Description:Kumo's equivilant of the Konoha's Gokakyu no Jutsu, or Great fireball Technique, and a staple jutsu of most of Kumo's Chuunin. This technique requires the user to ingest a large amount of air via an extremely deep breath, the user then uses chakra to charge the lining of their throat with electricity and expells the result in one large blast.
What is expelled is basically a large, concentrated mass of electricity with the vauge shape of a bullet, earning it its name. This Jutsu has a high enough voltage to kill on direct contact, but will mostly cause extreme pain, vision and hearing disturbance, and reaction slowing. Once the bullet hits a solid object it releases its electricity into the sorrounding 10 circular feet, shocking anybody in the radius and causing the above symptoms excluding death. This jutsu costs a relatively large amount of chakra to perform.
Name: Raiton:Hekireki Ryoukin no Jutsu(Lightning Release:Thunder Charge)
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:D
Requirements:A weapon of some sort, prefferably metal, Almost exclusively Kumo Ninja
Description:After making their Handsigns, the user selects a weapon such as a Kunai, Sword, Shuriken, etc., and infuses it with electricity. The result is that the weapon increases in cutting power, as well as gaining the ability to deliver a slightly disorienting shock if the said weapon is applied to an open wound, or anywhere the body is exposed.
Description:This is a less powerful version of an advanced Kumo Jutsu. It is usually taught to Genin to give them at least one large attack Jutsu. This jutsu consists of the user turning his arm into a giant conductor, through which chakra and electricity can pass through.
The user raises whatever arm he chooses, and channels his chakra into it in such a way that it attracts ambient static electricity in the area. The electricity gathers and builds in the users limb, and after a momentary preperation time it is funneled out of the limb at once by the users chakra. The result is a large bolt of lightning fired from an arm, towards the opponent.
This bolt causes extreme damage on direct contact, mainly due to the superheating effect of the lightning, and can turn most things not resistant to electricity to smoking wrecks, but it costs an extreme amount of chakra to perform, and in addition to this it requires at least five seconds to charge the jutsu, with the user doing nothing except standing still. These limitations force it down from the higher ranks to only a B-rank, though its sheer power is of A-rank level.
Description:The user forms his handisngs and focuses his chakra around his fists. Drawing in ambient static electricity from the air around him allows him to focus a small, flexible shield of lightning around his hand. The shield is small, only about the size of half the hand of whoever uses it, and is mainly focused around the knuckles and back of the hand.
The shield acts as a electrical discharge, allowing volts of electricity to be sent into whatever makes contact with it. The electricity is paralyzing, and has a chance to stun the opponent if enough lightning is discharged, however, this obviously requires some skill in Taijutsu to hit the opponent in the first place, and it takes multiple hits for the paralyzation to take effect.
This lightning covering can also function as a shield, and is especially effective against metal weapons, as it attracts them to itself and makes them stick, though relying on the shields to fully protect oneself is not reccomended because of their small size. These "Half-gloves" of electricity drain little chakra, but they drain it constantly once they are activated, forcing the Nin to get the job done quickly unless he has chakra to spare.
((Note:Since Suzak's uncle is from Kumo, he is able to learn this jutsu) _________________ The Right Hand of the T.S.A.T.M.F.V.F.T.C.O.N.2.B
Number Five of the Nine Silver ANBU of the Naruto ProBoards-Kage Hekireki
Fubikawa, Suzak Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Genin Village: Sunagakure Training Points: N/A Inventory: Steel Wire:50 Ft. Kunai:15 Flash Bombs:5 Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
The first one shouldn't be used the same general way as the Fireball Jutsu, but I guess it's possible to use it that way... Seems fine to me.
The second Jutsu is WAY too powerful... it reminds me of the abilties of
Chidori Nagashi [One Thousand Birds Current], which is S-Ranked, which can possibly be used to focus the power of Chidori thru a weapon. For you to increase the damage and had a powerful shock effect to a weapon, it would at least be an A-Ranked Jutsu.
The third jutsu is basically chidori that can be also be applies as an long-range attack. That should be at least a B-Ranked jutsu, and most likely an A-Ranked jutsu. _________________ Akagane Tatsuki "Ryuu" Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Genin Village: Otogakure Training Points: N/A Inventory: Hand Implants, 10 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, 20 Senbon Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
Yeah, the jutsus are too powerful for their respective ranks. They sound interesting though. I'm considering using them for my new character. _________________
Roleplaying Characters: Haldur Thalion No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Gonin (Chuunin officially) Village: Kirigakure Training Points: N/A Inventory: Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 66
I fail to see how the second is so powerful....all he does is build up an electrical charge in a weapon, increasing its cutting power, durability, and giving it the ability to shock through an open room....it is in no way like Chidori Nagashi, as the shock just causes pain, not paralysis, and the increased durability isnt super, just from the level fo iron to steel....
The third...Chidori isnt the staple lightning jutsu you know....its not chidori like whatsoever, its a big lightning bolt fired out of an arm. Its used for destroying big things or defenses that people hide behind, but did you notice the huge chakra cost? Thats there exactly so it can be a C-Rank, and therefore usable by me....not to mention the amount of time it takes to charge up that jutsu, once again mentioned in the description.
@Haldur, you can use them if you want, but remember your going to have to find soem way to make your character from Kumo, or learn them from my character, or his Uncle....or you have to have a relative from Kumo, since pretty much no toher Nin know these jutsu. _________________ The Right Hand of the T.S.A.T.M.F.V.F.T.C.O.N.2.B
Number Five of the Nine Silver ANBU of the Naruto ProBoards-Kage Hekireki
Fubikawa, Suzak Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Genin Village: Sunagakure Training Points: N/A Inventory: Steel Wire:50 Ft. Kunai:15 Flash Bombs:5 Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
Yeah, my character's clan is based out of Kumo. And the next character I'm making will be form Kumo, but defected to Oto. _________________
Roleplaying Characters: Haldur Thalion No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Gonin (Chuunin officially) Village: Kirigakure Training Points: N/A Inventory: Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 66
Could someone take a look at these again, I changed some things...... _________________ The Right Hand of the T.S.A.T.M.F.V.F.T.C.O.N.2.B
Number Five of the Nine Silver ANBU of the Naruto ProBoards-Kage Hekireki
Fubikawa, Suzak Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Genin Village: Sunagakure Training Points: N/A Inventory: Steel Wire:50 Ft. Kunai:15 Flash Bombs:5 Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
I still think that they're too powerful for their ranks. I'd tone them down a bit or rank them up. _________________
Roleplaying Characters: Haldur Thalion No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Gonin (Chuunin officially) Village: Kirigakure Training Points: N/A Inventory: Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 66
contrats these to the jutsu i made; a small volt the size of ones fingertips being fired, which causes no pain but paralization in the part of the body that was hit is a d rank jutsu. anythign better would have had to be c. now you say a whole arm being used as a conductor would be c. nah uh. i'd try at least b. maybe a, but that might be pushing it. _________________ In Your Darkest Hour, I Hold Secret's Flame Roleplaying Characters: Everwill Hirokimi No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Sannin Village: Otogakure Training Points: 0 Inventory: Masamune, Kunai x5, Senbon x15 Personal Stats: Forum Credit: 0
I changed it to B-rank and added a new one, but just for the record, I think you guys are focusing way too much on its power.
A jutsu isnt ranked solely because of its destructive force, the Lightning Arm takes a huge amount of chakra and requires one to be standing still, charging for five seconds. In five seconds you could run around the person and stab them in the back no problem, which is why I primarily wanted it to break through things like a Doton Wall or something.
But w/e _________________ The Right Hand of the T.S.A.T.M.F.V.F.T.C.O.N.2.B
Number Five of the Nine Silver ANBU of the Naruto ProBoards-Kage Hekireki
Fubikawa, Suzak Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Genin Village: Sunagakure Training Points: N/A Inventory: Steel Wire:50 Ft. Kunai:15 Flash Bombs:5 Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
Yeah....can somebody please look at this? _________________ The Right Hand of the T.S.A.T.M.F.V.F.T.C.O.N.2.B
Number Five of the Nine Silver ANBU of the Naruto ProBoards-Kage Hekireki
Fubikawa, Suzak Roleplaying Characters: No RPC No RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Genin Village: Sunagakure Training Points: N/A Inventory: Steel Wire:50 Ft. Kunai:15 Flash Bombs:5 Personal Stats: Forum Credit: N/A
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