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PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:32 pm    Post subject: Koruno Naru - Missing Nin Reply with quote

Name: Koruno Naru - None
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Height: 167CM/5'6''
Weight:   64.8kg, 147LBS

Appearance: He is usually wearing blue baggy pants and a black t-shirt all wrapped up in a dark blue cloak. He has a scar along his left arm from his past. His nose is broken because he refuses any treatment for it. His shuriken hostler is on his left leg even though he is right handed. He is very lean and skinny. Usually seen with headphones in from his mp3 player. His eyes are usually wide and open, always scanning the area for danger or an opening.  Usually he is seen with his hair in front of his eyes, but when he moves the hair from his face, girls tend to think he is cute.

    Race: Caucasian
    Hair:  Black Mid-length hair that is slicked down that covers his eyes.
    Eyes: Green
    Body: Lean
    Ethnicity:  Kaminari no Kuni (Land of Thunder)



Rank:   E
Reputation: 0
Village: Missing Nin

    Fame: 0
    Title: E-Rank Missing Nin

Bloodline: None
Main/Favored Weapon: Tekagi
Element: Lightning
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory: Tekagi(1),Shuriken(20), Kunai(10), MP3 Player(1)

Personality: One who hates to be called pathetic. He gets worked up whenever someone calls him that. Usually he is a laid back guy never really getting in any fights or putting in much effort. One of his favorite things to do is to travel. He is sorta desperate with the ladies because of his broken nose.


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Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: This technique must be mastered by any ninja who has graduated from the shinobi academy. It's the most basic technique a Gennin must know, since it can be a real lifesaver. This ninjutsu creates a simple illusion clone identical to the caster. The clone however has no physical properties and will disperse the moment it is touched.

Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Henge is the basic skill a ninja must know to become a Gennin. It's mostly used as a decoy, to confuse the opponent by transforming into somebody that's an ally with the enemy, and then attack from the back when he's not expecting it. This technique can easily be combined with other jutsus for a more powerful effect, such as with Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique].

Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Kawarimi is a widely used and very famous skill among Shinobi. The user uses speed to their advantage, and grabs an item from the environment and places it on his/her current position while moving out of the way. This is clearly an evasion technique used to dodge attacks; however it can be linked with other jutsus or attacks to create massive damage if done properly.

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Jutsus you want to Learn: Any blade ninjutsu skills, Any Taijutsu skills


Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background:
Naru was once a ninja from the Land of Thunder, but he felt as though he had a higher calling. That higher calling happened to be a poor homeless bum whom nobody paid much attention to. However he seems to be well adept in using his father’s Tekagi, which he left behind.

His father was a good ninja. Not too special and not to weak. However he did excel at stealth killing. Ever since he was a child, Naru’s father had been teaching him the art of stealth secretly by playing “Extreme Hide and Go Seek” and as he got old “Infiltration.” Since his school didn’t test those types of skills, he was always viewed as a below average student.

When he was a young child, he used to get picked on and many people called him pathetic. However, one the people who called him that, was wound up dead. It went on until he left the Land of Thunder. He is currently wanted in many outer countries for stealing of bread and money.

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Inventory: Empty

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

this looks good except this part

Ethnicity: Kaminari no Kuni and Ishi no Kuni (Land of Thunder and Land of Stone)

how is he from two different countries?
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 2:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

( I know I shouldn't just barge in) But I think he meant his parents were from both those lands. Kinda' like mine were from land of fire and land of iron,you know?
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 2:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

in anycase you have a problem with teh bolded coding~

Just scan over the template a bit, and try to spot it by using preview, or whatever.

Backround could be a bit longer, but meh isn't too important at this stage of the process, the coding is all that needs attention.

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[b] [/b]


It's these bad boy's right here in case you didn't know or whatever ^^ (Had trouble the first time with this sites coding myself, know what it feels like XD)
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 3:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeah, just keep your descriptions of each category un-bolded (correct me if I'm wrong), the titles of each category MUST be bold. Otherwise, I'd say it's gewd :3
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 4:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ethnicity:

means where is your rpc from not the parents. his parents can be discussed in the background/history of the rpc but Ethnicity is for your rpc.
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 5:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you're not going to use a picture to go along with your appearance then it will need to be slightly more detailed than that.

Ehh...Land of Stone is Tsuchi no kuni, why is your bloodline field blank?
And please sort out the bolding D:
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 5:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

your title will be E-Rank Missing Ninja
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 7:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bloodline cannot be unknown.

It either is [bloodline name], None, or the BL is WIP.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 7:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ElmaSuyu wrote:
Bloodline cannot be unknown.

It either is [bloodline name], None, or the BL is WIP.

In which case you would put down dormant...



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