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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 8:58 am Post subject: Nindou Metai |
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Name: Nindou Metai
Age: 12
Gender: Male.
Height: 5 foot 11
Weight: 95
Appearance: http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2051/1908268396_5de0c6caf8.jpg?v=0
Race: Asian/American?
Hair: pale blue
Eyes: blue
Body: scrawny with almost no muscle.
Ethnicity: Kumogakure
Rank: E
Reputation: 0
Village: Kumogakure
Bloodline: Dormant
Main/Favored Weapon: Bo.
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu major, Taijutsu minor.
Starting Inventory: none.
Personality: Cool headed, he walks into any mission with a bored attitude, wanting action every second. However, when he fights, he thinks through each move, planning ahead and analyzing his enemy's moves to make a counterattack. When working as a team, he'll sit in the back watching while his allies fight. If they begin to lose, he'll step out and fight, using the gathered information to finish the enemy off. If his allies are winning, he'll watch or work on something else, perhaps even head off recklessly to continue the mission.
Special Abilities: None
Jutsus: Bunshin, Henge, Kawarimi
Name: Wind Release: Burst
Type: Nin
Rank: D
Requirements: Two Shuriken
Description: The user channels wind chakra into two shuriken. When thrown, they will act like normal shuriken, but when they hit, they will release a small blast of wind chakra that causes a small amount of damage, and has a small chance of making a shallow cut.
Bloodline jutsus: N/A
Jutsus you want to Learn: Wind Release: Burst, Wind Release: Air Bullet Barrage,
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background: Hailing from Kumogakure, Nindou was considered a lazy bum when in class. However, he passed the graduation exam, and he also managed to score top ranks. He just never seemed to study. His parents were killed in a mission, so he wanders around Kumogakure when he's bored, or sometimes he'll drop by the Academy and watch the other kids. His teachers always prodded him to work with kunai and shuriken, but his real main weapon is the Bo, and when he gets strong enough, he wants to use a spear. He doesn't work out, and his skin is extremely light and unmarred, so many mistake him for a girl. To those who do..........well, let's just say that gets under his skin.
Roleplaying Characters:
Nindou Metai
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Village: Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: N/A Inventory: Empty
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 4:44 pm Post subject: |
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You're not supposed to remove things from the template. Even if you don't have a bloodline nor bloodline jutsu, you'll need those in there with none and N/A.
I'll cover the rest later. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0 Reputation: Training Points: 1875 Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 9:16 pm Post subject: |
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As Syra said put N/A next to bloodline if you are giving him one.
As well specify your fighting style. Is it Ninjutsu Specalist and Taijutsu Minor, or Ninjutsu Major and taijutsu Major? With no bloodline those are the two that seem likely. though you can also have Ninjutsu Major with taijutsu and Genjutsu minor. anyway fix that up and then everything looks fine. _________________ ****Midnight Shadow****
--Made by Yoko
The supreme irony of life is that hardly anyone gets out of it alive.
-Robert Heinlein
Sharingan points 991/1000
Roleplaying Characters:
Dante Uchiha
Karen Daikonran
Emily Hyuuga
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S.Genin---D.Genin---C.Genin Village: Konohagakure--Sunagakure---Konohagakure Fame: 0---0---0 Reputation: Training Points: 150 Inventory: Empty
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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 12:54 pm Post subject: |
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and Please take that off... ~_~ You can start with a SA if you want, just talk with the creator first. Also, it's good to put down Jutsus that you do wish to learn because it makes it easier for you to get a Sensei. _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 1:16 pm Post subject: |
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I take it that it's a Custom Bloodline you're wanting to make, right? If so, you'll need to post it in the "Post Bloodlines" section, after you meet the requirements. Until, and if, it gets passed, it'll be classified as "Dormant". Up to you. You don't have to start off with a Bloodline. _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 3:24 pm Post subject: |
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Other than that, looks fine. Objections? _________________ Shigane, Makoto
Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both] Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto) Fame: 2,000, 0, 0 Reputation: Training Points: 650 Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)
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