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 Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:07 pm Post subject: Some jutsu |
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Name: Thunder Spear
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: My permission
Description: After forming the necessary hand seals the user collects their lightning based chakra into their hand and forms it into a long spear shape, about 6 feet in length. The spear is then thrown at the intended target, due to the fact that it is pure raiton the spear moves very quickly through the air and also has impressive cutting qualities meaning that it will easily pierce through steel. If the target is hit directly by the spear, it will pierce straight through their bodies and then the target will absorb the full voltage of the attack, severely shocking them but also preventing the spear from going any further.
Name: Katon: Roshin'yo
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: My permission
Description: An unusual jutsu by regular katon standards in that it does not originate from the user's mouth. Instead after the user has performed the required hand seals a large stream of flames blows up before their torso and blasts out in the direction of the target. Roshin'yo spreads outward in a conicular fashion and at its widest point covers 15 feet accross with flames hot enough to melt rock to magma, the maximum range of the flames is 30 feet.
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| Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:30 pm Post subject: |
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1. Lightning doesn't pierce shit. It can go through it and out the other end though.
2. Rock to magma? Might want to take that out.
3. Mm... And what prevents you from using that on your opponent in the middle of a fight?
And it would be fine even against them if you put a combat post limit (5, maybe 8.)
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| Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:47 pm Post subject: |
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| Yasuo Amano wrote: | 1. Maybe, but lightning chakra can.
2. How about if I bump it up to S?
3. That was the idea :/ |
1. No it can't, and don't quote Chidori, because Chidori uses pure chakra AND lightning element. No way you're passing a pure chakra technique at A rank.
2. Sounds good.
3. Then put that. Specific numbers, even ranges, help.
EDIT:
1. Meh, with convincing it seems better now, remove the through metal part. Keep in mind that typical lightning affinity is not piercing, it's shocking.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 3:43 pm Post subject: |
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3. Needs to have some serious drawback; or be S-Rank Kinjutsu.
Or both.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 3:48 pm Post subject: |
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Mhm; but it basically allows you to very easily stop an opponent from using any Jutsu's with no cost to yourself.
If you were fighting a Nin-Spec and got this on them, they'd be screwed.
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