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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 11:10 pm    Post subject: Mizuchi Reply with quote

Name: Mizuchi
Description: This sword, though not well known throughout the great five countries, is legendary throughout other parts of the world. It is the sword handed down by the Gods to a Water Dragon named Mizuchi for his faithful service. It is incredibly powerful and incredibly difficult to obtain. The Dragon long ago decided to lend his sword to the strongest man he could find. The man who could defeat him in single combat. For anyone who has not defeated the Dragon who tries to wield the sword it will be incredibly heavy. So heavy, in fact, that no living person could pick it up.

With the sword comes Mizuchi's mark, a tattoo that runs up the wielder's sword arm. It depicts the Water Dragon, swirling around in coils around the arm. The tattoo is strangely opalescent and colorful. It is a mark that the wielder has defeated the legendary dragon and can wield the sword. The sword itself is also dragon themed. The handle is decorated like the coils of the long snake-like dragon body. It has no Tsuba, and instead the Dragon's head takes it's place. The slightly curved blade emerges from the Dragon's mouth. The blade is unadorned and only about 30 inches long.

This blade greatly increases the user's control over water. The user's jutsus may take on various dragon-like appearances, though it is purely aesthetic. It increases the power of the wielder's water jutsus. It also is exceptionally good at cutting through forms held together by chakra and blocking chakra based attacks.
Rank: S
Element: Water
Other Requirements: Fight Mizuchi and become his champion.

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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 11:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This weapon is so beyond S that it isn't even funny.

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Lol.



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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 10:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright, let's call it DOUBLE S RANKED
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PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2008 12:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It would be surely beyond that still.

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PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2008 12:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lol, kaeor.

thats called a god modded sword xD
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PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2008 11:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Rejected

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PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2008 9:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright, I was trying to bargain here, ya know, ask for more than I expected, you can give me less than I want, then we compromise.

Anyways, I've changed it up a lot and greatly reduced the power of the weapon.
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PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2008 10:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I see.

Anyways im not sure of the great control over water.  From what im thinking your talking about how Gaara controlled sand but this is only what im thinking, I could be wrong.

And the ability to disrupt water jutsus by touching them with your blade and injected chakra is a absolute no-no in my opinion but im not sure.  I'll wait til another mod says something.

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PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2008 11:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not thinking Gaara sand thing, I'm thinking of the ease with which one can produce water jutsus.

For the jutsu disruption, It needs the same amount of chakra as the jutsu takes to create in the first place. It's like a very limited jutsu shou like ability. Firstly, you much be touching it, and secondly it must be a water jutsu. I could change it to make it just better at cutting through things which have forms held together by chakra. It would actually probably be better as an ability, but it wouldn't look as cool.
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PostPosted: Tue May 20, 2008 12:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't see any major problems besides the water control. Maybe a bit of control over water but I think increasing water jutsu strength is ability enough. Otherwise it seems fairly balanced.

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