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PostPosted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:01 pm    Post subject: Takuma Mizunaka Reply with quote

Name: Takuma Mizunaka
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Height: 5'3"
Weight: 104 lbs.

Appearance: His scrawny build misleads many, as they believe him weak.  Yes, he does look weak; he has a small and fragile build.  His dark, messy hair usually covers his blazing blue eyes.  He has delicate features, but has unusually slender fingers.  He is between tan and somewhat-tan on the skin color scale, and has large eyes and a small nose.

    Race: Caucasian
    Hair: Messy Black Hair; Covers tops of ears and eyes
    Eyes: Large, Bright Blue
    Body: Small, slender, fragile
    Ethnicity: Land of Wind



Rank: E-Rank
Reputation: 0
Village: Sunagakure

    Fame: 0
    Title: Genin

Bloodline: Mizunaka Clan
Main/Favored Weapon: None [Fists?]
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: Primary: Taijutsu; Minor: Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory:
10 x Shuriken
2 x Kunai

Personality:
Very quiet, very solemn.  He is not grave, but just quiet.  To strangers, at least.  He talks to only his greatest friends, his family, and his foes.  He is not quickly angered, and never underestimates anything.  He is not an outgoing person at all, yet he is not shy.  Takuma could be considered one's friend without even speaking a word to him.


Special Abilities: Stage I: Sabaku Ken Fu Starter (N/A)
Flexibility: limited, average for a person
Strength: limited, average for a person
Weights: Only about 5lbs each (traditional users of Sabaku ken Fu carry their sand in weights around their wrists and ankles.)
Sand: sticks directly to their skin, giving them a "statuesque" appearance plus the person's skin feels like sand paper

Jutsus:
Kawarimi
Bunshin
Henge
Name: Fuuton: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: After forming the required hand seals, the user will launch a direct wind attack from their palm. It deals pressure damage rather than the usual cutting damage of wind element and packs quite a punch. Despite not being very damaging, it is quick to be executed and the actual projectiles are extremely fast.


Name: Makai Ryu Degeki, Shikai (Hell Dragon Strike, Half Release)
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: none
First an uppercut or series of uppercuts is performed. After that, a back flip kick is used to send the opponent falling rapidly towards the ground. Finally you land the middle of your opponent's back with your heel, which damages their spine.

Name: Control Over Wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Element Wind
Description: This technique is more of an ability. The user has control over the surrounding wind. The greater the user’s power, the greater the control they have. C rank can detect things through air currents, as well as control surrounding wind. B rank can control the wind to intercept an attack or launch at a person or object. A Rank can greatly increase jumping distance and maneuver themselves midair or break their fall. Their control also increases allowing them to make sharp piercing or slashing attacks and more powerful interceptions respectively with each rank. S have complete mastery and can make the wind do almost anything (within reason).


Bloodline jutsus:
Sabaku repuu [Desert violent wind]
Rank: D-C
Requirements: excellent speed and taijutsu combined with sabaku ken fu, stage 1 and higher
Description: A variation of the Konoha repuu. The user sweeps their legs across the ground, knocking the opponent off their feet. While they are in the air and falling towards the ground, the user kicks them in their side sending them flying through the air. Hopefully towards a hard object, setting them up for a more powerful attack. Combined with Sabaku ken Fu will cause the opponent to get scrapped by the sand everytime the user makes contact with them.

Jutsus you want to Learn:

I don't know quite yet...



Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background:
Born into the rare clan of the Mizunaka, young Takuma was baptized in the respect of one's village and friends.  He was born a lone child, and remains one to this day.  He grew up on the Southern Side of Suna, and has grown very solemn.

Joining the academy was a tough thing for Takuma to do.  He really didn't see the time in it, as he wanted to be an acolyte of a preferred trade.  However, having the bloodline that he does, his parents were able to get him to join.  Immediately, Takuma took an interest into Taijutusu, and other fighting skills.  He progressed quickly, but maintained an average score.  He grauduated, and looks to improve his fighting technique and skills.

Roleplaying Characters:
Takuma Mizunake
Yuutu Ryuu
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: E-Genin ~ E-Genin
Village: Sunagakure ~ Kumogakure
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 x Shuriken; 2 x Kunai ~ Katana; 20 x Senbon

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 10:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You only get Kawarimi, Bunshin, and Henge, and you get one D-rank BL jutsu, and I think one C-Rank wind Jutsu (though double check on that last one).

Also, you need five lines of history. It can be a bit hard, I know, but once you start it, it can get to be a bit.

Can't tell you too much on the BL, but if you join mine (Shiatamme), I could help you immensly. =D
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin D-Rank +-+ Genin E-Rank+-+ Genin C-Rank +-+ Genin E-Rank
Village: Konoha +-+ Konoha +-+ Iwagakure +-+ Kumogakure
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 720
Inventory: Mizu Kusari, Kunai X5, Shruiken X3, Water Balloons X3, Mortar and Pestle +-+ Kunai X4, Shruiken X5, Green Diamond +-+ Two Emivice, Kunai, Helena Bracelet, Hyoumenkaken +-+ 25 normal senbon, 50 small senbon, 30 Kunai, 10 Shruiken, Modified Kunai, Ancient Text

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 10:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok this is almost right

1. you only start with Bushin Henge and kawarmi
2.you start with this
Spoiler:

Stage I: Sabaku Ken Fu Starter (N/A)
Flexibility: limited, average for a person
Strength: limited, average for a person
Weights: Only about 5lbs each (traditional users of Sabaku ken Fu carry their sand in weights around their wrists and ankles.)
Sand: sticks directly to their skin, giving them a "statuesque" appearance plus the person's skin feels like sand paper

 with a free D-ranked bloodline jutsu. what i have in the spoiler goes in your Special abilities section.
3. his weight is kinda on the light side since for a 5'3 male the lowesty should be 127 lbs *i  go off of a height weight chart*
4. need atleast a paragraph on history. write about his childhood and what made him want to enter the academy how was he as a student there. then finishe it with after his graduaion and end it there to begin his life as a genin
4. you get a free C-rank Fuuton jutsu*Fuuton is wind*

besides that it looks fine.
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Inventory: Nara~30x Shuriken 30x Kunai, 2x Chakra Enhanced Trench Knives//Hiro~20x Shuriken 1 Katana on back and 20x Kunai

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

lookoing better to me
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

sand they havent edited it.

also i can help you with this clan since i know enough about this clan.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Did some major editing.  Thanks to everyone who helped me. Very Happy

Roleplaying Characters:
Takuma Mizunake
Yuutu Ryuu
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: E-Genin ~ E-Genin
Village: Sunagakure ~ Kumogakure
Fame: 0
Reputation:
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Inventory: 10 x Shuriken; 2 x Kunai ~ Katana; 20 x Senbon

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 10:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Right, looks better now, although you can take off that thing in paranthesees (Or however you spell it) after the bloodline you chose.

Dang, all these Suna-nin make me want to bring Sophie back. >.>
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin D-Rank +-+ Genin E-Rank+-+ Genin C-Rank +-+ Genin E-Rank
Village: Konoha +-+ Konoha +-+ Iwagakure +-+ Kumogakure
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 720
Inventory: Mizu Kusari, Kunai X5, Shruiken X3, Water Balloons X3, Mortar and Pestle +-+ Kunai X4, Shruiken X5, Green Diamond +-+ Two Emivice, Kunai, Helena Bracelet, Hyoumenkaken +-+ 25 normal senbon, 50 small senbon, 30 Kunai, 10 Shruiken, Modified Kunai, Ancient Text

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ninjutsu should be minor not secondary.


Change that and it looks perfect.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Got it.  Thanks. Smile
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 1:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hm, you could add a tad bit more to the background.

Other than that 1/5 mem approval.



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Shinobi Rank: S-rank Raikage/E gen/D gen/B-gen/B-gen
Village: Kumogakure
Fame: 1180/0/15
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