Return of the Kage?

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airknight12 · Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 6:03 pm Post subject: Return of the Kage?

“Kumo, I’m back for now…” Renima looked at the statue that bore his name. He knew it was really a lie and soon he would be revealed to all the world that he was still in existence. At the moment the powers that be knew and dreaded his existence, after all their were few shinobi like him left in the world. All had turned to full blown Ninjutsu and none could stand effectively against genjutsu, but there was more to it than that. He was a living legend, a dead man who could not be killed. One strong enough to give his life to another and only by that means, or by his own hands might he die. Yet he was still vulnerable, he had weaknesses like all men, and one was his connection with the past. His connection with the spirit of this world, that allowed him to stay within the realm of what needed to be done, and for the moment he was seeking that path.

Moving away from the stone he sat underneath a tree just on the edge of the clearing. Closing his eyes he connected with his life line that set him apart from all men, and he could see the future. He knew already his cousin and dear companion would soon die because of his folly. For some reason he believed it was Renima who had told him to kill the sand, but in reality it was the demon within him. He also knew that the next time he saw the girl she would be entirely different, then he made a prediction and through it on the table that was within his minds eye. “this Inuzaka will be different” it was a simple prediction, and common sense gave that much of a notion. For if a man walks into a river and then at a later time he walks back in he is not walking into the same river, and he is no longer the same man, because every action has a direct impact on who we are, and what ever we do has the same impact on others. Perhaps this was all psycho babble from the Zen masters of time’s past, but he was becoming one of those few masters.

occ; first bit of occ training amegiki or what ever your name is, is to put as much detail about the character into each post. Go into his worries, thoughts, emotions on a deeper level, in so doing you bring out a much more developed, interesting, and more livly character.
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Renima{infamy: 5000}
matthias
Raiton, Ensu
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Shinobi Rank: S-Ranked Missing nin/A ranked missing nin
Village: Wind Shire
Fame: 0
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Training Points: 160
Inventory: 10 kunai,10 shuricken,50 senboms. 15 explosive tags, 300feet of wire, 3 traps. Daggar, =enoreth the blade of wind.3 soldier pill, 1 adrenline shot. all types of gas, 3 universal grenades, and a gas mask.

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Amegaki · Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 9:27 pm Post subject:

Amegaki, had planned to come to the memorial on this day, needing to mourn the loss of a few friends over his few years. He had seen so much slaughter, his parents, a brother, 3 or four friends, a girlfriend. What was next for him, he wondered to himself when the dear lord would end his life, he would not do it by his hands for it was a sense of cowardice. He thought to himself as he walked, pushing on, knowing what he was to do, until he reached the memorial. He touched the tough, big, black stone, then forced chakra into his mind. He closed his eyes and put himself on one knee, thinking of the past and what was to come in the future. He knew he had a job to do in this world, it was to find his father, safe and sound, if he was not dead. He prayed over the stone, asking for forgiveness for being late from every friend he had. He felt as if it was his own fault that they had been killed. He pulled out a few flowers, one for each person that had been killed, it totaled up to seven flowers, dasies. He put them on the soft ground, the part that was flat under the stone. He then stood up, turning around and putting his hood up, he looked to Kuromaru, smiling and noticed a familier scent in the area. It was the same man from the ramen shop. He looked around the area, finding the man sitting up against a tree with the leaves overhead. The man must have been in some form of deep thought because Amegaki could easily hear the man talking or mumbling to himself, however the words were incoherent, hard for Amegaki to make sense of. Amegaki walked to the man with Kuromaru close next to him for protection if need be.

(How's That?)
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Amegaki Inuzuka
Vatu Kaji
Raiden Kai
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Shinobi Rank: Jounin S ~ Genin B ~ Genin E
Village: Kumo ~ Kiri ~ Missing
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airknight12 · Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 9:46 pm Post subject:

Occ: much better, you added a bit of depth to your character, the hard part is keeping that going through the whole thread, especially through the battle parts. Back In the ramen shop I slipped on that because it became a random flow of conversation.

IC: Renima was drawn back from his place of utter serenity. That deep cave of life within his body that allowed him to escape this world and dive into the next, the one that was of value, while this one was all vanity. The sounds of a person coming close to him pulled him away and instantly made him alert. Barely opening his eyes he could see the boy look at the memorial and almost cry. He watched the changes in his posture as if some grief had not yet been dealt with and was still festering. Suddenly, he removed himself from meditation and stood upright, walked towards the stone, and instantly drew a sword to point at several names. “Kumo, Sasiko, Rio, and Ky. Those four are among my dearest friends. Kumo, and Rio were both students with me under Sasiko-kage. Ky was one of my rivals who at one time was the Kage….” Renima was trying to make a point that all suffered, all lost friends in this world and grief was something to be left at the burial. “Sasiko died because I couldn’t get to him in time. By the time I got to him his body was already taken to his hide out in Kiri where his clan in charge of protecting his special tonics are at.”

He paused again wondering if he could explain the other three in the way that would give them justice. One was loyal, the other a traitor, and finally the last died from disease. In all those cases he wondered why he couldn’t have done something different, why he couldn’t prevent it. Yet he knew the answer, everything was set up for a reason and no matter how much we beat ourselves up about it we can’t change the past, we can only adjust our destiny. Renima then took the sword and pointed it at another name, it was his own. “ Henjay, Renima. The kage who was a traitor is what they have labeled him, but that is not what happened at all. After all I am him, so I would know.” He was taking a risk in saying that, but he doubted anyone would believe this boy if he told on him.
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Renima{infamy: 5000}
matthias
Raiton, Ensu
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Ranked Missing nin/A ranked missing nin
Village: Wind Shire
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 160
Inventory: 10 kunai,10 shuricken,50 senboms. 15 explosive tags, 300feet of wire, 3 traps. Daggar, =enoreth the blade of wind.3 soldier pill, 1 adrenline shot. all types of gas, 3 universal grenades, and a gas mask.

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Amegaki · Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 10:04 pm Post subject:

As the man began to sit upright, he talked about how some of his own friends had been killed, murdered, slaughtered, there was no decent word to call it, it was just death. Changing the word didn't bring them back so there was no point. He said to the man, Worrying is not going to help things, bring about change to what has gone wrong. He stopped his sentence mid way, tying to make up a halfway decent metaphor to use in this situation. The wind blew over him, sending leaves in the way of the wind, the thought came to him rather quickly. Amegaki said to the man, lives are like the leaves in the wind, you can only catch a few, the rest have to go for the ride. He then finished talking as the man stood up, pointing to the name of a old Hokage, the one that was a traitor. He heard as the man said that he was the man and Amegaki felt as silence came over the two, he felt as if he should say something, but what was there to say, Amegaki himself should be counted as a Missing ninja, and probably would be dead if Ukyo hadn't gone off on his stupid little mission never to return. Amegaki knew someone was playing with his fate, there was somethign going on behind the scenes, like playing with puppets. Amegaki looked at the man calmly, saying, Why couldn't you have said that earlier? If it is true, then why would you care that a few low-class ninja heard you, you could silence us all, or disappear in a flash. He was beginning to get a little angry at the fact that someone would be so childish as to try and hide their identity. He cooled himself down as Kuromaru nibbled on his ankle like a brother, pulling back a younger sibling. Amegaki said to the man, Fight us, and prove what it is you say.
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Amegaki Inuzuka
Vatu Kaji
Raiden Kai
No 4th RPC
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Shinobi Rank: Jounin S ~ Genin B ~ Genin E
Village: Kumo ~ Kiri ~ Missing
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Inventory: Mizukami (concealed), Various colored scrolls.

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airknight12 · Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 10:23 pm Post subject:

Occ: try turning your post into more than one paragraph, as soon as you start going off into to many point that’s a good place to break off, if nothing else it makes it easier to read.

Renima smiled and then looked the boy in the eye’s he was performing one of his favorite jutsu’s to put young shinobi in their place. He didn’t use it as a way to show pride, but to expose the difference in their strength, if it was great enough then the person would be entirely paralyzed as if seeing their own death before their eyes. “Kanashibari-no-Jutsu….” Renima then waited to see if it would take effect, he didn’t care if it did or didn’t because either way he was more than able to defend himself against anything this boy could possible through at him. He was one of only two shinobi in the world who were able to gain mastery over Nin, Gen, and Tai. He was also the only person in the world capable of catching a high level Uchiha or itichi in an illusion. “I didn’t speak my name, because I am considered dead, and in a sense I am. I am not longer the same person in mind or spirit that I was back then. The only thing that remains is my love for my people, My absolute desire to protect them, and my techniques. All of you are foolish in believing there is a set form of heroism to being a shinobi. The fact is that is why many die young. A shinobi is about deception with the only ethics of protecting those they love, and fulfilling the mission at hand. Forget all the heroics, and you might live to be a fine shinobi.”

Renima turned his back and started to go to where he would meditate. It was a way to temp the boy into attacking if the jutsu, for some reason, hadn’t worked. Either way the difference between the two would soon be very evident.

Name: Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This is a rather basic technique that does not require any hand seals to be used. Ideally, it temporarily paralyzes a number of targets. However, this is not likely to work on strong opponents, unless they are considerably weaker than the user themselves.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Renima{infamy: 5000}
matthias
Raiton, Ensu
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Ranked Missing nin/A ranked missing nin
Village: Wind Shire
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 160
Inventory: 10 kunai,10 shuricken,50 senboms. 15 explosive tags, 300feet of wire, 3 traps. Daggar, =enoreth the blade of wind.3 soldier pill, 1 adrenline shot. all types of gas, 3 universal grenades, and a gas mask.

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Amegaki · Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 10:53 pm Post subject:

Amegaki was already in his stance, gathering chakra around him. He wanted to see what it was like to fight this Kage. He had already fought somebody of Kage rank, back when he was first becoming a ninj and he failed terribly, ending in Amegaki nearly dieing, he still had the scar on his stomach from the battle. As Amegaki was about to begin his handseals, he felt the man start up a jutsu, forcing his body into paralysis. He was unable to move, feeling his muscles lock up. He fell to the ground with a thud and with the last ounce of his strength, he yelled aloud, You think I do this to be a hero? You have me mistaken, I do this because I made a promise to all those who have died, I made a promise that I would protect not only what I love, but what they love. It is why I am not yet dead, they protect me as I protect the things they love. He had no idea where that little speech came from, it was as if somebody was speaking through him.

He continued trying to move, with no avail. The sheer fact that the man had walked away without a fight and sat down to meditate was enough to prove Amegaki was no match, however it made him angry, giving him a bit of willpower, he was able to twitch his fingers a bit, not enough to do much other than clench his fist. He saw the man meditating and Amegaki closed his eyes, he had sustained a little damage to the back of his head when he fell, doing just enough damage to black him out for a few seconds, knocking him asleep.

HIS DREAM:

Amegaki floated around in an endless darkness yet again, this was similar to the one in which he had fought Tamotsu long ago. There was a warmth, similar to blood, yet it was obvious he was not bleeding. He could feel his heartbeat loudly within the darkness, seeming to get louder, like footsteps getting closer to him. He looked around the darkness, seeing something similar to a film like a T.V. This was a memory no doubt, however it was very jumbled up, hard to see, mixed in with other peoples memories. He pushed himself through the darkness with mental power, going close to it, as he went to touch the screen-like object, he saw the light crawling up his arms, burning him as it crawled up, he cried out in pain, ripping him from his dreams...

The Real World:

Amegaki yelled out in pain as he was awakened by the pain in his dream. The weird thing was, the pain hadn't gone away. Amegaki tilted his eyes towards his hands and cursed to himself, saying, Shit, I grabbed an Ant Hill. The pain up along his hands was enough for his reflexes to make his hand shake away from the anthill, however it was not a full movement, making it only move aa few inches. The bugs were flung off however. He yelled out at the man, So when is this going to end?
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Roleplaying Characters:
Amegaki Inuzuka
Vatu Kaji
Raiden Kai
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin S ~ Genin B ~ Genin E
Village: Kumo ~ Kiri ~ Missing
Fame: 160~0~0
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Training Points: 10
Inventory: Mizukami (concealed), Various colored scrolls.

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airknight12 · Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 11:06 pm Post subject:

Renima opened his eyes again and stared at the boy. “Right now…” Renima snapped his fingers releasing the jutsu he had used on the boy. “It is good you have something like that to fight for, my point wasn’t that. Fight for those things, keep them close to your heart. It is those things that makes the leaf so strong, and why I can never stay away for long. I have the same will of fire to protect what, and who I love. My point was be less brash, and more deceptive. Instead of attacking head on as your nature already appears. Come from the back or an angle, set traps and move from there to take down your opponent. That is your first lesson. Now you can attack me if you wish. I won’t use a single Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, no matter what you try to do to me. I wish to access you…”

Renima was glad his long statement had ended and he could focus on what was about to happen. He was of the Wind Shire, a people strong in body, spirit, and mind. They were known for endurance, and speed, with great reflexes. With taijutsu alone most could put up a splendid fight against most anyone. Renima was well aware of this and fell into a basic fighting stance. His hands were a few inches away from his head, and put up vertically. His hips were slightly dropped, and his legs bent so he was compact and could defend with ease or go on the offensive. It would be from here he would withstand any assault, and doubted he would be moved.

Then Renima closed his eyes and fell into a half way state between reality and meditation. He wouldn’t be fighting at full strength, but he could still defend against a large array of attacks. He would rely only on vibration, sound, smell, and touch. His eyes would remain unused until the genin proved to be some sort of a threat.

__________Flash back_________
“it was a long time ago when Sasiko did this same thing to me and my team mates all at once. It was our first test” Renima’s mind was filled with the memories of that first training session, when they all failed to land a single blow. They tried, and even tag teamed him but it wasn’t good enough. He remembered trying to attack from every possible way he could and yet he couldn’t even make his sensei open his eyes, it was a very sad day for them, but looking back on it, they learned so much more that day, through that method, than they could have at any time. It was to show the difference between himself and sensei. In so doing a great respect for his teacher was instantly built.

_____________reality

Renima through out the memories to feel the first attacks come.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Renima{infamy: 5000}
matthias
Raiton, Ensu
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Ranked Missing nin/A ranked missing nin
Village: Wind Shire
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 160
Inventory: 10 kunai,10 shuricken,50 senboms. 15 explosive tags, 300feet of wire, 3 traps. Daggar, =enoreth the blade of wind.3 soldier pill, 1 adrenline shot. all types of gas, 3 universal grenades, and a gas mask.

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Amegaki · Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 11:46 pm Post subject:

Amegaki heard the man snap and his bodys muscles were released, allowing him to move freely now. He instantly rolled over away from the anthill and patted the many ants off of his hands. He watched as the man just now wanted him to come at him and Amegaki took the mans words to heart. He wasn't going to just attack from the front anyway, with his jutsu, he'd attack from all sides. He handsealed with ease, sending his hands into a cross-like seal to end it and formed a clone on either side of him. The clones ran around, making a 3 pronged attack with Renima in the middle. Amegaki held his hand in the seal for gathering chakra and the clones all watched, seeing what was to happen. Amegaki saw as the man closed his eyes and chuckled a bit, thinking it would be slightly easier than he thought. He went into his all fours taijutsu stance and Kuromaru ran around to the back of Renima, making it a 4 pronged attack. He forced chakra to his ears, palms, nose, and other various places to increase his chance of actually hitting, then he said, Sir, I don't think closing your eyes is the best idea. He then pushed off of the ground, along with the other clones, one jumping, the other two people running in. Kuromaru ran in, forcing his chakra to his paws to increase slashing capabilities. The clone in mid air front flipped, sending his leg downward towads Renimas head, Amegaki himself upper cutted the middle, the clone to the side attempted at a punched to the face. As this all happened, time stopped to Amegaki for a split second, giving him a chance to think about what he saw in his dream.

As Amegaki thought, many conclusions came to mind about what that screen actually was, none of them actually satisfied his guesses though. He continued to think about it as the fight raged on.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Amegaki Inuzuka
Vatu Kaji
Raiden Kai
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin S ~ Genin B ~ Genin E
Village: Kumo ~ Kiri ~ Missing
Fame: 160~0~0
Reputation:
Training Points: 10
Inventory: Mizukami (concealed), Various colored scrolls.

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airknight12 · Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 8:10 am Post subject:

“Renge Lotus….” it was faint, barely whispered and then it began. He felt every last attack coming at the same time and knew in an instant what he would need to do. He wasn’t sure how, but he was being attacked by four opponents now. He guessed this genin had somehow used kage bunshin no jutsu, because a regular bunshin would not give off vibration. Renima leaned backwards, stepping with one leg back, and causing the other to be extended. From there he brought his extended leg straight up to attack at the first clone, if nothing else it would divert his attack, then Renima spun to bring an axe kick down towards kuromaru, using this momentum to get just out of the range of amegiki’s attack, and then pivot around with a round house to attack the last clone, and finally thrusting his left palm out sideways, to perform a technique known as Houshou, it was a taijutsu technique that with chakra could send someone 70ft away, but Renima used only his strength, giving it enough force to push the boy back twenty feet. Then he stopped back into his normal position. He noticed a bit of blood was dripping off his shoulder from one of the claw marks. It was a mere scratch, not even half an inch long and had no real depth to it.

occ: Houshou is a thrusting palm attack, and Renge Lotus is the fighting style that rock lee uses.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Renima{infamy: 5000}
matthias
Raiton, Ensu
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Ranked Missing nin/A ranked missing nin
Village: Wind Shire
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 160
Inventory: 10 kunai,10 shuricken,50 senboms. 15 explosive tags, 300feet of wire, 3 traps. Daggar, =enoreth the blade of wind.3 soldier pill, 1 adrenline shot. all types of gas, 3 universal grenades, and a gas mask.

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Amegaki · Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 3:41 pm Post subject:

OOC: I know, thanks for explaining though.

IC:
As Amegaki heard the words Renge Lotus, he was sent back in an instant. Kuromaru was sent sliding backwards across the ground, and the cloens were knocked into the air, slamming onto the ground turning into a poof of smoke. Amegaki held his feet on the ground, sliding back as he stood, dirt and smoke picked up as he slid back. As he looked at Renima, he saw the little bit of blood trickle down his arm and smirked, feeling that he had slightly accomplished something. He handsealed, mumbling a couple incoherent words, then took in some air, letting it out with a loud blast. The air turned purple in mid air, turning into a poison smoke. The smoke engulfed the area in front of Amegaki, too far for him to be affected by it. Kuromaru ran around the sides of the smoke, trying to keep himself from getting caught in the blast. He ran to the side of Amegaki calmly, sitting down and wagging his tail as if saying, I think we got him. Amegaki yelled to Renima from the outside of the smoke, I hope that little scratch wont slow you down! Amegaki stood on the outsde of the smoke, just charging his chakra to make sure he would have anoudh to execute the next jutsu. He continued gathering, feeling his chakra around him in his muscles, bones, and even his flesh. He felt as the wind spiraled around him, he was about to use Kaze no Yaiba.

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Roleplaying Characters:
Amegaki Inuzuka
Vatu Kaji
Raiden Kai
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin S ~ Genin B ~ Genin E
Village: Kumo ~ Kiri ~ Missing
Fame: 160~0~0
Reputation:
Training Points: 10
Inventory: Mizukami (concealed), Various colored scrolls.

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