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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 11:20 pm Post subject: Kaguya, Arashi [Sound] |
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(OOC:Unfinished, I know. I'll edit in a background later. I'm short on time.)
Name: Kaguya, Arashi
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 125 lbs
Appearence:
Race: Caucasian
Hair: Brown, swept over to the side
Eyes: light blue, almost grey
Body: Athletic
Ethnicity: Rice Fields
Clothes:
Fore-head Protector : He wears it on his forehead in a standard fashion. It pushs his bangs up slightly.
Shirt: Arashi wears a black shozoko top underneath of the vest. It is mixture of a Tank top and a Kimono, with a dash of Ninja-appearance to it. It is the standard Shinobi outfit, in real life, anyways.
Pants : Arashi wears a pair of shozoko bottoms, the pants to a standard shozoko. They are made of light weight fabric, like denim but more flexible and quiet.
Shoes : Arashi wears standard sandaru. They are black in color, and he wears black socks which cover his toes. THe only thing not "standard" about them is that they have a thin layor of metal on the bottoms, which increase the force bing emitted when strikeing.
Other clothing :
1 : Arashi wears long black gloves on his hands. The gloves go from his fingertips to his mid-bicep. The fingertips and the palms of the gloves had a rubber-like material, making gripping things easier.
2 : He also wears metal forearm guards. They reach from the end of his wrists to the bending point of his elbow. They are made of Carbon Fiber, very strong yet light-weight material.
Level/Rank: Genin
Village: Sound
Bloodline: Kaguya
Main/Favored Weapon: His Bones
Element: Doton
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory: None
Physical Strengths:
* Extremely fast
* above average chakra pool
* High Stamina/Endurance
* Good at Taijutsu
* Ambidextrous
Mental Strengths:
* Chivilrous
* A generally passionate person
* A good friend, loyal to those he loves
* Smart, being able to think of analyze nearly any situation
* Moderate Knowledge of pressure points
Physical Weaknesses:
* slow hand seals
* academy student level chakra control
* sub par ninjutsu
* poor hearing
* allergic to pollen
Mental Weaknesses:
* Under stress he shows signs of Paranoia
* He is a "Emotional bottler ", and sometimes has outbursts
* Bad Genjutsu
* he tends to wait for the last moment to do something (a procrastinator).
* He is Brutally honest, so much so that he will often offend people
Jutsus:
Basics
Henge no jutsu
Bunshin no jutsu
Kawarimi no jutsu
.:Jutsus that wants to learn:.
Houshou [Crushing Fist]
Kage Buyou [Leaf Shadow Dance]
Kinobori [Tree Climbing]
Suimen Hokou no Gyou [The Art of Water Walking]
Missions Completed:
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background:
Sample Post:
((this is from another naruto based forum RPG; it was during the chuunin exams for my team, and one of our team mates went out of town and asked me to rp for him))
Taiki glanced around the area. He made note of the other teams. And then looked back at his own. They were by far the worst off. They had all of their equipment robbed from the at the start, yet they finished around the same time as everyone else. Which said something, they were either lucky or possibly the best team there.
However, Taiki couldn't think about that too long as he saw all the food laid out before them. He almost ran there in a split second, when he heard that they had to write a member's name on a scroll. Taiki had a hunch that member would be separated or perhaps given a handicap for the next portion. Taiki was the only one who could survive the best on his own. Since, well, his techniques allowed him to adapt animally. He knew that Jouten needed to act as support as his genjutsu force him to focus on them preventing him from attacking on his own. And Shiyana could be the one, but he got the least amount of sleep and least of everything. He was sacrificing himself before the team the entire exam, and it was now Taiki's turn.
Taiki grabbed the scroll their team had been given and wrote his own name.
Ikemoto, Taiki
He stepped back, admiring the neat hand writing he had done for that. It was actually the best he'd ever done. He looked to jouten, acting as he typically did. It would be beyond him to put the team before himself. Only god would tell if he would be sucessful as a shinobi with that mind set. He then looked to shiyana. He was definately older, and had seen more combat and learned more of everything than Taiki had, so it seemed as if he would naturally excel. Taiki, on the other hand, still didn't know what he would do with his life. Though he figured it'd come to him sooner or later.
He then walked back to his team mates and grinned.
"No matter what happens, I want you guys to go on. I have a long time ahead of me before I am at your skill levels and so if this means I fail, then so be it. But what ever it means, I'm sure that shiyana-kun here deserves a break. If it means putting the named person into a rough spot, then I'll willingly take the plunge, since shiyana-kun has been putting himself before the team every day and night so far. Anyways, I'm gunna go hit up the food."
Taiki quickly bolted to the food table. But before he did, he left the scroll with shiyana. He was grinning widely, his cat-like fangs evident as he was still wearing his cloak, which hid his tail and ears. Though if it were removed his cat like characteristics would become evident. His eyes were still human like, and would become more cat like if his emotions peaked. Though he was simply over joyed to simply find food. He grabbed as much water from the beverage section, and grabbed a large bowl filling it with a miniature mountain of rice, topping it with some of the beef that had been cut into small strips laying it in a mound atop the rice. he sat at the table and began to tear into his food. Drinking a large gulp of water after every 3 bites or so.
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Shiyana was almost stunned at Taiki's descision, such recklessness would be expected of a child, though Taiki willingly took the blind gamble and wrote his name down. They didn't even know what could come of that. But what was done was done. And he did have good intentions. Shiyana thought back to their training excercise with Shai'tan when they first met. Suzaku had willingly hindered himself from attaining the bells to better the team, and it payed off since Jouten and himself managed to get one. So the pseudo mission was a success.
He watched as Taiki ran off to the food and chuckled to himself slightly.
Taiki, I just hope this doesn't mean you fail. That would mean all your efforts were for nothing. Only time will tell what this gamble will do for us. Whether it hinders us, or perhaps aids us, we'll find out when the proctor tells us.
he looked at Jouten.
"Hey, jouten, you're not going to grab any food? You haven't eaten real food for days, you should build your strength for the next round. Anyways, later."
Shiyana made his way to the proctor and handed in his team's scroll. Which had Taiki's name written on it.
I just hope nothing bad happens.
Shiyana slowly walked to the refreshment table and grabbed a glass of water as well. His body would need that most right now, since he had been without it for days and was feeling rather weak from dehydration. He then grabbed a bowl of rice and took some chicken as well and then took as seat next to Taiki. His own hood was down so hit almost looked suspicious as to why Taiki's was still drawn. Though nobody in that room should be since they would be too concerned with the next round and eating.
He was eating calmly and slowly, which contrasted with Taiki's ravenous devouring of his own meal.
Roleplaying Characters:
No RPC
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin Village: Suna Training Points: N/A Inventory: 5x Kunai, 10x Shuriken, 15x Senbon, 3x smoke bomb, 75ml of MS antidote
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 11:28 pm Post subject: |
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| Quote: | Physical Weaknesses:
* Hates being inturrupted when training
* chuunin level chakra control
* low endurance, can't take too many hits
* poor hearing
* allergic to pollen |
I'll give you a heads up before the mods get to this but you start as a genin and you put a higher rank of chakra control as a weakness, you probably want to change this because it makes no sense. _________________


Roleplaying Characters:
Noah Amimura(Itichi)
Mitsuaki Ryuujin
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin-----[Jounin] Village: Otogakure-----[Sunagakure] Training Points: 0 Inventory: (1) Katana, (15) Explosive Tags, (1) Melody bracelet, (20)shuriken, (10)Kunai, (10)Senbon needles, (5) Smoke bombs[Samehada (15) Kunai, (20) Shuriken, (50) Feet of wire, (10) Smoke bombs, (15) Explosive Tags, (5) Soldier Pills ]
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Forum Credit: 150
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 11:33 pm Post subject: |
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You can have a few D-Ranks already known. _________________
Aut vincere aut mori
Roleplaying Characters:
Ozanaru, Ayame - Missing-Nin
Guren, Susuki - Stone Ninja
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: [A-Ranked Missing-Nin] ~~~ [Chuunin] Village: [None] ~~~ [Stone Village] Training Points: 0 Inventory: [+1 Wakizashi, +20 Shuriken, +20 Kunai, +20 Senbon Needles, +10 Smoke Bombs, +1 Fuuma Shuriken, +50 Yards of Wire, +3 Bags of Clay] ~~~ [+2 Wakizashi, +20 Kunai, +20 Shuriken, +25 Yards of Metal Wire, +30 Senbon Needles, +10 Smoke Bombs]
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Forum Credit: 10
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 11:36 pm Post subject: |
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Ummm... some of your strengths and weaknesses are the same topic. Fix them please.
Roleplaying Characters:
Hyuuga Malekith
Kurosenjo Yanagi
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin (S-rank missing-nin) ~ Genin Village: None ~ Konoha Training Points: N/A Inventory: Chakra Bo, 5 Kunai, 4 Shuriken, 8 Smoke Bombs, 20 Explosion Tags, 8 Soldier Pills ~ Bo, Bow, Quiver of Arrows (holds 20), 2 Shuriken, 4 Kunai
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 11:38 pm Post subject: |
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You're right, Av. new rule states only the basic 3. I'm glad we have someone who actually reads all the rules before posting a profile.
Roleplaying Characters:
Hyuuga Malekith
Kurosenjo Yanagi
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin (S-rank missing-nin) ~ Genin Village: None ~ Konoha Training Points: N/A Inventory: Chakra Bo, 5 Kunai, 4 Shuriken, 8 Smoke Bombs, 20 Explosion Tags, 8 Soldier Pills ~ Bo, Bow, Quiver of Arrows (holds 20), 2 Shuriken, 4 Kunai
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 11:41 pm Post subject: |
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Eh, that post is very confusing, lava isn't clear about that stuff. Anyways...o.o
Yeah, suprising a newbie reads teh rules. _________________
Aut vincere aut mori
Roleplaying Characters:
Ozanaru, Ayame - Missing-Nin
Guren, Susuki - Stone Ninja
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: [A-Ranked Missing-Nin] ~~~ [Chuunin] Village: [None] ~~~ [Stone Village] Training Points: 0 Inventory: [+1 Wakizashi, +20 Shuriken, +20 Kunai, +20 Senbon Needles, +10 Smoke Bombs, +1 Fuuma Shuriken, +50 Yards of Wire, +3 Bags of Clay] ~~~ [+2 Wakizashi, +20 Kunai, +20 Shuriken, +25 Yards of Metal Wire, +30 Senbon Needles, +10 Smoke Bombs]
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Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 11:54 pm Post subject: |
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you have high endurance and low endurance as strength and weakness. please remove the strength one to make them balanced. also, "Hates being inturrupted when training" is not physical, it's mental. Please turn it into a physical one.
And what is it you don't forget? I can't place the last word.
Roleplaying Characters:
Hyuuga Malekith
Kurosenjo Yanagi
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin (S-rank missing-nin) ~ Genin Village: None ~ Konoha Training Points: N/A Inventory: Chakra Bo, 5 Kunai, 4 Shuriken, 8 Smoke Bombs, 20 Explosion Tags, 8 Soldier Pills ~ Bo, Bow, Quiver of Arrows (holds 20), 2 Shuriken, 4 Kunai
Personal Stats:
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