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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 2:31 pm    Post subject: The Raptors secret revealed (AJ) Reply with quote

ooc: Open to AJ (Tamotsu) only.

ic: Kodo walked into his house with Airazor on his arm. He laid his weapons on the table and walked over to his room. Airazor followed and landed on the bed board. Kodo sat on the bed and let out a sigh. “Have you known about this the whole time?” Kodo asked looking at Airazor. “Why would you keep this from me? I was lead to believe that I was an orphan and never had a family. Lies... they were all lies. Tamotsu-sensei… He’s the Hokage now, he must have known about this. Why would he keep it from me?”

Airazor dropped off the bed and walked under it where he was peaking at the floor. Kodo’s gaze followed Airazor under the bed. “What is it, is there something there?” Kodo pushed the bed out of the way and felt the floorboards where Airazor was scratching. One of the boards felt loose and Kodo removed it to reveal a lever of some kind. He pulled it and the floor moved out from under him. Revealed now was a staircase that lead down below the house. “So what elts have they not been telling me?” Kodo lifted Airazor up and they both walked down below the house. After about 500 steps the stairs stopped at a large room.

Kodo walked through the dark room and as he did it was lit by rows of small fire pits branching from the walls. The room was dimly lit, but Kodo could still make out statues of Ninjas and Birds that all looked like they belonged to The Raptor clan. As Kodo walked further the room ended into a tunnel. “This must go under the village.” Kodo walked for what seemed like hours when the tunnel ended at a door with a talon etched on it.

The Door opened to reveal a room with an alter that had a statue of a Phoenix on it. There were several other doors circling the room that must lead to other secret passages around Konoha as well. Airazor leapt off Kodo’s arm and flew over to the alter and landed on the statue. Kodo walked over to the alter to find a scroll clenched within its talons. When Kodo went to take the scroll he bumped the statue and it tilted back on a hinge. Kodo set the statue upright and the wall behind the alter opened. There was a coffin with an old man in it. Kodo walked over to the coffin and looked inside. Kodo thought he recognized the man. He was dressed in an outfit resembling Kodo’s own. He has to be a member of Kodo’s clan, but who is he? Kodo’s head started to hurt again as he was remembering something elts from his past…


Roleplaying Characters:
Kodo Raptor - Leaf Chuunin
Airazor - Kodo's Peregrine Falcon pet-nin
Prowl "Yoru Ouka" Raptor - C Rank missing-nin
Skyshadow, Yoru's Nin-owl
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin | C-Rank missing Nin
Village: Konohagakure (Leaf) | None
Training Points: 00
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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 2:34 pm    Post subject: Torioite Furaito [Bird in Flight] Training post 1-3 Reply with quote

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Name: Torioite Furaito – Bird in Flight lv1
Type: Ninjutsu (Bloodline secret tech)
Rank: D (3 posts to learn without a teacher)
Hand Signs: Hold Bird to focus chakra
Requirements: Must be of the Raptor clan.
Description: This is the Kekkei Genkai of the Raptor clan. As its name suggests it allows the ninja use of their chakra to fly in a pattern similar to their bird partner. A Gliding partner takes less chakra to get airborne wile an air current is present. However, much more chakra is required if no current is present. A partner with smaller wings requires more chakra to get airborne, but requires no extra for the faster flight they are known for.  This jutsu progresses over three levels as the ninja’s skill with the jutsu increases.
Level 1: By holding the Tori hand sign the ninja releases chakra from their body and directs it downward, this creates lift. The more chakra they use the higher they will climb. Chakra must be continually used or the ninja will fall from the sky. More chakra can be use for propulsion in the same manner as lift.


Kodo was young, probably only about 5. He was playing outside his house when some men dressed in important looking close walked into his house. They were looking for his parents. His mother was in the kitchen and his father was on a mission. Kodo could hear the men talking to his mother. It was something about Kodo, he was old enough for the test and he was to be brought before Shakaku. His mother pleaded with them saying that Kodo wasn’t ready and that his father was out on a mission and wouldn’t be back for several days.

That is when Kodo saw the man in red walking up to his house. He knelt down and looked at Kodo. “So, you must be little Kodo.” Kodo looked into the man's eyes and saw that they were different then his. The man's eyes shined like the sun and were a mix of red orange and yellow. “This is a great day for you little Kodo. I can see that you will do great things in your time.” The man got up and looked to the house. “Is your mother inside?” Without waiting for an answer he already knew, the man walked into the house.

Several minutes later Kodo’s mother walked out of the house with the three men following close behind. “Kodo, sweetie, I would like you to meet Shakaku Raptor. He is the leader of our clan and he needs you to go with him.” Kodo knew that his mother had been crying, but she was putting on a brave face for him. Kodo nodded as a great bird of fire came down from the sky followed by two large Eagles. The two men who first walked into the house climbed on the eagles as Shakaku climbed on the Firebird and held a hand out for Kodo and his mother…

Roleplaying Characters:
Kodo Raptor - Leaf Chuunin
Airazor - Kodo's Peregrine Falcon pet-nin
Prowl "Yoru Ouka" Raptor - C Rank missing-nin
Skyshadow, Yoru's Nin-owl
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin | C-Rank missing Nin
Village: Konohagakure (Leaf) | None
Training Points: 00
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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 2:36 pm    Post subject: Torioite Furaito [Bird in Flight] Training post 2-3 Reply with quote

The trip was short as Kodo and his mother rode with Shakaku over the village and to a mountain range. They circled several times before landing at the top of a cliff face. Kodo’s mother knew what was going to happen next as she had to do it when she was his age. She also had to watch as Kodo’s older brother failed the test. Kodo wasn’t born at the time and the failure was a curse on the family. Now she had to live that horror all over again.

Shakaku took Kodo over to the edge of the cliff. “Kodo how much about our ways has your parents talked to you about?” Kodo, being only five, was shy and couldn’t really answer. “Well that’s alright. Let be tell you what is going to happen. You have reached the age where we have taken notice and want you to join the Raptors as a full fledged ninja. However in order to do that we have to perform a ceremony and you have to pass a few tests first.” Kodo just nodded. “Well then it is agreed. The first test starts now.” Shakaku picked Kodo up by the front of his shirt and tossed him over the edge.

Kodo didn’t know what to do. He had just unknowingly agreed to be tossed over the side of a cliff and was now falling to his death. Being only 5 he did what every 5 year old would do, he screamed and cried. Kodo’s mother heard his cries and she dropped to her knees and started to shed her own tears. Shakaku waited a few more seconds before he placed his hands in the Tori hand seal and dove after Kodo…

Roleplaying Characters:
Kodo Raptor - Leaf Chuunin
Airazor - Kodo's Peregrine Falcon pet-nin
Prowl "Yoru Ouka" Raptor - C Rank missing-nin
Skyshadow, Yoru's Nin-owl
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin | C-Rank missing Nin
Village: Konohagakure (Leaf) | None
Training Points: 00
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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 2:38 pm    Post subject: Torioite Furaito [Bird in Flight] Training post 3-3 Reply with quote

Kodo had made it over half of the way down before his chakra started to kick in. He stopped crying as a warm feeling washed over his body. His chakra was circling around him as it started to pick up speed. Kodo spread his arms out as he instinctively knew what to do.

As Shakaku fell his chakra started to emit strands from his body. These strands started to take the shape of wings as Shakaku’s own chakra network expanded to these new appendages. By the time Shakaku reached Kodo he was already shooting up the cliff face. Shakaku chased after young Kodo as he ran off some hand signs. “Bird, Boar, Dog, Dragon, Bird, Horse, Ram Snake, Bird, Dragon, Monkey, Dog, Bird, Boar, Dog, Dragon, Bird, Snake, Tiger, Bird; Raptor Seal!” Shakaku caught up to Kodo and placed his palm on his back, where the seal was placed. Kodo’s Chakra gave out and Shakaku carried him to the top of the cliff. “Congratulations Sora Raptor, your boy has passed the first step in becoming a full Raptor Ninja.”

(Jutsu remembered and learned)

Roleplaying Characters:
Kodo Raptor - Leaf Chuunin
Airazor - Kodo's Peregrine Falcon pet-nin
Prowl "Yoru Ouka" Raptor - C Rank missing-nin
Skyshadow, Yoru's Nin-owl
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Shinobi Rank: Chuunin | C-Rank missing Nin
Village: Konohagakure (Leaf) | None
Training Points: 00
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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2008 2:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tamotsu had been taking a break from his normal activity and been walking around the village in his normal clothing. He saw Kodo waliking into his house and had sighed for a moment. He walked over to the house and could hear him speaking. He then knocked on the door awaiting the answer to it. In the meantime he pulled out a scroll and began writing in it briefly. "This is sufficient." He said as he finished the scroll and then summoned a singular clone. "You know what to do." He said to the clone as he handed him the scroll and then disappeared. The clone looked at the door and grumbled som curses as like the real Tamotsu hated waiting. As time passed he grew to the point where had had enough and pushed the door open. As he did, he caught a glimpse of Kodo and walked after him slowly following him to his destination.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Inuzuka, Tamotsu
Mitsuki Seiko
Sirus
Riviere, Siela
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Shinobi Rank: S-Rank Missing, Jounin, Jounin, Chuunin
Village: None, Konoha, Iwagakure, Kirigakure
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PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 1:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kodo was snapped back to reality when he heard footsteps coming from the other room. He went to draw his weapons only to not find them. Then he remembered leaving them on the table at his house. Kodo thought fast as his hands found them selves first in the Tiger hand sign then the Bird. Kodo’s chakra ripped from his body and pointed downward as the temperature of the room increased. The flames on the walls started to burn in unison with Kodo’s own chakra. A trigram appeared on the ground with Kodo standing in the middle and his guest near the outside. “You are well within my firestorm!” Kodo’s body lifted slightly off the ground riding on his chakra. This was just before he shot forward to deliver a power kick. Kodo stopped mid-movement when he recognized his follower as the Hokage, Tamotsu-sensei.

“Tomatsu-sensei I have some questions to ask you. The First and most important would have to be why I was lead to believe that I had no family, and why my Clan was kept a secret. I have been through every book in the library and found no mention of a Raptor Clan, yet clearly I can remember otherwise. Why am I the only Raptor in this village now! What happened to my parents, and who is the old guy in the coffin? Why is there a secret passage from my house to this place.” The temperature in the small room started to increase again as Kodo lifted off the ground on his chakra. “Why am I able to see through Airazor’s eyes, and why am I able to float on my chakra?”

Jutsu’s used in order:
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Katon: nenshouken [Fire style: Burning fist] (Tai/Nin) {B: 9 posts without a teacher}
A Taijutsu created by Kodo Raptor It gives greater strength to his Taijutsu by adding his fire element into the mix. A Trigram appears on the ground with the Katon symbol in the center after the ninja holds the Tiger hand sign. The ninja’s own chakra surges from their body and burns like fire around them. The ninja will then attack in the same manner as the original Taijutsu. This jutsu gives the added effect of causing burns to an area touched by the chakra released. The chakra release will quickly causes strain on the body as time passes so extended use should be limited.

Torioite Furaito [Bird in Flight] lv1 (Nin) {D: 3 posts without a teacher}
Hand Signs: Hold Bird to focus chakra
This is the Kekkei Genkai of the Raptor clan. As its name suggests it allows the ninja use of their chakra to fly in a pattern similar to their bird partner. By holding the Tori hand sign the ninja releases chakra from their body and directs it downward, this creates lift. The more chakra they use the higher they will climb. Chakra must be continually used or the ninja will fall from the sky. More chakra can be use for propulsion in the same manner as lift.

Tsutenkyaku [Painful Sky Leg] (Tai) {C: 6 posts without a teacher}
This is basically just a kick down from the air, where the user (if gifted with an amazing amount of strength) uses their power to create an earthquake like effect and massive destruction to the surrounding area.



Roleplaying Characters:
Kodo Raptor - Leaf Chuunin
Airazor - Kodo's Peregrine Falcon pet-nin
Prowl "Yoru Ouka" Raptor - C Rank missing-nin
Skyshadow, Yoru's Nin-owl
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin | C-Rank missing Nin
Village: Konohagakure (Leaf) | None
Training Points: 00
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PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 2:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tamotsu's clone looked on without a grimace and instead yawned. He then brushed his hair back into place and nodded. "First, you owe me an apology for attacking me despite not hitting. I smell like ashes." Tamotsu joked before his eyes went to his darker tone. "As Hokage of Konoha, I was always told that I have some secrets to keep and others to tell. The one about your family was on of the ones the Elders told me that I was meant to keep. When I first met you I knew what clan you came from the instant I saw you."

Tamotsu took out the scroll from his pocket and then opened it. It has writings and texts based on the Raptor clan. He showed it briefly to Kodo before closing it and then sighing. "Before I met you, there was another from your clan. His name was Tsubame." Tamotsu pulled out one of his cards and then made the information appear. "You're not the last of your clan but you must believe me when I say that some secrets must be found out." Tamotsu said as he returned the card to his pocket.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Inuzuka, Tamotsu
Mitsuki Seiko
Sirus
Riviere, Siela
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Shinobi Rank: S-Rank Missing, Jounin, Jounin, Chuunin
Village: None, Konoha, Iwagakure, Kirigakure
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PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 2:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kodo did not like the answers his sensei was giving him, but Still Tamotsu was right he should apologize. “I’m sorry Tamotsu-sensei. I’ve just been on edge lately. What with trying to prove I’m strong enough to handle the Kage Bunshin Scroll, and now with me starting to get some of my memories back and learning that I have been lied to for so long. I didn’t mean anything by it.” Kodo dropped back to the floor and his chakra flow settled. “So then there are still Raptors in the village? How come there is no record?” Kodo wasn’t sure what to think. His sensei had known about him from day one. He must have known about the other Raptor as well. “So why did you follow me down here? It can’t be just to tell me that you can’t tell me anything.”

Roleplaying Characters:
Kodo Raptor - Leaf Chuunin
Airazor - Kodo's Peregrine Falcon pet-nin
Prowl "Yoru Ouka" Raptor - C Rank missing-nin
Skyshadow, Yoru's Nin-owl
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin | C-Rank missing Nin
Village: Konohagakure (Leaf) | None
Training Points: 00
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PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 2:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"I didn't tell you because me and Tsubame had spoken once to Elders about this." Tamotsu said softly.

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"Not that I condone what you are thinking, Tamotsu, but he is your student and if he is informed of this information he might take it as a personal attack rather then Shakaku's will." The male elder said looking at the younger Tamotsu.

"So, I'm to pretend that Tsubame doesn't exist and that this clan of his is just a figment of his imagination?" Tamotsu asked.

"Yes." The woman elder spoke.

"Whatever. Not much I can do then, is there? What about Renima?" Tamotsu asked.

"He has the only scroll revealing the secrets. When Tsubame returns, he will train Kodo only when his memories return. Wash your hands of this now, Tamotsu, and in the long run it will help you." The man spoke.

"I doubt it. But fine. I'll tell him I don't know anything." Tamotsu said walking off.



"Before I was asked to do that to you, me and Tsubame were... close. Tsubame asked me to look after you. When Tsubame left on orders of the Elders, it killed me. I took you on as a student to prepare you for what is yet to come. Why can you see through Airazor's eyes? Because it's a trait your clan shares. You and your pet are connected to each other, much like me and Jaken." Tamotsu said as he tossed Kodo a scroll. "That's the whole history."
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Inuzuka, Tamotsu
Mitsuki Seiko
Sirus
Riviere, Siela
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Village: None, Konoha, Iwagakure, Kirigakure
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PostPosted: Thu May 15, 2008 11:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kodo took the scroll from his sensei and took a quick peek. In it he read how Airazor was connected to him. He read what the meaning of the Tattoos over his eyes and on his back signified. He also read about how the clan was sent on an S rank mission and none returned.
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Each Nin-Bird of a Member of a Raptor clan is a physical manifestation of their own chakra. The ninja’s own chakra incubates the chakra egg and tells the embryo what features to form. The end result is a Nin-bird that shares a chakra link to the Ninja’s chakra pool.

Each Raptor Ninja after successfully hatching their chakra egg will be branded with a tattoo of an adult version of their Nin-bird in flight on their back. The ninja’s element will be determined and there eyes will be tattooed to signify.
Fire: The eyes will be branded with a solid red curve through each eye slanted Vertically.
Water: The eyes will be branded with a deep blue curve through each eye slanted Vertically.
Wind: The eyes will be branded with a sliver curve through each eye slanted Vertically.
Earth: The eyes will be branded with a brown curve through each eye slanted Vertically.
Lightning: The eyes will be branded with a solid yellow curve through each eye slanted Vertically.



Kodo rolled the scroll and put it in his pack. He then looked at his sensei. “So this Tsubame, is he like a direct relative of mine, or just one of the last members of the clan?” Kodo looked back to the old guy in the glass coffin. “Well I wont let my clan fall anymore then it already has. I will take this scroll, and study it until I know everything that I have forgotten. I now have a purpose Sensei. I will find this Tsubame and any other Raptors and together we will restore our clan to its former glory. Konoha will once again know the name of Raptor! Our enemies will learn the name too. They will learn to fear it.”

Roleplaying Characters:
Kodo Raptor - Leaf Chuunin
Airazor - Kodo's Peregrine Falcon pet-nin
Prowl "Yoru Ouka" Raptor - C Rank missing-nin
Skyshadow, Yoru's Nin-owl
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin | C-Rank missing Nin
Village: Konohagakure (Leaf) | None
Training Points: 00
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