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Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2007 10:24 pm Post subject: Outcast (Open to anyone) |
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It was midday after the graduation exams that day. The sun was in the air, but who knew how long with it’s slow decent form the sky. The rays had still shined through the trees with a faint light as it had set it’s bright glow on a young flesh with zest that was like snow. The leg was rubbed with a pale hand to follow as the fingernails almost reflected the sunlight as it rubbed the warm spot of flesh. The fingers drew back curling the hand into a first as it had shaken and shivered a bit with a second to pause between. From the wrist, a wet trail had stopped mid finger top coming from the arm.
A lone girl’s eyes were half shut and was almost misty as the pupils were about faded. Among that mist was the moistness that built up. Her still watery tears that didn’t pour as only one of them had managed to escape. She had simply stared away from her own dress’s edge to the memorial stone in the distance. At times like this, she felt like she was committing suicide and her name would be among those on that very stone even on a D-Ranked mission. She was always very confident, but when it came to taunts and people downing her, she would draw back into her shell and act like all she had done was pass her exam out of simply what they made it out to be, luck.
“I know I’m not strong…but…I know I’m not weak.” She had admitted as she had stood up as she landed on her feet without staggering or shaking. Her foot had tapped against the ground once as the invisible world had appeared in her eyes by simple sonar as she could make out faint images in the darkness. She had reached her hand behind her and picked up the retractable Wooden Pole behind her as she had reached it in front of her and walked sadly while wiping the tears from her eyes wither the sleeve of her left while letting her right guide her.
“This stone…” she had uttered as she stopped in front of it and then stood there. She reached her stick out and then tapped it about the stone’s structure. She could see the stone’s surface with distinct carvings and scars listed with names in the image of her mind. Her eyes had gave that same sad expression as always. ”Even if I‘m not here, that gives them no reason to reject me. Why is it that no one can accept what they witness?”
Her eyes looking towards each name as she had felt like she was asking the very people long past who’s names were left on that stone. She could remember being mocked all along. Those who had doubted her strength. They all saw her during a sparring match, she had moved with such grace and used her simple wooden pole like an extension, a resource, and even as being clever as being a third leg to stand on with it’s well built structure. When it came time for graduation and they were to be grouped squads, the other ninja simply shunned her at the most. They muttered to each other with disdain forgetting until their conversation was over that she had superior hearing in their class.
”What they said…I wish not to repeat, nor to even think.” She thought to her self as she had simply stared at the heroes’ names engraved on the stone. She had took her wooden pole as she had placed it in her grasp of both hands holding it like a sheathed sword. She didn’t even want to go back. Maybe she could train by herself? A Genin that didn’t need a squad and was blind. That would sure piss the other kids off. She had smiled at the thought, but frowned at the impossibility since she needed to be in a team to even accept missions. Wasn’t there a better way?
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occ: ha ill be in your first thread on this site
IC: Renima had just finished another task for his dear friend and beloved Hokage. Once returning home he headed towards the memorial thou. Normally he would go to the old dojo or the ramen shop. This time it was diffrent thou, after all it had been five years since that day. Memories flooded his mind of that dear friend. He wanted to fight him one more time so bad. Sure their were many others the Genjutsu master of konoha and leader of the wind shire clan could fight but Kumo was diffrent. He wasnt someone from a diffrent village or someone who he hated, rather a dear friend. He trained with him under sasiko Kage himself after all. Now it was time to return to his memorial once again. He had a bottle of sake and two bowls of ramen with him.
Taking in the smells of the area, the lotus was blooming again and it would be the only time that year. It was as if they opened up just remember him. At least that was what Renima thought and felt with in himself. "great worriors deserve such praise" Kumo had never done many great things but still to Renima he was someone he could never achieve in his childhood.
Coming around the last bend that showed the stone of that generation, he saw a girl with a staff pocking at it with tears in her eyes. Renima turned his head and looked puzzled trying to understand why someone would be so sad on a such a beautiful day. Mabey one of the names on there was of her parents, but she had never been there before and there was no funeral at this time last year. "Kunochi....may I help you with something" He walked closer and set the ramen and sake down and then hugged her. He didnt say anymore just held the girl and let her weep against his clothes. She was a konoha nin after all and it was his job to care for them. That wasnt his reasoning thou, he had compassion for people, lots of it but could seldom show it. _________________

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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 2:02 am Post subject: |
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The girl’s ears could pick up that of someone in the distance as she had held her wooden pole. She had wrapped her right hand around the handle as she had swung her pole as he slowly approached to slam it’s base against the ground letting the sound wave’s ripple through to seek out his form. She could tell his shape, his form and as much detail as possible as his face and features were touch by the sound that traveled through the ground. He was armed, but only with some bottles and a bowl of consumables. “A village local?” she assured herself in a low whisper before she knew what happened next.
”Why the sudden…embrace?” She asked herself as she had felt his clothing comforting her like something soft to lean on. Her face had snuggled on his clothing like it was a soft pillow she would take comfort on those nights when she had cried so many times. She was always alone, but now she didn’t feel like that as her right hand had reached around to touch and easily push away signing that it was enough of the affection. She didn’t mean to be rude, but yet, she couldn’t accept such comfort because she was crying. She was a shinobi, and crying was against her principals.
“I’m…most thankful for your kindness…” she had said as she had simply looked up to reveal her eyes that were misty and once moist cheeks have faint trails of tears since she just let it go all at once during the embrace. “Don’t worry, I’m alright. I was just crying away my pain.” She had said as she had lowered her head a tad bit while grasping her pole with her right hand. She had turned away from the memorial stone as she had stood staring towards the grounds around her lightly tapping her stick about. “I suppose to come here tomorrow after being assigned my squad, but I feel as if I can’t be in a squad. No matter who it is, no one accepts me.” She had thought out loud as she had let every word she say pain her. It always plagued her to know why no one would accept her as she was. Blind, but still the potential was there. _________________
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He let go as she pushed away, he didnt want to force her to do anything, after all that was proably why she was crying in the first place. Looking down into the girls eyes he noticed she was blind, and she had a head band as well. Then He knew what she ment by felt no one would accept her. She didnt look very strong and Sight was a rather important sense. The one people relied on the most which is why Renima rellied on breaking it down.
"I see so your one of the students that passed the exams the other day, Sorry I missed those i was busy in a mission." It would be nice to be around someone who didnt just look at him as a challenge or know his standing in the ninja world. So he made a loud nice as he sat down, before the stone. Then he put his finger to it and found some one named Uchiha, Kumo. Tapping it with one finger and moving across it to get the dust off, then he poured fresh sake down it. emptying the bottle, he didnt like Sake but he knew kumo would love such a taste in his slumber. He bowed his head and prayed over the food and over the village, and people, along with other things. Then he started to eat. "Well Girl if your hungry take the extra ramen. Kumo cant eat it so normally the birds get to it before he does" _________________

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As the leaves fell on the head of Sairyou from the large sycamore trees that protected the memorial, he put his hands in his pockets, as he thumbed through his ryo. His steps came more quickly, as he watched someone defile a member of the lost Uchiha clan. Drawing his hands from his pocket, and coming to a stop, Sairyou drew in breath, as he bellowed, "What are you doin'...get away from my cousin." Though his voice wasn't very loud, seriousness could be heard within the sharp tone. The wind howled, sending Sairyou's hair into a swirl of magneficent blue. His eyes soon shifted from the man with the drink to the girl who stood beside him. His cheeks turned a rosy red as he began to twiddle his thumbs from nervousness. He began to rack his brain for something to say, as he finally thought up a reasonable phrase. "Uh...I see you took...the uh..Genin exams too. I took them too." Clearing his throat, Sairyou pointed to the shiny headband on his head, as he thought of how stupid that sentence was. A slight smile crossed his face, as he began to run his long fingers through his hair. "Hrm...I'm Sairyou...Sairyou Uchiha."
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 8:45 am Post subject: |
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“That’s…quite alright. Everyone has something to do.” Disani insisted excusing the man’s absence. Really on the inside she wish he would’ve seen. She wanted everyone to see what she could do as she displayed the same ability everyone else did even with her lowly condition. She had made a slight smile to hide her repetitive pain that had occurred. Why was the thought of rejection so strong when it came to mind? Such an insolent question. It was because being different wasn’t easy, and it never would be as long as people couldn’t over look the egos of advantages and disadvantages, no matter which one, both would make them bitter towards the other in defeat.
Her head lifted at the sound of the man stroking his finger across the stone. From the sounding of him brushing at the surface and pouring the sake along it, she could see so plainly. The liquid acting like a complete sonar for each little droplet that had moved about the stone until she could see the whole memorial amongst the darkness of her mind. She drew close as she had looked while standing along side the figure seeing where the epicenter of the liquid’s tap had resonated from.
”Kumo Uchiha….” She had said in a faint voice in her mind with her clear observation. She had looked to the stone as it faded back into darkness. She had figured the bottle must’ve been empty as she had took her stick back into hand and tapping it against the ground once like a constant need for a radar, but really, the other person’s heartbeat was so faint, she could make out paining emotions he had. To her, faint heart beats and their impending rhythms were like faces to her. The speed at which they beat would often express happy as day, or sorrowful and heavy with pain. The slow beats were like the time slowing down and death was occurring. She never heard that heart sound though, and she prayed that the day would come if she heard it from that of an ally.
Her head lifted at the offer of the ninja as she had turned to his after hearing his offer. She turned away as her lips slightly parted as if she was ready to slip something between them already. Truth be told, she was hungry, and she had spent so much time crying and feeling sorry for herself, she didn’t think about getting nourishment. She rarely did being in so much drama because of the students constantly reminding her that she couldn’t see.
“Are…are you sure?” she had asked looking towards the ninja. “I wouldn’t want to take your offering towards your friend…” she had said as she looked towards the bowl that sat there untouched except by the hands of the cook who made it she would presume. _________________
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Eating slowly with little chop sticks; moving the rice slowly to his mouth and enjoying it. Each bite of it filled with soy sauce and bits of meat that were added at his request. The other one was made to meat Kumo's liking. He wasn’t really sad about it or really happy, it was something he did for respect. After all it was an old friend and he died with honor. So his heart stayed at a calm rate as it always had, and always did except win adrenaline surged through his veins.
His aged falcon came and landed on Renima shoulder and looked down at the name as well. Strangely the bird didn’t hate that man but loved him as did his master. Hatred would be expected since Kumo captured him and tried to kill him during the exams. It probably had forgotten of those moments thou and just felt the same emotions his master did. Pergin was aging now and would be added to this stone soon, while his master Renima lived on for years to come.
"Yes take it, he would have shared it with you anyways. He would have considered you beautiful." Renima was going to change the subject to something else now but then someone showed up. That was a good thing since his statement was an odd one for an aged man such as his self to say to a young girl. "Aw you’re a cousin of Kumo, well don’t say I’m disrespecting him when you did not know him as I did. Even if you were lucky enough to meet him I spent many days with him in the harshest of trainings, and lived in the same quarters. If you wish to join my honoring of him then come and eat some of this ramen with me" He said with a slight laugh, his heart beat and pulse stayed constant. No change with in them. It took a lot more than that to enrage him. _________________

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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 4:35 pm Post subject: |
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Disani’s ears had picked up the wing beat of the nearby animal as she had noticed it’s talons making taps against it’s roost. It didn’t take to long for her to take consideration of the person who had appeared suddenly as she hadn’t been offended at all, she was really a bit startled that someone from the examination would even follow her here. She turned her head a bit as she had hid her face from him, or at least tried only to reveal a cheek as she had lowered her head a tad bit. “Umm…Disani…” she had muttered as she had introduced a first name only before taking the offer of the ninja.
“Umm…thank you…” she said as she had nodded her head to him and then turned towards the memorial stone. She had took her wooden pole into her right thumbs grasp as she had clapped her palms once and bowed honorably as if to show her appreciation to the fallen ninja who’s name was engraved on the stone. She had taken the extra chopsticks (assuming there are some) along with the bowl as she had sat Indian style crossing one leg with another. She had gave a light tug to tare the wooden sticks away from bondage perfectly as she had positioned the ramen between her fingers of her right hand.
She wasn’t use to speaking to Sairyou or others from the academy like she would older shinobi. Most of the time they would continue to go on and say harsh things about her not being able to see and her being a ninja only being suicide. Some would even say that it was best for her to find another way, but those older didn’t press on that as much. They only wished her luck while complimenting her dedication. Maybe it was because unlike other genin or ranked ninja, they didn’t find her dream so gullible nor questionable. It was just something she just wanted to do.
“The name listed on the stone…” she had began to say as she had slightly lifted her head gazing forward blindly into her empty front view. “Kumo Uchiha…he was someone close to you both, right?” she had asked curiously as she had stared forward with her ears peeled more than her eyes were. _________________
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Sairyou grinned, as his eyes closed tightly, and he moved his hand to the back of his head. Opening his eyes back up, Sairyou said in a booming voice, "He was my cousin...though I didn't 'know' him, I will always know him as a member of the great Uchiha clan." Sairyou bent his knee's as he squatted to the ground, picking up a pair of chop sticks, scooping up large quantity of rice. As he juggled the rice in his mouth, the young Leaf shinobi began to speak again, saying, "So uh...what were you guys doing here, before I came? Talkin' bout fight stradegies?" The wind began to whistle, as Sairyou's mind began to wonder when he was going to get some action. Placing his hand on his chin, he screamed, "Spar!!!" He looked around quickly, as he looked to see if the Disani and the other shinobi were swayed by his comment.
OOC: Sorry for the shortness...I'm new to this.
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"Strategys...why would we talk about such a boring that at a moment like this. Im here to Remeber Kumo, a dear friend and allie of mine. We trained togethor and did several missions with Sasiko Kage. We were instant rivals and yet still friends. We resembled Naruto and Sasuke very well in that asspect." He sighed and looked at each of the genin as he set his bowl down and dropped the chop sticks into the bowl. "yes a spar would work, after all I'm bored and have no students at the moment. Stand and show the past generation that were still alive and kicking. Make them proud. If such a feet is completed Then I will take you as my students." He looked over at the uchiha. "dont take it easy on each other'' He then stepped out of the way and leaned up against a tree waiting for them to begin. _________________

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