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Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 4:13 pm Post subject: Goh "The Crow" |
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Name: Goh “The Crow”
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Height: 185 cm/ 6 feet
Weight: 62 kg/ 136 lbs
Appearence:
Attire:
Goh
Race: Asian
Hair: Short, black and spiky
Eyes: Brown
Body: Slim
Ethnicity: Unknown
Level/Rank: Genin (C-rank missing-nin)
Village: None
Bloodline: None
Main/Favored Weapon: Reverse grip Wakizashi
Element: Earth
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu and Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory:
- 5 shuriken
- 3 kunai
- Grapple hook
Strengths:
- Specialty is stealth
- Strong in speed
- Can think of strategies and plans in any kind of situation
- As a loyal shinobi, he does not show emotions
- His slim body makes him easy to dodge attacks
Weaknesses:
- Can't concentrate when under pressure of a strong opponent
- Weak in Genjutsu
- Weak in strength
- Weak in stamina
- As a loyal shinobi, it causes a lot of trouble in society
Jutsus: Henge, Bushin, and Kawarimi
Control Over Stone
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Main Element Earth / Must be taught by Nushi
Description: This technique is more of an ability. The user has control over the surrounding stone. The greater the user's power, the greater control they have. Genin level can listen to the stone, which will tell them of things far off, as well as control surrounding rocks. Chuunin level can control slabs of stone to intercept an attack or launch at a person or object. Jounin level can make portals through solid stone that only they and others they choose can walk through. Sannin/Kage have complete mastery and can make the stone do almost anything (within reason).
Jutsus that wants to learn:
Shoushitsu [Knee Strike][/u]
Rank: C
Requirement: None
Description: A Taijutsu technique where the ninja braces against the ground and drives a powerful knee into their enemy, hurling them away. With impressive strength, this technique can be devastating.
Kinobori [Tree Climbing]
Rank: C (Basic)
Requirements: Learned From A Gennin Sensei
Description: The user concentrates onto the soles of their feet and coats them with a layer of chakra. Once this is done, the user will then be able to walk up any tree like they are walking up a regular foot path.
Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking]
Rank: C (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: The user focuses their chakra to the soles of their feet and step onto the water. From the surface of the liquid, they would then need to be able to measure the amount of chakra it would take to support their weight along the surface of the water without sinking. Once this is mastered, the user would be able to easily walk on water.
Biransei no Jutsu [Poison Gas Technique]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This ninjutsu technique creates a cloud of poisonous gas that erupts from the user's mouth in a stream. The cloud clears a distance between the user and their enemy, as not to capture the user themselves within it's area of effect.
Doton: Dochu Eigyo no Jutsu [Earth Release: Underground Projection Lure Technique]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent.
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background:
Goh woke up at the bank of an unfamiliar river, having an amnesia. In face, he was unfamiliar with everything. Not being able to remember the memory of his life or the situation up until the point of his regaining consciousness. Finding only a wakizashi lying next to him on the ground, Goh finds a nearby wooden shack, only to have an arrow shoot past his head and lodge itself into the shack's wall. A letter was attached to the arrow which only stated his name and some minor information that didn't have much connection to him. Now Goh lives in that small shack, trying to find out more about his memory. He was addressed as Goh "The Crow".
Sample Post:
Goh was lying on the cold, wooden and almost rotten floor of his shack. Deep in slumber he was counting corpses of those he murdered. Nothing but the soft wind, the chirping of the birds could be heard around the shack. When suddenly, someone interrupted that silence. Goh reacted and stood up, looking wide into the bamboo forest. Just as he turned around, a shuriken flew right at his head. Goh pulled out his wakizashi and deflected the shuriken, making it stick into the ground. The sound in the forest stopped and Goh was sure the enemy was gone, thou he returned to his slumber.
Roleplaying Characters:
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No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin Village: Konoha Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A
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Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 12:04 pm Post subject: |
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UNAPPROVED
This is not complete air.
First, you only start with the three basic jutsus, as stated in the template. Second, you have to have at least Kinobori [Tree Climbing] and Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking] in the "want to learn" section, as those are the two required for Chuunin level. You also have to move the two C-rank you have to the "want to learn" section, and you may also add one more there.
"Strong in speed and Taijutsu" are two strengths, so add one more physical weakness or take off the taijutsu part, as it's kind of obvious as you chose it as your main style.
19 is a bit old for a genin, but i'll allow it, as it's still possible.
Just change those few things. And you can chaneg to earth element if you wanna be an evil subordinate, but that would mean you'd replace Powerful Fireball Technique with an Earth Element one. _________________ Hyuuga Malekith
Kurosenjo Yanagi
Roleplaying Characters:
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No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin (S-rank missing-nin) ~ Genin Village: None ~ Konoha Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A
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