Kody Ralamar: Konoha Genin

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Fuuchou · Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:11 pm Post subject: Kody Ralamar: Konoha Genin

Name: Ralamar Kody (Real first name: Koshano)
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Height: 5'3"
Weight: 108 Lbs

Appearance: He is a tall athletic young man with scrawney shoulders and a serious face. He tends to wear his headband on his head where it goes. He wears a cool silver vest that exposes his belly button, and leather puffed out near the bottom pants. His shoes are cloth-like material that are more like socks. There is a tribal design wrapped around his right forearm

Race: Asian/Caucasian
Hair: Rainy and Brown
Eyes: Mossy Green
Body: Athletic but scrawny at the same time
Ethnicity: Konoha

Level/Rank: D-Rank
Village: Konoha (Leaf Village)

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Title:

Bloodline: Dormant
Main/Favored Weapon: Tegaki
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu; Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory: 10 Kunai, 5 Shurikens, and 2 Tegaki(One for each hand)

Personality: He is a very eccentric and happy young boy. He is quick witted and always ready for a good fight but doesn't plan on anything. When he trains he goes to the very limit of his strength until his poor body gives in. He is valient and obedient but strong and free willed.

Special Abilities: None

Jutsus: Henge no Jutsu, Kawarimi no Jutsu, Bushin no Jutsu

Name: Hayabusa Otoshi - Peregrine Falcon Drop
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: A rather simple move that can only be used under certain conditions. The user will attempt to grab their opponent from behind while the latter are in the air and lock their ankles around their neck, restricting movement to a degree, while also grabbing them with their arms. They will then change position in the air so that the opponent is falling towards the ground head first. The point of this technique is to slam the enemy's head into the ground at a high speed. While quite deadly, this technique is hard to initiate and not that hard to break out of.

Name: Kage Buyou - Shadow Dance
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This taijutsu technique is utilized to get behind your opponent in mid-air. The user would usually kick their opponent upward from a low position, launching them into the air, and follow them using this jutsu. They will appear right behind the target, repeating their position like a shadow. From there, a number of attack options is presented to the user.

Konoha Senpuu [Leaf Spinning Wind]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This taijutsu attack uses a combination of speed, strength, and the element of surprise. It is a perfect move to link up with other aerial attacks. For this taijutsu, the ninja first disappears using a really fast movement. The opponent, obviously, is totally confused. However, seconds later, the attacking shinobi appears just below their opponent, and by raising his dominant leg, kicks the enemy right on the chin. This would send the victim flying up into the air. The attacker can then proceed with an even more devastating follow-up attack. Leaf spinning wind is very hard to dodge, since the movement is so fast the opponent won't probably know about the attack until he gets kicked and is already high up in the air.

Bloodline jutsus: Dormant

Jutsus you want to Learn: Hayabusa Otoshi, Konoha Senpuu, Kage Buyou, Konoha Daisenpu, Renge Lotus, Shishi Rendan

Green= Learned
Red= Unlearned

Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: Kody was a healthy child born in Konoha without a worry or care in the world. When it came to fifth grade, he leared how fun it was to fight. Not just to fight, but to win. Because of this happiness that came from winning fights at recess he transfered to learn to be a ninja. He practiced much ninjutsu there while secretly increasing his taijutsu skill outside of school. When he passed the final genin exam, he was proud to be a true ninja. He soon bought his favortite weapons and learned to use them quite well. Since his graduation he has dedicatated himself to mastering taijutsu while keeping an eye on ninjutsu to make sure he doesn't end up like Rock Lee.

Of course since he has no actual friends at the current moment he is completely dedicated to his training. He was always one for the friends, but when he joined the Acadamy he started fresh and spent so much time with his training, that he never made time to make friends. So as he is friendless he will train and do missions when he needs the money.

Roleplaying Characters:
Ralamar Kody
Kirimaru Ichisame
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin; D-Rank~ Genin; E-Rank~ Genin; E-Rank
Village: Konoha
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 25
Inventory: 10 Kunai, 5 Shurikens, 2 Tagaki ~ 10 Small Weapon Seal Scrolls

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Yasuo Amano · Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:13 pm Post subject:

Very good, but a few things you need to change;
Rank should be Genin, E-rank
More personality please?
Perhaps a tad more on background
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Roleplaying Characters:
Yasuo Amano
Uchiha Midaru
Sakumo Itichi
Seikimaru
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Tsuchikage (SS) ~ Missing-Nin (S) ~ Genin (D)
Village: Iwagakure ~ None ~ Iwagakure
Fame: 2250 ~ 0 ~ 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 3025
Inventory: Sakumo: Kunaix5, Shurikenx20

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Sench · Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:14 pm Post subject:

Fegte · Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:15 pm Post subject:

Personality is fine, as it gets the point across.

The other two yaso said are true though.

though I am not a mod
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Fuuchou · Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:22 pm Post subject:

You all work fast! I fixed what was necessary. Any better?
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Kirimaru's Total Clay Points: 100

Roleplaying Characters:
Ralamar Kody
Kirimaru Ichisame
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin; D-Rank~ Genin; E-Rank~ Genin; E-Rank
Village: Konoha
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 25
Inventory: 10 Kunai, 5 Shurikens, 2 Tagaki ~ 10 Small Weapon Seal Scrolls

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Yasuo Amano · Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:23 pm Post subject:

All seems fine.
I would push for more personality, but that's just me.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Yasuo Amano
Uchiha Midaru
Sakumo Itichi
Seikimaru
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Tsuchikage (SS) ~ Missing-Nin (S) ~ Genin (D)
Village: Iwagakure ~ None ~ Iwagakure
Fame: 2250 ~ 0 ~ 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 3025
Inventory: Sakumo: Kunaix5, Shurikenx20

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:23 pm Post subject:

Looks fine to me. Objections?
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Shigane, Makoto

Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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Sench · Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:25 pm Post subject:

Approved

Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Akayuri Rosu
Henshin Ellen

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ None (S) ~ Jounin (A)
Village: Leaf ~ Leaf ~ Leaf
Fame: 2000 ~ 0 ~ 600
Reputation:
Training Points: 2160
Inventory: Magma Spear, Daggertail ~ Infinity Bow, Kris ~ Medical Supplies

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Sench · Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 5:57 pm Post subject:

Moved to inactive

Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Akayuri Rosu
Henshin Ellen

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ None (S) ~ Jounin (A)
Village: Leaf ~ Leaf ~ Leaf
Fame: 2000 ~ 0 ~ 600
Reputation:
Training Points: 2160
Inventory: Magma Spear, Daggertail ~ Infinity Bow, Kris ~ Medical Supplies

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:15 pm Post subject:

Moved back per user's request. Please update RPC to updated Template.

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Shigane, Makoto

Sharingan Points= 2,500; -50/-10

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Hyuuga, Setsuka
Itichi, Melfina
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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