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Kaijo, Nushi's Mountain Wolf
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:15 pm    Post subject: Kaijo, Nushi's Mountain Wolf Reply with quote

Name: Kaijo
Age: 8 years old
Gender: Male
Height: Six feet long, three feet high
Weight: 135 lbs

Appearance:

Race: Mountain Wolf
Hair: Mid-length, sleek black fur
Eyes: Bright yellow
Body: Extremely muscular
Ethnicity: Kaijo was born in the few mountains of the Land of Rice Fields

Level: Same as Nushi

Favored Weapon: Teeth
Fighting Style: Taijutsu

Strengths:
Physical: Kaijo is extremely muscular, with a powerful jaw. He is also very fast.

Mental: Kaijo fights much better when by Nushi's side, and is extremely intelligent.

Weaknesses:
Physical: Kaijo does not have posable fingers, and his stamina is below average.

Mental: Kaijo hates water, and will stay away from it unless Nushi is in it and in trouble. He also hates any shifting surface, such as sand, and gets nervous when on such a surface.

Jutsus:
-To Be Added When Nushi Learns Them

Background: Kaijo was born around the same time as Banjaku came into existance. Nushi found him shortly after inside a cave near his own, and Kaijo was alone. He took Kaijo in and raised him, hunting for him and eventually learning to hunt. Eventually, their bond grew so strong that they could communicate telepathically, and since then they have not been far from each other.

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Shinobi Rank: Sannin (S-rank missing-nin) ~ Genin
Village: None ~ Konoha
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Chakra Bo, 5 Kunai, 4 Shuriken, 8 Smoke Bombs, 20 Explosion Tags, 8 Soldier Pills ~ Bo, Bow, Quiver of Arrows (holds 20), 2 Shuriken, 4 Kunai
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 2:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Both your physical weaknesses are DUHs. How about something else, it is obvious it cant throw things or use nin and genjutsu, it cant make handsigns. So I want some REAL weaknesses. It doesn't have to have both strong and fast, maybe throw in not much stamina if you want those 2 things

Also that may be a little long for the dog... 6 feet is longer than the average human standing up...
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 4:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ummm... he's an 8-year-old mountain wolf, which are very big. I did research, and another name for these are Grey Wolves. They can be up to 3.5 feet high at the shoulder, and 6.5 feet long. I changed the weight to the more reasonable 135 lbs I found just now.

But I kinda fixed the weaknesses. Even if a weakness is a DUH, as you call it, I generalized the weakness and put another.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 8:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not really diggin' the telepathy thing...seems just another way no ninja could sneak up on you or surprise you....or hide.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 8:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't see the problem. What if I say the telepathy only works over a distance fo at most one hundred yards?

I even took out the second mental strength.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 5:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is the reason I don't like pets that people are making nowadays...they always want a direct, secret, and silent way of communication...not even Akamaru and Kiba had that, they just understood each other well. What I was getting at with the whole "no one can take you by surprise" is that if you have your wolf face one way, and you face the other, then there is no ninja-art in how an opponent can attack you simply because you now have "eyes on the back of your head", so to speak. And pull examples of past profiles that have been approved, I didn't like those either. So, to be fair to you and the others who've already had their cheap pets approved, I just won't accept/deny it.
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Inventory: (2) Specially designed Katanas, (15) Shuriken, (15) Kunai, (30) Senbon needles, (2) Soldier Pills, (130) Feet of wire, (15) Exploding Tags/|(1) Specially designed flute, (40) Poisonous senbon needles, (15) Kunai, (10) Shuriken, (2) Soldier Pills, (100) feet of wire, (5) Smokebombs
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 12:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh I guess I missed the telepathy. No you can't have it if you look in custom pet jutsus there is a ery hight ranked i think A or S that allows that...
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 12:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok, I took out Telepathy. Better?

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 12:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You should look into those pet jutsus.
They're awesome.
A ranked kinjutsu though, so ya gotta earn 'em.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Im pretty sure this can be trashed since nushi is no longer alive.
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