Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 4:57 pm Post subject: Geoffery (the foreigner) Sunagakure-Genin
Name: Geoffery: The foreigner
Age: 17 (looks to be 18-26)
Gender: male
Height: Â 6'2"
Weight: 185
Appearance:Tall, masculine, with medium length fair hair. He has a scar going across his left cheek that points straight down. His skin is a tan color due to his traveling ways, and his right brow is separated by another scar that runs down just right above his right eye. His body is fit for just about anything, and a rosary hangs around his neck down to his abdomen. He wears a chest plate that seems to be made of rows of diamond shaped metal plates fitted together to form a protective, body fitting piece of armor. He wears gloves that seem to be too large for his arms, and they are about the length of his forearm. He wears a kidney belt that wraps around his waist. Under his chest piece, he wears a red tunic that hangs down just above his knees. He wears protective leg plate armor to keep his legs protected from injury, he also has sabatons (armored shoes) to protect his boots.
Race: Caucasian
Hair: Medium length fair black hair.
Eyes: a sharp sea green.
Body: Masculine, and athletic.
Ethnicity: a foreign country to the ninja world, known as Temujin.
Element:Katon Fighting Type/Style:Taijutsu Specialist, Ninjutsu minor
Starting Inventory: Katana(1) Wakizashi(1) Buster knucles (2), Chest plate (1), Leg plate (2)
Personality: Geoffery is a collected individual. Very clean, very well built, very just. His ways keep him in check, preserving his thoughts from crude nature habits. He likes to talk about a lot of things, especially when it comes to his beliefs. He is very loyal and respective towards others, and he keeps his mouth shut, especially when his tongue becomes sharp (metaphor). When it comes to fighting, he'll stop at nothing to achieve victory, and be warned: He is a raging machine of fury once angered.
Special Abilities:Muscle Memory
Jutsus:
Spoiler:
Kawarimi, Henge, Bunshin
Bloodline jutsus: none
Jutsus you want to Learn:Any Taijutsu, some ninjutsu to help him out.
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background: Geoffery is a traveling knight from a faraway land called Temujin. His homeland caught up in the heat of war, enraged him so, that he sought out better countries, and better ways to prove to his people that war isn't everything. He left his homeland and never looked back, he knew not where he was going, but he knew whichever way his ship sailed was the way he needed to go. He arrived in the ninja world not three weeks later after sailing from his homeland, on the shores of Sunagakure, the dusty, dry dessert country. Once there, he handed over his papers of transport to them stating his purpose, and he settled in the great ninja nation. Despite his age, he had to start off as a Genin once he had graduated from the Sunagakure ninja academy.
His new life awaited him, he knew great things would make their way to him in the new world, and he hoped that someday, he could return home to stop the war that consumed everyone he loved, and that peace would return without hesitation. _________________ Kei's Theme!!!!!!! Roleplaying Characters: Ishida, Kei Geoffery: The Foreigner No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: [D]~[E] Village: Missing Ninja~ Fame: 1~0 Reputation: Training Points: 75~0 Inventory: Kunai(25), Shuriken(35), Smoke Bombs(10), food, water, Katana(1), Huuma Shuriken(2)
Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 5:15 pm Post subject: Re: The foreigner (my 2nd character): Geoffery-sunagakure
Kei Ishida wrote:
Name: Geoffery: The foreigner
Age: 17 (looks to be 18-26)
Gender: male
Height: Â 6'2"
Weight: 185
Appearance:Tall, masculine, with medium length fair hair. He has a scar going across his left cheek that points straight down. His skin is a tan color due to his traveling ways, and his right brow is separated by another scar that runs down just right above his right eye. His body is fit for just about anything, and a rosary hangs around his neck down to his abdomen. He wears a chest plate that seems to be made of rows of diamond shaped metal plates fitted together to form a protective, body fitting piece of armor. He wears gloves that seem to be too large for his arms, and they are about the length of his forearm. He wears a kidney belt that wraps around his waist. Under his chest piece, he wears a red tunic that hangs down just above his knees. He wears protective leg plate armor to keep his legs protected from injury, he also has sabatons (armored shoes) to protect his boots.
Race: Caucasian
Hair: Medium length fair black hair.
Eyes: a sharp sea green.
Body: Masculine, and athletic.
Ethnicity:a foreign country to the ninja world, known as Slovania.
Rank: E
Reputation: 0
Village: Sunagakure
Fame: 0
Title: Genin
Bloodline: none
Main/Favored Weapon:[
Spoiler:
Name: Flamberge
Description: A very large, two handed sword. It's Hilt can be wielded by two hands on the lower portion of the hilt, but right above the main hand guard, the grip is extended to the blade. Above the second grip-on the blade-two metalic spikes stick out to form a bladed hand guard.
The blade its self is wavy(as if it were on fire), giving it the perfect armor piercing effect(like the way steak knives are serrated, or shark's teeth). The overall length of the sword is 6'5", the blade its self is 4'5". Leaving 2' for the overall hilt/grip. The grip is brown, the blade has a metallic luster.
The sword is quite heavy, and needs a certain amount of skill to be used properly.
Rank: B
Other Requirements:none
Picture of Weapon: none
Name: Gouken Ryuu - Strong Fist Style
Requirements: Taijutsu Major or Taijutsu Specialist, each level must be trained separately as a jutsu of your character's current rank (S-rank with twice the post amount for SS-rank characters) and in order
Level 1: Taijutsu Specialist: E-rank
Description: This taijutsu style is not an actual style as it does not have any specific movement pattern or exceptional techniques, rather it is an extreme mastery of common hand-to-hand combat that can only be accomplished by those highly skilled in taijutsu. It does have a specific stance: one arm held in front with the open palm facing the user while the other is held behind their back and the feet are close by each other forming an almost ninty-degree angle - but it doesn't serve any purpose and all the attacks of this style are direct. Practitioners of this style have higher speed and strength compared to others.
Level 1: Strength +5%
, Ninjutsu minor
Starting Inventory: Flamberge(1), Chest plate (1), Leg plate (2)
Personality: Geoffery is a collected individual. Very clean, very well built, very just. His ways keep him in check, preserving his thoughts from crude nature habits. He likes to talk about a lot of things, especially when it comes to his beliefs. He is very loyal and respective towards others, and he keeps his mouth shut, especially when his tongue becomes sharp (metaphor). When it comes to fighting, he'll stop at nothing to achieve victory, and be warned: He is a raging machine of fury once angered.
Special Abilities: None
Jutsus: [Spoiler] Kawarimi, Henge, Bunshin
Bloodline jutsus: none
Jutsus you want to Learn:Any Taijutsu, some ninjutsu to help him out.
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background: Geoffery is a traveling knight from a faraway land called Slovania. His homeland caught up in the heat of war, enraged him so, that he sought out better countries, and better ways to prove to his people that war isn't everything. He left his homeland and never looked back, he knew not where he was going, but he knew whichever way his ship sailed was the way he needed to go. He arrived in the ninja world not three weeks later after sailing from his homeland, on the shores of Sunagakure, the dusty, dry dessert country. Once there, he handed over his papers of transport to them stating his purpose, and he settled in the great ninja nation. Despite his age, he had to start off as a Genin once he had graduated from the Sunagakure ninja academy.
His new life awaited him, he knew great things would make their way to him in the new world, and he hoped that someday, he could return home to stop the war that consumed everyone he loved, and that peace would return without hesitation.
(just let me know how this would work out better, idk how the whole Taijutsu thing works and stuff, so just let me know if I'm not supposed to put that Taijutsu style there.)
Hey there! xD. So couple o' things (all bolded except first point)
1. Title of this thread should be "Geoffery (The Foreigner) - Sand Genin" or something of the sort.
2. The land your from "Slovania" is probably ok (although I would ask a mod) but I though I'd point out that Sunagakure (in which you said you sailed to) only has a south port, so this place would be nearby if not Temujin's Continent from the naruto movie.
3. The taijutsu style you listed must be trained as if it were a regular jutsu, as do all taijutsu styles and abilities.
4. This is not a mistake but I figured Id point out the Flamberge to other member/trainee/mods, it was in the custom section and approved http://narutorpcenter.com/about12734.html
In the profile instead of leaving all that information you can leave this text to link to the Flamberge with just Flamberge showing:
_________________ "Shoot the kids and drown the neighbors! We've got a winner!" "And I thought my jokes were bad. " Roleplaying Characters: Kaza Nuichi Kuraitoru Soukutsu Baku Seirei Ejiki Higaisha RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: E, E, C, C Village: Sunagakure, Missing-Nin Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: N/A Inventory: (Kunaix12, Senbonx15, Puppet)(Tekagix2)[Kunaix10, Tanto, Journal, Penx3, Tinted Sunglasses ]
okeh!I fix-ed it xD it should look better now, and make a whole lot more sense,lol _________________ Kei's Theme!!!!!!! Roleplaying Characters: Ishida, Kei Geoffery: The Foreigner No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: [D]~[E] Village: Missing Ninja~ Fame: 1~0 Reputation: Training Points: 75~0 Inventory: Kunai(25), Shuriken(35), Smoke Bombs(10), food, water, Katana(1), Huuma Shuriken(2)
Just a spoiler error i thought I would point out xD _________________ "Shoot the kids and drown the neighbors! We've got a winner!" "And I thought my jokes were bad. " Roleplaying Characters: Kaza Nuichi Kuraitoru Soukutsu Baku Seirei Ejiki Higaisha RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: E, E, C, C Village: Sunagakure, Missing-Nin Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: N/A Inventory: (Kunaix12, Senbonx15, Puppet)(Tekagix2)[Kunaix10, Tanto, Journal, Penx3, Tinted Sunglasses ]
I haven't been here in a while, so I'm going to be a little rusty on things, but here's what I can see wrong:
1.
Quote:
Ethnicity: a foreign country to the ninja world, known as Temujin.
Though I don't really see a problem with this, but, since I've been coming here, all of the RPC's have been from a Country within the Naruto World. Since you're in Sunagakure no Sato, you're most like going to be from Kaze no Kuni (Wind Country).
That's all I can see really, but, other than that, looks fine. _________________ Shigane, Makoto
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well, that's just where he settled when he came to the land of ninja.
read his description next time,lol. _________________ Kei's Theme!!!!!!! Roleplaying Characters: Ishida, Kei Geoffery: The Foreigner No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: [D]~[E] Village: Missing Ninja~ Fame: 1~0 Reputation: Training Points: 75~0 Inventory: Kunai(25), Shuriken(35), Smoke Bombs(10), food, water, Katana(1), Huuma Shuriken(2)
I didn't know an E-rank Genin can have B-ranked weapons. If the weapon is B-ranked, I think it's a bit too powerful for you, don't you think? _________________
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