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 Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 12:52 pm Post subject: Fang[Pet Nin] |
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Name: Fang
Age: 6
Gender: Male
Height: 28 Inches
Weight: 65
Appearence: 
Race: Wolf
Hair: White fur with a red streak going through the middle
Eyes: Hazel
Body: Slim
Ethnicity: Kaze No Kuni
Level/Rank: Same as Ryoma Echizen's Rank
Clan: None
Main/Favored Weapon: Teeth
Element: Earth
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory:
Strengths:
Mastered Taijutsu
Excellent tracking skills
Weaknesses:
Weak with Genjutsu
Sometimes gets scared
Does not listen to orders sometimes
Has a hard time controlling anger
Jutsus: None
Background: Born 6 years ago he by the side of Ryoma Echizen. He was taught the ways of Shinobi Taijutsu and how they work. He learned many techniques and such from him. But eventually grew out of those techniques, he is mastered Taijutsu. He is only second to getting Ninjutsu correct from Ryoma. Although they have a good bond, he can be sometimes hard to control.
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Shinobi Rank: Jounin(SS Rank)
Village: Iwagakure
Training Points: 230
Inventory:
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 35
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| Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 1:05 pm Post subject: |
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First of all, dogs don't talk. Secondly, the rank is the same as your own. Thirdly, he needs a background. Fourthly, those weaknesses aren't detailed enough. Fifthly, his age can't be unknown. Sixthly, he needs an appearance. Seventhly, there is no clans for dogs nor should there be considered one. Eighthly, you have left out several elements on the template which are not to be removed; put them back and fill them out. Ninethly, dogs can not have athletic bodies considering they have no athletic sports. Tenthly, he must have an eye colour. Eleventh(y), he needs two fighting styles.
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Shinobi Rank: Jounin
Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure
Training Points: 185
Inventory: 1 Katana
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Forum Credit: 5 FC
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