, or another Mod./Admin., if you wish to continue.
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 12.5

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