Tsubame Raptor [Konoha|Jounin]

Rin Shouten · Status: Offline Trainee Joined: 01 Oct 2007 Posts: 857

Name: Tsubame Inuzuka
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Height: 6'
Weight: 158 lbs

Appearance:

Tsubame chooses to hide his real form under many layers of clothes, also hiding any weapons he may be holding. He stands around five feet eleven inches weighing in around one hundred fifty-five pounds. Which is approximately one hundred seventy centimeters, and around sixty-one kilograms.

He has short, spiky auburn hair with a slightly red tint to it, which seems slightly shaggy. His eyes are green primarily because of the genes that flow in his body of the Raptor bloodline. Though he is very proud of the Mochugan that he poses he chooses to hide it from those whom he may fight. He hides his eyes behind a pair of contact lenses. They are small round lenses that match his current eye color; they are just large enough to hide his white eyes behind them, giving the eyes a black tint instead of the normal color. This gives him the advantage of keeping his Raptor heritage a secret from his opponents. He is fairly pale in skin tone, due to the amount of clothing he wears. His body is muscular and agile due to extensive Taijutsu training.

His clothing is seen as complicated; it would take quite a bit of time in the morning to dress into the style he has chosen. It would also at first be somewhat complicated to be quick moving and flexible, but in due time he’s grown used to it and become very agile despite the layers. It would still appear to most that he would lack that agile sense of fighting. The first layer of his outfit is a simple white long sleeved shirt, along with a pair of loose fitting brown trousers. He wears a pair of back strapped boots that his trousers overlap slightly. He also wears white bandages up his right arm, which boasts a much shorter sleeve. He wraps only part of his hand in the bandages. His second layer is a brown-hued long coat of a velvety material with a high neck piece and a somewhat sand-colored piece of clothing handing out of the back of the coat. He wears a dark brown band around his abdomen around the brown coat and some sort of white belt.

His layer style of clothing would come off as heavy and just bothersome and at first Tsubame was in that same assumption but with in days he grew used to it and pushed himself to train in it every day. One thing can be sure about it, it doesn’t breath well, keeping him sweating underneath it, and he uses that to train his body even more.

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Personality:

Tsubame seems to have two different personalities that are the similar at the same time. The first side of his personality shows itself during his everyday life. For the most part Tsubame is a calm and relaxed individual. However, while with his friends or loved ones he has no problem joking around. He loves to be around other people. He rarely yells or gets hotheaded but at the same time he can laugh and play with the best of them.

Even during training when his exterior seems to be the model for concentration, his mind is wandering. He is constantly thinking of ways to improve his jutsu.

The other side of his personality comes out during a battle. His mind no longer wanders, his face stays unflinching, and his stare unwavering. He is in full concentration watching and examining his opponent with the utmost care. Tsubame never makes the first move as he waits for the enemy to flinch and strike first. His fighting style is very similar to his demeanor at the start. His moves are very small unless a large motion is called for.

His personality is what some might call the perfect one for a shinobi, showing no emotion even in the heat of battle.

Race: Asian
Hair: Spiky brown hair that frames his countenance.
Eyes: Green
Body: Athletic
Ethnicity: Hi no Kuni

Level/Rank: Jounin
Village: Leaf
Bloodline: Raptor Clan
Main/Favored Weapon:
Element: Fire; Lightning
Fighting Type/Style: Taijtusu, Ninjutsu

Strengths:

~ Tsubame is able to move and hit as if he was a Taijutsu Master due to the intense training that he had gone through.

~ Tsubame is a strategic prodigy, able to develop counter-effects for a jutsu after only a few uses.

~ Tsubame is slightly more skilled in Ninjutsu than the average Jounin

~ Tsubame possesses a level of chakra that is roughly eight times the average Jounin.

~Tsubame's chakra control is somewhat greater than that of an average Jounin.

Weaknesses:

~ Tsubame is more susceptible to Genjutsu than average Jounin.

~ Tsubame cannot resist the female species.

~ Tsubame isn't able to take much torture.

~ Tsubame's endurance is somewhat lower than a Jounin's.

~ Tsubame is lazy and careless.

Jutsu Slots: 16/16

Jutsus:

Basic Jutsus:
- Henge no Jutsu (Basic)
- Bunshin no Jutsu (Basic)
- Kawarimi no Jutsu (Basic)
- Nawanuke no Jutsu (Basic)
- Suimen Hokou no Gyou (Basic)
- Kinobori (Basic)
- Genjutsu Kai (Basic)

Learned Jutsus:

<D-Rank>

Name:Konoha Shunshin no Jutsu [Leaf Instantaneous Body Skill]
Rank: Ninjutsu
Requirements: None
Description: The user will be able to disappear from previous current position in a flurry of leaves and reappear elsewhere. The distance they reappear to depend on the amount of chakra they choose to use.

<C-Rank>

Name:Hayabusa Otoshi [Peregrine Falcon Drop]
Type: Taijutsu
Requirements: None
Description: The attacker grabs a falling opponent by their ankles, wraps his legs around their waist, and drives them head first into the ground.

Name: Houshou [Crushing Fist]
Type: Taijutsu
Requirements: None
Description: A taijutsu technique where the ninja palm strikes their enemy, hurling them away. With impressive strength, this technique could be quite devastating. This move is capable of knocking an opponent approximately 30-40 feet back

Name: Konoha Senpuu [Leaf Spinning Wind]
Type: Taijutsu
Requirements: None
Description: This taijutsu attack uses a combination of speed, strength, and the element of surprise. It is a perfect move to link up with other aerial attacks. For this taijutsu, the ninja first disappears using a really fast movement. The opponent, obviously, is totally confused. However, seconds later, the attacking shinobi appears just below their opponent, and by raising his dominant leg, kicks the enemy right on the chin. This would send the victim flying up into the air. The attacker can then proceed with an even more devastating follow-up attack. Leaf spinning wind is very hard to dodge, since the movement is so fast the opponent won't probably know about the attack until he gets kicked and is already high up in the air.

Name:Konoha Kage Buyou [Leaf Shadow Dance]
Type: Taijutsu
Requirements: Konoha Senpuu [Leaf Spinning Wind]
Description: An attack which on its own does pretty much nothing yet can inflict great damage when in combination with other jutsus. This jutsu is an aerial set-up, meaning the enemy has to be in the air for it to fully function. Once in the air, the shinobi positions himself just below the opponent while in the air. Thus, the ninja becomes their opponent's shadow, leaving the opponent unable to escape from a follow-up attack.

<B-Rank>

Name:Konoha Shofu [Leaf Rising Wind]
Type: Taijutsu
Requirements: None
Description: Using quickness and agility, the user will do a swift upwards kick at his opponent or at a weapon his opponent is wielding thus knocking it out of their hand or grip.

Name: Shishi Rendan [Lion Combo]
Rank: Taijutsu
Requirement: Konoha Senpuu [Leaf Spinning Wind] / Konoha Kage Buyou [Leaf Shadow Dance]
Description: A Taijutsu technique following the Kage Konoha Buyou [Shadow Leaf Dance], putting both the ninja and their opponent in the air, giving the attacking ninja the advantage. Four separate blows are delivered: a roundhouse kick, followed by a powerful backhand blow, followed by a driving blow to propel them towards the ground faster, and finishing with a hard-hitting axe kick into the ground, reinforcing the blow. This technique puts a great deal of strain on the user's body, which is why it is concluded that it is not a technique one could come to rely on

<A-Rank>

Name: Katon: Karyuu Endan [Flame Type: Fire Wall Attack]
Type: Ninjutsu
Requirements: None
Description: A Katon (fire element) ninjutsu technique where the ninja inhales deeply, drawing in a full chest of air. They then exhale, producing a very wide stream of flames that approach their target as a huge wall. This technique however uses an extremely large amount of the user's chakra and cannot be used frequently.

Name: Katon: Ryuuka no Jutsu [Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique]
Rank: Ninjutsu
Requirements: None
Description: This Katon (fire element) ninjutsu is believed to be the one of the strongest jutsus of the Katon series. This ninjutsu however requires a lot of chakra, concentration, and preparation time. A few diverse hand seals are done, and after gathering all the chakra in his mouth, the ninja will create so much flame that a red-hot fire will light up around them. All that chakra is then converted into fire inside the ninja's mouth, and it is all ejected at once, creating an extremely long blaze of fire, going directly to the opponent. This technique is straight, fast, and strong. It is most likely to be used after the enemy has been immobilized, because with such large amounts of chakra being used, the user cannot simply afford to waste it all by missing. It has to be a sure direct hit or the user will be considered a "sitting duck" while they take the time needed to recover.

Name: Rairyu no Tatsumaki [Lightning Dragon Tornado]
Type: Ninjutsu
Requirements: Electricity Creating Weapon
Description: Gathering electricity onto one spot, the user spins around very quickly, forming it into the likeness into a head of a dragon. Once lightning is drawn upon his body, a spinning current will occur affecting anyone or anything in the area, temporarily trapping them in a spiral-like vortex and causing great damage. This is a fairly destructive jutsu.

Bloodline Jutsus:

<E-Rank>

Name: Hayabusa Jikei - Peregrine Falcon Style
Type: None
Requirements: Must have approved Falcon nin-pet, they are: Gyrfalcon(Earth) Barbary Falcon(Wind) Peregrine Falcon(Fire) Lanner Falcon(Lightning) Peale's Falcon(Water). Ninja must be very energetic and have a high chakra flow.
Description: Each ninja in the Raptor clan specializes in a certain bird fighting style that defines what Jutsu they can learn and how they use it. The Hayabusa is a more direct style as it’s ninja specialize in fast Taijutsu and Ninjutsu techniques that require a lot of chakra and control. Their Torioite Furaito takes more chakra for lift but extra chakra doesn’t need to be used for faster flight. Hayabusa users rarely use Genjutsu. This style’s Mouchougan can track faster movement much easier then the other styles.

<C-Rank>

Name: Hayabusa kencho Hirate – Peregrine Falcon striking palms
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Hayabusa Jikei(Peregrine Falcon style), Opponent must be positioned in the air first.
Description: The ninja will first follow their foe into the air by use of their Torioite Furaito(Bird in flight) striking ether the back or chest from the underside with their dominate palm sending them higher and faster into the air. The ninja will then fly over their opponent and thrust their dominate palm down on top of them using the force of their Torioite Furaito(Bird in flight) to send them crashing to the ground or other object.

Name: Torioite Furaito – Bird in Flight Level 2
Type: Ninjutsu (Bloodline secret tech)
Hand Signs: Hold Bird to focus chakra
Requirements: Must be of the Raptor clan.
Description: This is the Kekkei Genkai of the Raptor clan. As its name suggests it allows the ninja use of their chakra to fly in a pattern similar to their bird partner. A Gliding partner takes less chakra to get airborne wile an air current is present. However, much more chakra is required if no current is present. A partner with smaller wings requires more chakra to get airborne, but requires no extra for the faster flight they are known for. As with level 1 the ninja needs to hold the Tori hand sign to release their chakra. With their body wrapped in chakra the ninja just needs to direct their chakra for propulsion. Also as with level one, should the flow of chakra be stopped the ninja will fall out of the sky.

<B-Rank>

Name: Housenka Bugu - Phoenix Flame armor
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand Signs: Hold Bird to charge chakra, then Boar, Dog, Bird, Dragon, Horse, and Tiger
Requirements: Must be or, trained by a member of the Raptor clan.
Description: The ninja first releases an intense chakra from every part of their body wile holding the bird hand sign. Once this is done the ninja then follows up with the following, Boar Dog Bird Dragon Horse Tiger, hand signs. The chakra around their body then heats to 300F. The ninja can focus this armor to any parts of their body.

Name: Hayabusa Tsuishi * Kencho Tsume – Peregrine Falcon Death dive (Striking talons)
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Hayabusa Jikei(Peregrine Falcon style), 6 small shuriken, Hunting Hawk or other air technique must be used first.
Description: The user will first position their opponent high in the air then fly well above them. They will then fly at their target at an increasing speed. Once in range they will strike their opponent with the 6 shuriken placed, 3 on each hand, 1 between each finger. The strike can be a punch or a swipe. The ninja will then reposition them selves for another strike. This will continue until their target hits the ground or counter attacks.

<A-Rank>

Name: Mouchougan (Raptor eye) Level 3
Type: Bloodline
Requirements: Must be a member of the Raptor clan.
Description: This is the Dojutsu of the Raptor clan. It allows the user and their Bird of prey partner to use each others eyes. The most advanced version of the Mouchougan. When this Dojutsu is activated the ninja’s eyes split down their middle and open to a bird like design. In addition to the effects of the level 2 Mouchougan, the user’s own vision gets enhanced to that of their bird partner. The chakra strain at this level is great and only Jounin level ninja or higher should use it.

<S-Rank>

Name: C-4 - The user will create a huge doll. This doll is a gigantic version of the Exploding Clay user. Forming a Hand seal, the doll will explode, and release tiny microscopic bombs which disperse into the air when the giant version pops. tiny bombs enter the body and then explode, destroying the body from within. However, this Exploding Clay doesn't do much good to one who has Lightning as an Element. The more stronger one's chakra is, the more longer it will take for one's body to completely disintegrate.
Requirements: Exploding Clay Mouth's

Jutsus that wants to learn:

~ Torioite Furaito Level Three
~ Houenjou no Jutsu
~ Raikiri

Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background:

As a child, Tsubame's was raised quite ordinarily. Nothing seemed to happen in his life for quite some time. Raised with what was considered the norm, he lived a peaceful life until about the age of eight. His mothering having died from an unknown illness at the age of eight, as his father being called away for a war and dying, he was left alone with nobody else but his sister, Midori.

Having a troubled life since then, Tsubame tended to love watching birds who seemed quite carefree. They fascinated him in every way, the way they moved, the spoke, even they way they looked. Allowed to ensue his interests, Tsubame's father often crafted toy birds for him to play with, usually seagulls, a bird he had never seen, but only been told about from the land of Waves. This bliss however was to end. Once reaching age to enter the academy, he was forced to enter under terms of acceptance within the Orphanage, and due to the fact that he had no come previously, he reluctantly accepted.

As a student at the academy, Tsubame was often excluded from activities. Though recognized for his artistic carvings, he was often shunned for his love of birds, which closely resembled his father and his own work. Mocked for loving such things, he often remained secluded through out his time at the academy. Excelling at Taijutsu and Ninjutsu, he was hailed as a prodigy by his clan; however he was mock as careless and lazy by his teacher.

In his waning days of being in the academy, Tsubame was approached by an old man who had told Tsubame that he knew his mother, and that his name was Shakaku. Before Shakaku, Tsubame passed a rigorous flight test and then was given his chakra Egg. Tsubame treasured this Chakra Egg as the man had told him to do, making sure to incubate it each day as he was instructed. It was also this man shakaku who gave the young Tsubame his first place to stay outside of the orphanage.

Graduation from the academy came early for Tsubame, as he mastered both Mouchugan and the art of Gliding at the young age of nine and was hailed as a Genin. Tsubame yearned to prove himself to those who had refused to involve him and called him lazy and careless. Eventually as he began to take several missions he found himself growing in prominence. Accepted finally into the rank of Chuunin after a gueling exam, he was finally accepted.

The first section of the Chuunin Exam was easily completed due to his nin-Pet Kurenai, his phoenix, as was the second portion. He served as scout for the three-man team he belonged to, and made sure that they didn’t run into any excessive trouble, even serving the team by catching and cooking their food. Tsubame formed the strategies during battle and the other two members, a member of the Inuzuka clan, Tamotsy Inuzuka and a Genjutsu specialist known as Renima Henjay followed them completely, this was at theage of sixteen.

Once accepted as a Chuunin, Tsubame and Tamotsu of the Inuzuka Clan become good friends, they often went on missions together, whereas Tsubame would scout ahead with his Mouchugan and Tamotsu would make sure that they weren't ambushed. This was the best times of Tsubame's life, and when his carefree spirit was allowed to roam possibly the most. Tubame spent much of his time, and according to Shakaku too much of his time with Tamotsu either just hanging out or going on missions.

As he lived within Konoha as a Chuunin, he grew accustomed to the place and found himself among those of his own. There he mastered their arts of Katon, often finding them quite useful. During a B-ranked assassination mission he was forced to flee cloud. Having taken off with the sound nin, Sazaku, he soon found himself on the run, fleeing with the Raikage's Hunter-nin. Though there is no evidence, the village of Cloud may suspect Tsubame to be a culprit. What was done with the corpse? Some say he disposed of it, others suspect it was for his own deviations.

Several months after his disappearance, Tsubame was again later spotted in cloud. Disguised as ANBU during one final A-ranked mission, he returned to this village to inspect the matter of affairs. Seeing all in order he sighed and again left the village once again. After years of wander, Tsubame returned to Konohagakure at last, where he once more encountered the old man who finally revealed what he was, of the Raptor Clan that had been nearly destroyed. Shakaku began training Tsubame in the arts of the Raptor Clan's Kekkei Genkai. When he returned to the Hokage Building, Tsubame received a field promotion to the rank of Jounin for the service he has done for the village. Feelings of uncertainty, that he did not deserve what had been given to him crept within Tsubame, causing him to train without respite. Mastery over fire and thunder was assured as he also concentrated on increasing his Taijutsu abilities as well. Once being field-promoted to Jounin status by Renima Henjay, Tsbubame spent cosiderable time with Tamotsu, strengthening their bonds until Tamotsu himself became Hokage.

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Roleplaying Characters:
Rin Shouten
Sazaku Norimune
Tsubame Inuzuka
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Gonin ~ Jounin ~ Jounin
Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure ~ Konohagakure
Training Points: 240
Personal Stats:
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Prowl NightWolf · Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 2:01 pm Post subject:

As the creator of the Raptor clan I would like permision to judge this profile. I think it can work. It says that he hid his identity thus not letting anyone know he was a Raptor. He is old enough to have been in the mission that Killed most of the members, though he would have been a bit youger. Here is what I see wrong clan wise:

You have the Hayabusa Jikei(Peregrine Falcon Style) yet your background says you have a Phoenix nin-pet. If you want this style then you need the Falcon Nin-pet listed next to your primary element. Since your first element is Fire, then a Peregrin Falcon would be your pet.

Every Raptor clan member has solid Green eyes. The same as every Hyuga has white. The Black contacts are good, but his natural eye color is green. This should be listed.

you still need more detail about how you got your nin-pet since you didn't start of knowing that you were a Raptor. Because of this It is likely that you father was not a Raptor but your mother was. If he is a Raptor then he must have passed the flight test. Saying "Once reaching age to enter the academy, he was forced to enter under terms of acceptance within the Raptor Clan, a clan he had not know he was a part of until this point. Needing a home he reluctantly agreed and entered." isn't good enought.

Makura no Jutsu – Total Darkness Technique is an Fukurou Jikei(Owl Style) Jutsu. How does he have it if he is a Hayabusa Ninja? The leader is the leader because of the Phoenix nin-pet he has. Once he dies a new phoenix will rise to power and become the new leader. Phoenix style can use any Jutsu within the clan. The others can't.

You have "Torioite Furaito(Bird in flight)" Listed in your "jutsu's that I want to learn" list but you already have lv2 on your "learned Jutsu's" list.

It isn't very likly that he didn't know he was a Raptor unless it was after the clans disapearance. As such you wouldn't of had your Torioite Furaito or Mouchougan until after one of us learns of the Raptors clans existance(The clan gets accepted). Because of his age he most likely would have known he was a Raptor at a young age. As Kodo did and he is younger. The only reason he doesn't is because of an old head ingery that wiped his memory of the Clan. These things need to be thought about and addressed. other wise it just doesn't quite add up.

Roleplaying Characters:
Kodo Raptor - Leaf Chuunin
Airazor - Kodo's Peregrine Falcon pet-nin
Prowl "Yoru Ouka" Raptor - C Rank missing-nin
Skyshadow, Yoru's Nin-owl
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin | C-Rank missing Nin
Village: Konohagakure (Leaf) | None
Training Points: 00
Personal Stats:
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Rin Shouten · Status: Offline Trainee Joined: 01 Oct 2007 Posts: 857

1. Peregrine Falcon is my nin-pet, I need to edit that.

2. Changed

3. Edited, he was taken in by Shakaku

4. Removed

5. Changed

6. Once again, trained by Shakaku, and I only want this approved after the clan is.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Rin Shouten
Sazaku Norimune
Tsubame Inuzuka
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Gonin ~ Jounin ~ Jounin
Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure ~ Konohagakure
Training Points: 240
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Eric Hatake · Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 4:06 pm Post subject:

ok. Nothing else wrong as far as I can see.

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Roleplaying Characters:
No RPC
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin~~Genin~~Jounin
Village: Konoha~~Kiri~~Kiri
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Rin Shouten · Status: Offline Trainee Joined: 01 Oct 2007 Posts: 857

Edited.
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Sazaku Norimune
Tsubame Inuzuka
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Gonin ~ Jounin ~ Jounin
Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure ~ Konohagakure
Training Points: 240
Personal Stats:
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