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Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 7:22 pm Post subject: Yuu Aburame |
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Name: Yuu Aburame
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Height: 5’ 6’’
Weight: 139 lbs.
Appearance: Yuu is a very mysterious girl with mysterious looks. She dresses in all black and has black hair and black eyes. Her hair runs over her shoulders. Her jacket is black with a high collar and a hood that is always on. The high collar hides most of her face along with the hood. She also has long black sleeves that cover most of her hands. Her shirt is black along with her pants and her ninja sandals. And on the back of her jacket is the word death in big red Japanese letters. And last her black sunglasses.
Race: White
Hair: Black
Eyes: Black
Body: Thin
Ethnicity: Konoha
Rank: E
Village: Konoha
Bloodline: Aburame
Main/Favored Weapon: Tanto
Element: Fire
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu[Primary], Taijutsu[Secondary]
Starting Inventory: 20x Poison Needles, and 1x Tanto
Personality: Strange. That is the only word to describe this person. She is nice yes, and kind yes, but she is very strange. She loves bugs and spiders and would do anything for them. She loves to collect and keep bugs and or spiders in her room. She will go everyday to catch and study new bugs or spiders. She loves them with all of her hart. But her favorite bugs are wasp, mantis, and the black widow.
Special Abilities:
Name: Kikaichu Ishoku
Requirements: Member of the Aburame Clan
Description: This special ability is performed on all Aburame-Born in the early stages of childhood. It is performed by a team of Aburame Medical-Nin. First of all, the patient is placed unconscious at which points hundreds of small holes are made all over the body, leading directly to the chakra system; allowing the bugs to leave the body at will. Once the holes are created, an Elder of the Aburame Clan will place a singular Kikaichu bug on one of the wholes, which will burrow into the patient. Once the bug has entered the body, it will begin to burrow tunnels through the body itself, connecting them up to each hole. As it does this, the bug is constantly multiplying. This continues for several hours, even days in some cases; until finally, a colony exists within the body.
The Kikaichu Bug
The Kikaichu Bug is an interesting creature. It lives inside the user and feeds off of their chakra. In return, it serves their bidding via telepathy and attacks other Shinobi. It does this by simply landing upon them and feeding off the opponent’s chakra, under the direction of the host. The bugs can also be used for tasks such as clogging an opponent’s windpipe etc.
Jutsus:
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Body Substitution Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Naturally, it won't work with another person unless their skill gap is enormous, and the object to replace oneself with must be close in size and weight to the ninja themselves. This technique must be set up a little ahead when fighting skilled opponents, otherwise, you may end up getting struck because you wouldn't have enough time to use it.
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents. However, it does not grant one the properties of said objects or skills of that person, meaning turning into a weapon will not allow you to cut an opponent and turning into a dog will not give you a great sense of smell.
This technique can also be used in conjunction with someone, who may a person, a pet or a summoning creature, in which case it is called Konbi Henge (Combination Transformation). However, its principles remain the same.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
Name: Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: A primary offensive Ninjutsu for any fire user, it requires few hand seals and not much chakra. The user will take a breath and exhale a ball or stream of fire. In the former case, it can be launched in any direction, but its speed is not very impressive. In the latter case, it must be aimed at an opponent on the ground within twenty feet of the user, but is executed much faster.
Bloodline jutsus:
Name: Kikaichu Tracking
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Aburame Clan
Description: A simple tracking Jutsu used by the Aburame Clan. This is performed by the user placing a female Kikai Bug on the opponent. The bug is so small and light that it should not be noticed. Once this is done, the Kikai Bug gives off a scent only smell able by Male Kikai Bugs of the same colony. This scent allows the Male Bugs to be able to pin-point the location of the female bug. Thus, the User knows the exact location of the female bug at all times.
Jutsus you want to Learn: A lot
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background: She has a very mysterious past but this is all that is known. She was born in Konoha and is part of the black sheep clan, The Aburame clan. At age 12 she was put under the Aburame clan sugary. She was one of the best and quickest learners of her clan. She fell in love with bugs and spiders at age 13. Also at age 13c she took a IQ test. She came out with an IQ of 140 and is pretty darn smart. The teachers were stunned. At age 14 she passed the ninja academy at the age of 14. The rest is unknown.
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Village: Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: Inventory:
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Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 7:31 pm Post subject: |
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Here's what I see wrong:
1. Need more in your "Background".
2. Put a space between your Basic Jutsus and your Katon Jutsu, so it'll be read easier.
3. Put a space between your Katon Jutsu and your "Jutsus Want to Learn". _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
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Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 8:32 pm Post subject: |
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Would like a little more on the "Background". _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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