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PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 5:13 pm    Post subject: Strong Thunder Lotus Chain Reply with quote

Name: Gourai Rensa [Strong Thunder Lotus Chain]
Type: TaiJutsu
Rank: A(KinJutsu)
Requirements: Hachimontonkou [Eight Inner Celestial Gates], Chain(Sealed within a Weapon Scroll)
Description: One will first open a celestial gate and then use their chakra flow to guide the Chain to their opponent. The Chain will wrap around their opponent, then the user will throw their opponent into the air. Though, if the target is a heavy opponent, one would consider spining them around a few times before propelling them into the air. Using increased speed, with the chain in their hand, they will meet their opponenet in the air and then punch them several times in the chest or stomach. Before they reached the ground, the user will then deliver one final blow to the chest, knocking them to the ground. One who has a great control over their Chakra Element will be able to unleash it in the last attack on the user.
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Village: Sand~None(Mist)~None(Sand)
Training Points: 5
Inventory: 30 Kunai, 30 Shuriken, 10 Smokebomb, 30 Explosive Tags, 5 Soilder Pill, 5 Scrolls~30 Medical Senbon, 5 Poision Senbon , 5 Shuriken , 3 Soilder Pills, 5 Weapons Scrolls~5 Scrolls, 5 Puppets, 30 Shuriken, 30 Kunai
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 5:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You'll have to make a second jutsu for the second one, since it's a lot different. The second one will also require the first one as a pre-requisite.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 5:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i think that should be a S ranked kinjutsu like all the other celestial gate involved jutsus.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 6:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actually, on Leafninja and on Wikipedia, the Lotus Techniques are mainly B or A-Ranked. It's only Asa Kujaku that's S-Rank(unofficially)
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 6:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

we dont go by that kanon we go by our kanon on here lol leafninja isnt set in stone. true bu to have good enough restricitons for me to let you use this it would at least be A rnaked because of what it does to you.
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Training Points: 180
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 7:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, I changed it to A, but does Jikota's version really have to be a second jutsu?
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Training Points: 5
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 3:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It does seem good to me, anyone else?
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 10:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes, the Jikota version adds on, just like Exploding Shadow Clone to Shadow Clone.

Also, come to think of it, all Gates-based taijutsu are Kinjutsu, so add that too.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 03, 2007 10:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So my version is KinJutsu or the entire Jutsu is KinJutsu?
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Training Points: 5
Inventory: 30 Kunai, 30 Shuriken, 10 Smokebomb, 30 Explosive Tags, 5 Soilder Pill, 5 Scrolls~30 Medical Senbon, 5 Poision Senbon , 5 Shuriken , 3 Soilder Pills, 5 Weapons Scrolls~5 Scrolls, 5 Puppets, 30 Shuriken, 30 Kunai
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 03, 2007 2:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If the jutsu is different by more than a little bit, you must separate them into two jutsus. I believe I said that any jutsu involving the gates would be Kinjutsu.

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