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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 10:00 pm    Post subject: Ryuugan Bloodline Reply with quote

Name: Ryuukaze
Rank:C
Type:Taijutsu
Description: Dragon Wind(Ryuu Kaze) Is a move that is used by Taijutsu users of the Ryuu clan by using this Taijutsu skill he or she will swing either their arms or legs to create powerful gust of wind that can be used as a offense or defense depending on the skill of the user.

Name:Blade of the used
Rank:C
Type: Kenjutsu
Description: By using the blade as a medium the user move rocks like a magnet can to metal this jutsu is great for offense ,but is recommended as a defensive move.

Roleplaying Characters:
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No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin
Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Wakazashi(1) Tanto(1) Kunai(16) Sebon(26) Sword of Chaos
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 6:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

the3 first one is fine. The second one not so great since theres a jutsu that already does the same thing but you have to be at raikuri level i think even thou it has nothing to do with that lol.
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Ranked Missing nin/A ranked missing nin
Village: Wind Shire
Training Points: 180
Inventory: 10 kunai,10 shuricken,50 senboms. 15 explosive tags, 300feet of wire, 3 traps. Daggar, =enoreth the blade of wind.3 soldier pill, 1 adrenline shot. all types of gas, 3 universal grenades, and a gas mask.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 7:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hm, use some grammar and punctuation, I can't even realize what the 2nd one does
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Roleplaying Characters:
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ Chuunin (C) ~ S-rank Missing-nin (SS) ~ Jounin (A)
Village: Konoha ~ Iwa ~ None ~ Konoha
Training Points: 325
Inventory: 20 Shuriken, Silver Moon, Dark Sun ~ Justice Armor, 10 kunai, 25 shuriken ~ Fuuenken ~ Renkinshou XXXIX, Kris
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 11:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actually, since Nushi died, I'm willing to release my stone jutsus to the public, if that's ok with the other mods. Control Over Stone does the basically same thing as the second jutsu. As air said, the first one is good.

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Hyuuga Malekith
Kurosenjo Yanagi
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin (S-rank missing-nin) ~ Genin
Village: None ~ Konoha
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Chakra Bo, 5 Kunai, 4 Shuriken, 8 Smoke Bombs, 20 Explosion Tags, 8 Soldier Pills ~ Bo, Bow, Quiver of Arrows (holds 20), 2 Shuriken, 4 Kunai
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 10:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

So is this okay?

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No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin
Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Wakazashi(1) Tanto(1) Kunai(16) Sebon(26) Sword of Chaos
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 10:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

No, the second one doesn't seem to be any good, as apparently he already made some exactly or similar like that. The first seems okay, but you'll have to give me a few minutes to find if there is already a jutsu like that.
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Kidaku Itichi
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin
Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure
Training Points: 185
Inventory: 1 Katana
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 10:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Powerful gust of wind, huh... You do realize that even swinging your arm VERY fast only creates a small flow of air? Even if you make it larger with chakra, don't expect it to seriously (if at all) hinder your opponents movement. You'll need a half-hurricane wind speed to do that, and no way that would be C-rank
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YuweaCurtis wrote:
Justice is all, "I'll bitchslap you at any range".

Red Mage wrote:
There is no problem that cannot be overcome by an imaginative and vigorous use of the animal husbandry skill.

Greg wrote:
It is my greatest of shames as an anime martial arts master that I am not an old man or a pervert.

Grace wrote:
Oh, don't worry! I'm plenty crazy!

Sarda wrote:
Oh, hmm, yes. I sent him to a place like the beach. Only it was the moon.

Fruit F***** wrote:
You are on my list of things to do tonight.

Black Mage wrote:
Lies are just creative truths.



I-no
Suija, Enja

Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Mutou Kazuki
Frederick

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ Chuunin (C) ~ S-rank Missing-nin (SS) ~ Jounin (A)
Village: Konoha ~ Iwa ~ None ~ Konoha
Training Points: 325
Inventory: 20 Shuriken, Silver Moon, Dark Sun ~ Justice Armor, 10 kunai, 25 shuriken ~ Fuuenken ~ Renkinshou XXXIX, Kris
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 6

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 12:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sench, the Wind Scythe jutsu is C-rank, and it can blow an opponent away. The first is fine, but the second is unnecessary.

Roleplaying Characters:
Hyuuga Malekith
Kurosenjo Yanagi
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin (S-rank missing-nin) ~ Genin
Village: None ~ Konoha
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Chakra Bo, 5 Kunai, 4 Shuriken, 8 Smoke Bombs, 20 Explosion Tags, 8 Soldier Pills ~ Bo, Bow, Quiver of Arrows (holds 20), 2 Shuriken, 4 Kunai
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 12:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DENIED AND LOCKED!

Due to inactivity, this Jutsu is hereby denied and locked!  Please PM me if you wish to continue.
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Roleplaying Characters:
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Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
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Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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