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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 1:52 am    Post subject: Forbidden Technique: Eye Transmutation SA WIP Reply with quote

Name: Forbidden Technique: Eye Transmutation
Requirements: My permission
Description: This ability allows the user to create Doujutsu by changing the DNA sequence in their eyes with chakra. The user of this ability can alter the look of thier eyes at will. This technique was lost long ago and has now recently been found. It is said that the one who could truly master these techniques could bring peace to the most evil soul and evil to the most peaceful soul.

Terronagan
Flowing Dream Eye
Rejuanuakugan
Ryushaokengan
Demimeurtenosatogan

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Name: Terronagan
Requirements: 2 point kin training
Description:The eye grow pure black with white sparkles. (Looks like tv static). The eye can causes whoever the user looks at to begin to feel as if everything was hopeless. It works by disrupting charkra in the opponents brain and effecting a certain part of the mind. The certain part is the one of happiness/sadness. The longer the user looks at the opponent, the stronger the effect. This is a very dangerous eye technique and must be used with care.

1 post: Sad
2: Very Sad
3: Mild Depression
4:Highly Depressed
5: Almost to the point of suicidal tendencies
6: Suicidal Depression

Name: Flowing Dream Eye
Requirements: 2 point kinjutsu
Description: The eye looks like a dark blue and light blue kaliedoscope. What it does is that if the opponent looks into your eyes or eye, they will begin to see themself on a beach with the tide going in and out. In reality, they had fallen asleep. The downside of this is that if the user attacks the opponent while they are asleep fom this jutsu, their eyes will have a allergic reaction and cause them to lose thier sight. They can gain their sight back after a 4 kin point train. The sleep last for 5 turns

Name: Rejuanuakugan
Requirements: 2 point kin training
Description: The Rejuanakugan looks like a red and blue eye with a tomoe ring along with black cross hairs. It can slow down and sometimes rewind events in the users mind. The picture can be zoomed in on and will become clearer.It also acts as a sort of link showing eye. Any Ninjutsu,Genjutsu, or Projectile will show a unique link that leads back to the user/thrower.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 2:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Absolutely not. There will be no SA's that alter or use other SAs/Bloodlines.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 2:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Agreed. I don't see how you could possibly balance combining some of the most powerful bloodline abilities.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 2:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I see the techniques themselves as balanced, but the idea of doing that is kinda OP in and of itself, good idea, but could be too easly abused. If you want one jutsu pluck out their eye XD
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 2:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oi, Pik-man, when your Trainee manager isn't here, I'll be your supervisor. It was long decided that SAs would not do the following....

1) Disrutpt A Bloodline or SA
2) Alter A Bloodline or SA
3) Allow use of a Bloodline or SA
4) Manipulate SA or Bloodline

This obviously violates that decision. I'll let You guys humor the idea a but longer but know that I have already said no.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 2:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK. I changed the way it works so that it doesn't have to do with other bloodlines. ^^
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 2:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you AJ, didn't know rules aren't really written down for that so yea XD

EDIT: Ignore that comment since it was done ^_^

Also state that only one can be learned or such or increase the Kinjutsu points needed to train.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 2:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

LOL. Too late Picky. ^^
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 2:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

yea yea yea.... now add the details I said, jerk XD
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 2:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pikmin, refrain from posting here. It is now an Admin application.



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