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PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 4:25 pm    Post subject: Star Shower Jutsus Part 1 Reply with quote

Name: Star Shower Style
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Bow, Good Chakra Control
Description: Practice of this style greatly improves the shinobi's rate of fire when using a bow. Also it lets them channel chakra into each shoot. This can be a quick charge that add a little when shooting rapidly, or alot into a single shot. This chakra increase the range of the arrow and adds extra damage. Lastly practioners of this art can add a flash of light at the end of a Flicker technique (or anything like it) rather than dirt or leaves. This is only a visual effect.

Name: Mirror Shot
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Bow, Star Shower Style, Kage Bunshin, Good Chakra Control
Description: This allow you to make multiple of a single arrow shoot. This arrow go for the same target and disappear after a hit or miss. It is possible to add more arrows or multiply arrows that are shoot together but this takes alot of chakra and is only should be done if the user has a large amount of chakra.

Name: Epheral Bolt
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: Bow, Star Shower Style, Good Chakra Control
Description: This allow the shinobi to hit a target with arrow that  don't take effect right away. The arrows are shift into a special substance using chakra. This arrow can passing through anything, but once they hit a humanoid or animal they lodge into it. This arrow don't deal damage until either the user speaks a command word, an hour pass, or the target goes more than 100 feet away. At this time they feel the arrow and take the damage and any poison may be on it. These arrows not invisible so a shinobi could see them and get an experienced med nin to remove it with chakra scapels. This takes an massive amount of chakra, and only 4 can be made a day.

Name: Tears of the Heavens Stance
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Star Shower Style, Excellent Chakra Control
Description: This is jutsu for those who run out of arrows. The user creates brillant white ammo using chakra. This is an advanced jutsu and only those with a large amount of chakra should use it. This requires the user to stay in specific stance to get the chakra to circulate correctly.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 8:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, I don't like the concept behind the second part of the first jutsu. Blinding someone with another type of sunshin is pretty much another jutsu in itself. The rest seems fine as long as it's not god modded. Absolutely not to the second jutsu. Normally I would give this a chance, but we have had a weaker version of this jutsu completely declined.

The last one is fine as long as a limit and high chakra amount needed is mentioned.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 3:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Edited the flash part of the first one, delete the second and added another I forgot about.

Edit: Add the large chakra amout to the Epheral Bolt. Looked over you saying that. And I ment to put that limit anyway.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 4:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You didn't delete the second jutsu. Besides that, I see no other problems.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 4:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah I did the second one was the Mirror Shot. I just added another
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 4:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Damn. Sorry, I meant delete the trick shot.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 4:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok hold on I'll delet it and put back the other
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 6:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The last jutsu sounds something like Neji's chakra "armor". And what exactly is "brillant white"?
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 6:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It says ammo, not armour. He means that he can have as many arrows as long as he has chakra.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 6:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's Basically white chakra, it's expressing the color. It doesn't blind the enemy or anything, just visual. Although it's light does make it extremely difficult to hide during the night.
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