Laughing Demon of Heaven

Yoko · Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:33 pm Post subject: Laughing Demon of Heaven

If this is accepted, should I edit it into my template?

Name: Laughing Demon of Heaven
Name: Mai

Type: GenJutsu

Range: 20 Feet

Leader: Shunsui Mai

Description: The user stands roughly twenty feet away from the opponent and molds his chakra with his psychological thoughts. The caster can mold his GenJutsu chakra, with the thoughts in his/her subconcious and make them appear to almost be real. The more creative or psychotic the caster is, the more dreadful the images can appear to be.

Usually, Yoko's illusion involves a number of roots sprouting form the ground and completely wrapping the opponent up. The ground beneath them crumbles as a large wall of fire rises and scorches them. If the affect is successful, the opponent will literally feel as if their own body had been crushed and burnt.

Performing this illusion requires an incredible amount of mental strain. If the caster does not have enough willpower or intellect before using the GenJutsu, they themselves can be convinced that the illusions are real, and easily be overtaken by their own attack.

Number of Members Allowed: 20

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No eye, No ear, No nose, No tongue

No body, No mind, No shape, No shape.

Roleplaying Characters:
Yoko Mai

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: B-Ranked Missing-nin
Village: None
Training Points: 0
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 0

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Lavathing9 · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 8:49 am Post subject:

pretty good........about equal in advantages and disadvantage....

One thing though...A little too advance for an AS (Academy Student)....You can be in the CLAN, but wait to inherit the BLOODLINE til you are Genin, is ok with you?

Anyway, you need to reapply your template with that clan. But to make it easier for you I can kick the Template that is already approved back over to the Creation Center?? Or do you just want to Remake it?

Please Note: The ONLY thing you can change is the clan.....nothing else....since your RPC is already approved. The ONLY time when you reapply your Template and it CAN be changed is when you get up a rank:

such as AS>Genin. Then you may add the new jutsu, change History to match your RPing, etc. I think you get it right?
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"I will hold you down, fold you in
Deep, deep, deep in the fiction we live" ~From Autumn to Ashes
^{Lavathing9 | Management}

Roleplaying Characters:
Mai, Lava
Miyazu, Sano
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin
Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: 0
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A

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Yoko · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 2:41 pm Post subject:

I just want to change my clan.
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No eye, No ear, No nose, No tongue

No body, No mind, No shape, No shape.

Roleplaying Characters:
Yoko Mai

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: B-Ranked Missing-nin
Village: None
Training Points: 0
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 0

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Lavathing9 · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 4:10 pm Post subject:

ok, so you are in the clan, you CAN (if you want to) get the Bloodline when you become a Genin...

Blah Blah Blah,

Accepted and Moved.

AND Kicked your Template back to 'Post Profiles'.....btw, you can still RP even though it's not in the Accepted section (the Template).
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"I will hold you down, fold you in
Deep, deep, deep in the fiction we live" ~From Autumn to Ashes
^{Lavathing9 | Management}

Roleplaying Characters:
Mai, Lava
Miyazu, Sano
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin
Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: 0
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A

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