Kuromaru Pet Dog

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Amegaki · Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:01 pm Post subject: Kuromaru Pet Dog

Name: Kuromaru
Age: 1 years
Gender: Male
Height: 2'3"
Weight:27 Lbs

Appearance:

Race:Dog
Hair: Black and White
Eyes: One blue one Green
Body: Muscular, Small,

Main/Favored Weapon: Claws and Teeth.
Element: Suiton
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu
Starting Inventory: Leash.

Personality: A rather loud dog that completely opposites Amegaki`s He loves to play, Loves to fight, and is extremely playful, Very protective of Amegaki

Jutsus:None

Background:
Kuromaru was a small orphan dog that Amegaki found on a traverse through the forestry through the Hi no Kuni forest. He found Kuromaru curled up bleeding near a tree. When he was approached, Kuromaru snarled at him and showed his teeth. When Amegaki sat down next to him and began talking to him, he uncurled and he could begin taking care of his wounds. After healing him he was takign with Amegaki and they became best freinds.

Roleplaying Characters:
Amegaki Inuzuka
Vatu Kaji
Kei Ryuuk
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin S ~ Genin B ~ Genin E
Village: Kumo ~ Kiri ~ Missing
Fame: 160~0~0
Reputation:
Training Points: 10
Inventory: Mizukami (concealed), Various colored scrolls.

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Sench · Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:07 pm Post subject:

I believe I told you this before, only category names are supposed to be in bold. Because it's meant to make the profile easier to read and better looking, not the other way around.
1. A dog year is the same as human, 365 days
2. The proper word for gender is "male" (or "female", but not in this case)
3. Race: Husky - how does this make sense? It should say "dog", and you can add a specific if you want to, but "husky" wouldn't make sense for any kind of creature
3a. A minor thing, but why would its eyes be different color
4. Level/Rank, Type and Contract says "only for summons" in the template
5. Your pet gets one element
6. How does a dog wear a jacket?

Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Akayuri Rosu
Henshin Ellen

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ None (S) ~ Jounin (A)
Village: Leaf ~ Leaf ~ Leaf
Fame: 2000 ~ 0 ~ 600
Reputation:
Training Points: 2160
Inventory: Magma Spear, Daggertail ~ Infinity Bow, Kris ~ Medical Supplies

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Yoko · Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:14 pm Post subject:

Sench · Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:17 pm Post subject:

I have. I also see the words "they became best friends" in the background. And I'm convinced only a pervert and/or sadist would make an animal (mind you, this isn't a summon) wear clothes. It's never really cold in the Naruto world from what we've seen. Only in Snow Country, but a) filler b) not on NRC.

Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Akayuri Rosu
Henshin Ellen

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ None (S) ~ Jounin (A)
Village: Leaf ~ Leaf ~ Leaf
Fame: 2000 ~ 0 ~ 600
Reputation:
Training Points: 2160
Inventory: Magma Spear, Daggertail ~ Infinity Bow, Kris ~ Medical Supplies

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Amegaki · Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:21 pm Post subject:

Its not really a Jacket its more like what Kakashi's nindog wears and HEY I AINT A PERV Lol. (Sorry if im gettin on your nerves about breaking rules and such)

-Thanks
~Dylan

You have never heared of a husky??
Their eyes come in like separate colors.

( I may be mixing up the name of the dog)

Roleplaying Characters:
Amegaki Inuzuka
Vatu Kaji
Kei Ryuuk
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin S ~ Genin B ~ Genin E
Village: Kumo ~ Kiri ~ Missing
Fame: 160~0~0
Reputation:
Training Points: 10
Inventory: Mizukami (concealed), Various colored scrolls.

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Sench · Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:25 pm Post subject:

Out of the seven things I commented on, you are worrying about the least important one. And once again, Kakashi's dogs are summons, this isn't

Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Akayuri Rosu
Henshin Ellen

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ None (S) ~ Jounin (A)
Village: Leaf ~ Leaf ~ Leaf
Fame: 2000 ~ 0 ~ 600
Reputation:
Training Points: 2160
Inventory: Magma Spear, Daggertail ~ Infinity Bow, Kris ~ Medical Supplies

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Amegaki · Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:27 pm Post subject:

Completed.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Amegaki Inuzuka
Vatu Kaji
Kei Ryuuk
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin S ~ Genin B ~ Genin E
Village: Kumo ~ Kiri ~ Missing
Fame: 160~0~0
Reputation:
Training Points: 10
Inventory: Mizukami (concealed), Various colored scrolls.

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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:28 pm Post subject:

Blue eyes usually refer to blindness in animals.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E
Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 1875
Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles

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Amegaki · Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:29 pm Post subject:

Mmkay
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Roleplaying Characters:
Amegaki Inuzuka
Vatu Kaji
Kei Ryuuk
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin S ~ Genin B ~ Genin E
Village: Kumo ~ Kiri ~ Missing
Fame: 160~0~0
Reputation:
Training Points: 10
Inventory: Mizukami (concealed), Various colored scrolls.

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Sandalphon · Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 4:33 pm Post subject: