Nataku Tsutaro

Red Dragon · Posted: Thu May 01, 2008 12:12 pm Post subject: Nataku Tsutaro

Name: Nataku tsutaro
Age: 12
Gender: male
Height: 4'7''
Weight: 180

Appearance: Wearing all black with a black long sleeve shirt tucked into belt (belt goes over the lower part of the shirt) around waiste, black saggy pance with pance legs tucked into black boots. a big black cape around shoulders. hair did back in a ponytail. twin kodachis strapped in an X on back behind the cape with the handles shown. fingureless gloves that has ends of sleeves tucked into them.

Race: Japanese
Hair:black
Eyes: black
Body: faily skinny with some muscle texture.
Ethnicity: land of fire

Level/Rank:Genin
Village: Leaf
Bloodline:furagan (if it gets passed)
Main/Favored Weapon:twin kodachis
Element: Fire
Fighting Type/Style:ninjutsu, taijutsu
Starting Inventory: 50 shiriken, 30 kunai, twin kodachis

Strengths:+above average speed
+very social
+ average taijutsu
+above average ninjutsu

Weaknesses: -below average strength
-doesn't get good grades
-needs help remembering hand sighns
-below average genjutsu

Jutsus:clone jutsu, substitution jutsu, transformation jutsu

Bloodline jutsus: fire toss[ one handed sighns to create light flames imn each hand that don't do much damage (if bloodline gets passed)]

Jutsus that wants to learn: all basic jutsus

background: Natakus former village was destroyed by giant gaurdian wolves. Kutaku (Natakus father took Nataku while he was a baby and left him in the leaf village. The leave villagers took care and raised Nataku. while growing up Nataku realised that he was not born in the leaf village. Nataku was not seen as the most popular kid in school,but he was some what popular even though he was not as popular as he wanted to be with the ladies. Some times smaller children would follow him around. he has a couple same aged friends and others just hang out with him just to hang out. Nataku is perverted and admits it he will sneek a peek in a womans bath when ever he gets a chance. Nataku vowed to find his father and find out about his myseriuos past and his former village. Nataku is also determined to be hokage one day. Will it come to pass?

Missions Completed: (All 0 For Now, When You Complete Missions Post In Template Changes.)
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
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Nataku tsutaro is a mysterious ninja from a village that was destroyed by three gardian wolves. his father (Kutaku Tsutaro) left him in the hidden leave village.
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Nataku tsutaro is a mysterious ninja from a village that was destroyed by three gardian wolves. his father (Kutaku Tsutaro) left him in the hidden leave village.

Roleplaying Characters:
No RPC
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: genin
Village: leaf village
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 2 Kodachi , 50 shuriken, 30 kunai, 3 food pills
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A

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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Fri May 02, 2008 1:32 pm Post subject:

Nobody's going to tell him? Fine, I'll do it. There's a number of things wrong with this profile but I'm much to lazy to state them all. But for starters, use the template.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Kidaku Itichi
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin
Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure
Training Points: 185
Inventory: 1 Katana
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 5 FC

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Ballian · Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 9:32 am Post subject:

I am at my dad's of course i am not gonna tell him lol.

Oi, kid! like syra said, history needs to be much much bigger.

Samurai sword...well uhhhh....yeah we don't got any, basically lets put it this way.

Your whole template needs to be "Longer and detailed"
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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 2:56 pm Post subject:

*cracks knuckles* Alright, dude, here's what's wrong:

1. Need more on your appearance. Put a pic down, if you can.
2. Need at least one more Strength and Weakness.
3. Take out anything in "( )", unless you're explaining something.
4. And it's not just "Substitute", it's "Substitution Jutsu".
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 12.5

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Kutaku Tsutaro · Status: Offline Banned Joined: 01 May 2008 Posts: 96

cool. so when you start fighting I will be after you, MY SON!

Roleplaying Characters:
No RPC
Np RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: genin
Village: village hidden in the mist
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: one kodachi, 30 shuriken, 30 kunais, 5 energy foodpills
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 3:34 pm Post subject:

The only other thing I really see wrong is the "Height" and "Weight". Unless you can explain it in your background, 5'7'' is a bit tall for a typical 12-year-old.
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 12.5

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MinatoNamikaze · Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:44 pm Post subject:

Trashed. Contact a moderator to move this back.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Ezekiel
None
None
None
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin(SS Rank)
Village: Iwagakure
Training Points: 230
Inventory:
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 35

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MinatoNamikaze · Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 1:49 pm Post subject:

Moved back.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Ezekiel
None
None
None
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin(SS Rank)
Village: Iwagakure
Training Points: 230
Inventory:
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 35

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MinatoNamikaze · Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 1:50 pm Post subject:

-doesn't get good grades

Technically I don't think that is a weakness at all.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Ezekiel
None
None
None
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin(SS Rank)
Village: Iwagakure
Training Points: 230
Inventory:
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 35

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MinatoNamikaze · Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 8:18 pm Post subject:

Trashed, this member is banned.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Ezekiel
None
None
None
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin(SS Rank)
Village: Iwagakure
Training Points: 230
Inventory:
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 35

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