Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 7:13 am Post subject: Otamai, Jun update
Name: Otamai Jun
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Height: 5"11
Weight: 165
Appearance:
He has dark dark Gray hair that is held up out of his eyes with his headband baring the mark of Kirigakure. His hair looks black and only in the light can you see shades of gray. He wears a thick black robe tied at his waist with a gray belt with a pouch attached to the right. He wears standard ninja shorts.
Race: Asian, more specifically Japanese
Hair: black, runs down past his shoulders
Eyes: eyes are permanently and completely black
Body: average built
Ethnicity: Land of Fire
Rank: C-rank Genin
Village: Kirigakure
Fame: 200
Title: Genin
Bloodline: Dormant
Main/Favored Weapon: Fan
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style:
Ninjutsu Major
Taijutsu Minor
Personality: Otamai's are said to be the cousin's of Hyuuga because of their bloodline and beliefs. To a Hyuuga, being branched off of the elder and the Uchiha clan, believe that every one has his destiny that can never be changed regardless. To an Otamai, being branched off of the elder and younger, believe that they make their own destinies, but are firm believers of karma, like the first Otamai woman and her cursed son. When Otamai Jun began the practices of a ninja, he was taught that the ultimate good karma is to be a loyal shinobi to Konoha, fellow shinobi, and its villagers, and that the ultimate bad karma is to become a traitor and a missing nin.
Special Abilities:
Spoiler:
Name: Second Mist Style
Requirements: None
Description: This fighting style was created by the Tekagi Master, Syra Ozanaru. Based on the original Mist Style, the passive-aggressive striking allows the figher to control their opponents and their own body as well. They are also trained in the fine art of balance, which many people mistake for agility as it allows a greater advantage in absorbing and avoiding attacks. The style teaches the fighter how to use their lower body in armed combat. A great amount of the stances are based on the switching of upper-body to lower-body weight proportions, in order to maximize control of the enemies weapons and overall balance. The Mist Style utilizes close-combat weapon tactics and enhances the strengths of each individual weapon set while minimalizing the weaknesses with creative, new techniques and attacks. The Second Mist Style is more taxing than the basic weapon styles; people using the Style need high stamina and must be specialized in their weapon.
The Second Mist Style grants a bonus at each rank. Every rank must be learned seperately as two point kinjutsu, from someone who has mastered the level they are training for.
E Rank: +10% Balance, +5% Control
Name: Innengon [Fated Eye]
Requirements: Otamai, Jun only [3 point kinjutsu training for level 2]
Description: Lvl 1 A white pupil appears in Jun's completely black eyes. When activated, the Innengon allows for the user to combine their chakra and their element outside of their body, opening a window to unique jutsu. Innengon heightens vision by making the peripheral as clear as main site, and allows him to "zoom" in and out with his vision, like looking through a telescope. Can zoom in to see a person clearly up to 1 1/2 miles, as if the person was right in front of him. When using any kind of clone technique, the Innengon can see what the clone sees.
Lvl 2 Same affects as Lvl 1, but if the opponent or ally looks directly at the white pupil, then it begins the process of draining their chakra by having it flow out of their body. Can only be deactivated if the Otamai deactivates its, passes out, gets caught in a genjutsu, or dies. But keep in mind it is hard to activate a genjutsu with their body constantly expelling chakra. Lvl 2 is required for the phantom's attacks to connect.
Jutsus:-Five extra slots gained in "Cosmic Alignment" Event.
Basics
Spoiler:
-Henge No Jutsu
-Kawarimi No Jutsu
-Bunshin No Jutsu
Other
Spoiler:
Name: Exploding Kunai
Type: Weapon Jutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Shuriken or Kunai
Description: Akane Shikitei created this jutsu to prove that the Shikitei family was not just stuck using Taijustsu. He uses a chakra string, copied from the puppet masters, to connect to a thrown Shuriken or Kunai. Unlike the puppet masters, he doesn’t have control over the thrown weapon while it is in flight. If the weapon makes contact, he forces the chakra into the weapon causing it to explode, dealing more damage.
Name: Call of the Wind
Type: Nin
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This technique causes the user to be able to "hear the wind". This is to say, they can hear things long distances off and can sense the presence of an invisible enemy of their rank or lower.
Name: Fuuton: Kami Oroshi - Godly Wind from the Mountains
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Wind as main element
Description: This ninjutsu does not require any hand seals to be used. By using their wind natured chakra, a shinobi is able to create a wind vortex in a desired direction. However, this technique does not do any actual damage, only serving to blow away enemies and/or attacks.
Name: Fantomu Debari - Phantom Projection
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Innengon activated (lvl 2 activated in order for attacks to connect)
Description: By infusing the chakra into the air around him, he can create a 'phantom' image of himself. Looks just like the user despite being transparent. Be it only an embodiment of air, the phantom is 2X faster, and can jump 2X higher, but the physical attacks are only half as strong. The user is unable to move and must hold the sheep hand sign. When let go of the handsign the phantom disperses. The Otamai are connected to his phantom by his Innengon. When he closes his eyes, he can see what the phantom sees, while at the same time allowing him to be completely aware of whats happening around him. Especially useful for spying, or infiltration, or intel, without the risk of harm to the user. No distance limitations, just time limitations (each phantom gets 3 posts). When dispersed into an opponents expelled chakra, it thickens the air and slows down his moments. The more phantoms that disperse in his chakra, the slower his movements. If this technique tried to attack an opponent without his chakra being expelled, the phantoms attacks are nothing but air brushing against his body, thus must have lvl 2 Innengon for the phantoms to attack.
Name: Fuuton: Kamaitachi - Cutting Whirlwind
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: A weapon that can create a flow of air, like a fan
Description: This technique creates a powerful wind in a small area. This wind can either be direct or a whirlwind that catches one opponent, but in both cases, this technique has cutting properties, which is its main way of dealing damage. Like most techniques which are only usable with a weapon, it does not require any hand seals.
Name: Fuuton: Kaiten Shuriken - Rotating Shuriken
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Wind as main element
Description: By using their wind nature chakra, the shinobi can manipulate several weapons in the air. They must first channel some of their chakra into the weapons and throw them like projectiles, after which they can control them rather freely, able to change their direction and launch them at an enemy again without having to actually grab and throw the weapons. The amount of weapons that can be controlled this way depends on their size, standing at two for Fuuma Shuriken size projectiles. This technique requires no hand seals, but constantly drains some chakra while the weapons are kept in the air.
Name: Fuuton: Dai Kamaitachi - Great Cutting Whirlwind
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: A weapon that can create a flow of air, like a fan
Description: This technique creates a powerful wind in a wide area, but its main part is that this wind has cutting properties. Basically, it's the same as Kamaitachi, but covering a larger area and more powerful. As most techniques that utilize weapons, this one does not require hand seals.
Name: Fuuton: Mugen Sajin Daitoppa - Infinite Dust Great Breakthrough
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Wind as main element
Description: After taking a deep breath, the user will exhale and create a powerful wind thick with dust. The dust will saw away at anything that gets in its path, dealing light damage, while the wind can blow away large objects and some attacks. This technique does not require any hand seals to be used and, because of the dust, is not subject to the wind element's usual inferiority against fire ninjutsu.
Name: Tafantomu Debari - Multiphantom Projection
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Innengon activated. (lvl 2 activated in order for attacks to connect)
Description: Same as Fantomu Debari - Phantom Projection, but he can make as many as ten phantoms. These phantoms being embodiments of air, are two times faster, and can jump two times higher, although their physical attacks are half as strong. The user can see through the eyes of all the phantoms connected through his Innengon. When attacking an opponent who's not expelling his chakra, the attacks would be just like wind brushing the body.
Name: Hyaku Sensu no Mai [Dance of a Hundred Fans]
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Two scrolls with one hundred Razor Fans between the two
Description: The user summons one hundred fans from two scrolls they carry, then attaches chakra strings to them. The user then controls them like individual strings on a puppet, and can manipulate them to their will. Alternatively, the user can simply attach strings to fans they currently have on their person. Using more than ten at a time will cause a drain on chakra. Can only be used a maximum of three posts.
Name: Fantomu Munashii - Phantom Void
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B-A-S (depending on number of phantoms)
Requirements: Innengon activated. At least one phantom projection.
Description: When a phantom is out on the battlefield, with a few more handseals, he turns that phantom or phantoms into a vortex. Anybody around it is forced towards the epicenter and cut repeatedly as it gets closer. The vortex only happens for about 5 seconds before the chakra that it was molded with disperses. Nothing happens when you touch the epicenter, but to clarify the technique, the air that was to form the phantom begins spinning rapidly, cutting the opponent repeatedly, while the wind is spinning in such a way it tries to suck you in for more cuts. If used in conjuction with Tafantomu Debari A-mi, this considered an S-rank jutsu, with hundreds of vortex's shredding the opponentses body while being sucked into many epicenters, can litterally tear shinobi up into pieces.
Bloodline jutsus: N/A
Jutsus you want to Learn: Weapon techniques/Wind natured
Background:
The Otamai were a people who lived on their own away from the world of ninjas, only known to be a legend. They were a sad people and only a few Otamai would live past 20 due to their uncontrollable bloodlimit. The same thing would happen every generation. When an individuals adulthood began, their eyes turned completely black, and they would see the globes of blue expelling from other people who are also experiencing the curse. Only the healthy would leave their village for medicine and bring it back to the Otamai who were dying.
After generations of enduring this curse, one Otamai who went by the name of Sencha figured he was terminally ill and left the village in search of a way to control the Innengon. He fled to the forests, and meditated. For days at a time without eating. Eventually becoming unhealthy and losing the will to live he closed his eyes and passed out. Only to be awaken by a bear.
"Hey you. What are you doing here in my territory??" A older looking bear with a ninja vest and a scar on his right eye looked down on Sencha curiously.
"Wha-wha...you cant talk??" Shensui whimpered clinging on what seemed the last thread of his life.
"Hah and you could see?? You would think you could only see darkness with eyes as black as yours" The bear replied, "My name is Osu."
Sencha couldnt help but feel empowered by the bear. His orb was larger than any he has ever seen, and he was no where close to dieing. How is it a bears soul is larger and stronger than an Otamai's? So he asked him.
"Hmm soul you say? Tell me more about what your eyes can see." And after Sencha told him about his people the bear couldnt help but laugh, "You people sound weak. Low even. What good is a ninja who cant control his bloodline."?
Sencha replied, "Im no ninja. But if you speak wrong of my people I will fight you as one."
Osu stood up, looked down on Sencha and roared the most devastating roar that forest has ever heard. Birds flew, every mammal looked in that direction, and even the animals under water stopped in their tracks. But Sencha stood up, not afraid, and looked up at Osu with his dieing black eyes.
"Oh ho ho you are fearless!! Or is it the pride of a dieing man protecting his family? You want to stand up to me as a ninja? You should learn the ways of one. I am a dieing bear, of all my battles it seems my age is whats getting the best of me. Come my cub."
For weeks Osu trained Sencha in the ways of the ninja. Learning jutsu after jutsu in just hours at a time. And eventually he learned to control his own bloodline. Sencha seemed to be getting life back but at the same time Osu seemed to be losing his in his old age. Sencha felt that he owed Osu his life, and when he taught what he learned to the people of his village, they would too. Sencha offered Osu to return to the village with him, but Osu had a better idea.
"It seems we BOTH owe each other one. I saved your life, and you offered me a place where mine can end. But I have a better idea," he pulled out a scroll from one of the pockets of his vest and opened it,"This is a contract. From me to you. From my sons to your sons. To a bear, territory is everything, and we rule this forest. Eventually there is gunna be some entity to try and take our place as the rulers. And the will you have to protect your cubs now that they are taught the ninja way. I can not accept your territory but heres the deal. You can send us to our own territory where we could live freely and we will be your allies. I can already foresee that in order for you to live, you must take up this life, and so will your children. And with this contract, your children and my children will fight together. And the most worthy of your sons can sign the contract and summon us as well," and Sencha agreed. The last technique Osu taught him was the summoning technique, which he learned in only a few days. Signed the contract with the blood spilt from training, and returned to his village a hero. Taught all the Otamai to control the bloodline and their life-lines expanded. They began living long and prosperous lives. The next generation after Sencha were bored. Having this power and not being able to use it. Training each other just to live, but to them it felt without meaning. They decided it'd be best to live the life of the ninja. The generation after them especially agreed after discovering the rewards after missions. Money to support their family and to make it possible for them to live in a major village.
With this in mind Sencha went on a journey and sought out the closest village to offer their services as shinobi in exchange for land thats near the village. They discovered the Kirigakure first and discovered that the Mizukage has died. The Otamai felt this was the perfect opportunity to prove their strength to a village. They felt that if they succeed in helping the village through this dark time, then his family would have good times to come with this village in the future. Karma.
Otamai Jun is seen as a prodigy of the Otamai as his chakra has a slight different ability than the others. His goodwill lead him to want to help the people of Kirigakure in their time of need. He is predicted as the next most powerful Otamai after his grandfather Senchu. His father inherited the bloodline as well, but feels that its wiser for him to stay at home with his wife and not involve himself with ninjas. Jun on the other hand wants to become a great ninja like his grandfather, make a good name for the Otamai's, and earn money in the meantime to help support his family.
Genin Arc
Genin Arc
Weeks have passed by since he had graduated Kirigakure Ninja academy. He was completely unprepared for what had happened next. Only after a day of training with Ozanaru Syra and Uryuu Mokutou, the village was going through an internal affair, the council fighting back against the Hokage. Jun was the first one at the scene and immediately began to help the villagers out of the crater, but the damage was done, and there was more to come. The hospital and the Kage mansion blew up, and Jun was hit by flying debris. Injured, he couldn't move, or think, and was prepared to accept death, when in that moment, he was saved by Ozanaru Syra. Since then he has owed her his life.
The next day he was dazed, confused, lost, sitting at the Great Naruto bridge, the nights events reoccurring in his mind. That is when he met Shiatamme Genso, who showed him that Jun is affiliated with wind natured chakra, to help him grow as a shinobi. With a new sense of direction, and a will to get stronger, he rummaged over what used to be the Kage mansion, and found a set of hidden scrolls. He stole them and used them to train in ninja arts, particularly with the 'Secret Scroll' who claimed to be a companion of the Shodaime of Kirigakure. Jun made a deal with the scroll, that he will show the scroll the Otamai clan in return to giving him access of all the jutsu that the scroll knows. The scroll accepted, and Jun took it along with him on a mission with the promise that on the way back he will meet the Otamai clan.
The mission was a success, and as promised he made a stop at his clans encampment. There he witnessed new traditions of the clan, and new techniques developed for the Innengon. Organized by their element, he battled the strongest of the wind-natured Otamai, Kairo, and made a deal. If Jun won the match, he will leave with all of the newly developed wind-natured jutsu, if Kairo won, then it proves that Jun has rotten karma and must be banished from the clan. It ended up a draw, and they both kept their word. Jun recieved a scroll of all the wind-natured Otamai jutsu from Kairo, and in return, he is banished from the clan. He returned to the village with a new mindset, still feeling allied with Kirigakure, but he no longer had a motive to go by, he no longer needs to prove his worth seeing as he's banished, and he no longer felt he needed to make a name for the Otamai. Although he knew that good karma was ultimately on his side. _________________ Roleplaying Characters: Otamai, Jun Nikko Coloso Ikego Yokosuka Noko-ido, Minari RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: C-Genin/C-genin/B-genin Village: Kirigakure/Konohagakure/Iwagakure Fame: 200 Reputation: Training Points: 85 Inventory:
Whats the point of the Template change, if you are doing it here? Also, For anything that would normally require a Rank train, please place the links in this thread. That includes both Rank Trains, all missions, and Jutsu Gains, and Special Abilities/Fighting styles. _________________ Reilina(Inactive) Roleplaying Characters: Otori, Shizuka Miyu Ava Kimera Amimura, Jato Sampson, Ashe RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: SS Chunnin-D Genin-E Genin-E Genin Village: Missing-Kumogakure-Iwagakure-Kirigakure Fame: 915~0~200~0 Reputation: Training Points: 1711 Inventory: Fan Sword Kazemasa, 10 Senbon, 10 Kunai, 3 Blank Scrolls, and 1 Peice of Chalk -
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For edits as big as this; you can really do it yourself, I guess. It's not skin off the mods nose.
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