Homepage  FAQ   Search   
Memberlist   Advertise   Join! (free)  
  Profile   Log in to check your private messages   Log in 

toolbar powered by Conduit



Remove These Ads By Registering!

Fang[Pet Nin]

 
This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.    Naruto RP Center V4 Forum Index -> Inactive profiles -> Old Templates
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author Message
Please Register and Login to this forum to stop seeing this advertsing.
Status:






Forum Credit:
Transfer FC
Buy FC
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
Posted:     Post subject:



Roleplaying Characters:




RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank:
Village:
Fame:
Reputation:
Training Points:
Inventory:

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

Back to top
MinatoNamikaze
Status: Offline

Gold Member
Gold Member

Joined: 19 Dec 2007
Posts: 3669



Forum Credit: 10
Transfer FC
Buy FC
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 12:52 pm    Post subject: Fang[Pet Nin] Reply with quote

Name: Fang
Age: 6
Gender: Male
Height: 28 Inches
Weight: 65

Appearence:

Race: Wolf
Hair: White fur with a red streak going through the middle
Eyes: Hazel
Body: Slim
Ethnicity: Kaze No Kuni

Level/Rank: Same as Ryoma Echizen's Rank
Clan: None

Main/Favored Weapon: Teeth
Element: Earth
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu

Starting Inventory:

Strengths:

Mastered Taijutsu
Excellent tracking skills

Weaknesses:

Weak with Genjutsu
Sometimes gets scared
Does not listen to orders sometimes
Has a hard time controlling anger

Jutsus: None

Background: Born 6 years ago he by the side of Ryoma Echizen. He was taught the ways of Shinobi Taijutsu and how they work. He learned many techniques and such from him. But eventually grew out of those techniques, he is mastered Taijutsu. He is only second to getting Ninjutsu correct from Ryoma. Although they have a good bond, he can be sometimes hard to control.
_________________
Thanks Doll Your a keeper.

Roleplaying Characters:
None
None
None
None
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank:
Village:
Fame:
Reputation:
Training Points:
Inventory:

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!



Last edited by MinatoNamikaze on Sun Mar 02, 2008 1:28 pm; edited 6 times in total
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Yahoo Messenger MSN Messenger
OzanaruSyra
Status: Offline

Head of RPG
Head of RPG

Joined: 30 Oct 2006
Posts: 12762



Forum Credit: 250
Transfer FC
Buy FC
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 1:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

First of all, dogs don't talk. Secondly, the rank is the same as your own. Thirdly, he needs a background. Fourthly, those weaknesses aren't detailed enough. Fifthly, his age can't be unknown. Sixthly, he needs an appearance. Seventhly, there is no clans for dogs nor should there be considered one. Eighthly, you have left out several elements on the template which are not to be removed; put them back and fill them out. Ninethly, dogs can not have athletic bodies considering they have no athletic sports. Tenthly, he must have an eye colour. Eleventh(y), he needs two fighting styles.
_________________
Spoiler:






Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E
Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 1875
Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail MSN Messenger
MinatoNamikaze
Status: Offline

Gold Member
Gold Member

Joined: 19 Dec 2007
Posts: 3669



Forum Credit: 10
Transfer FC
Buy FC
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 1:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

which elements are you talking about?
_________________
Thanks Doll Your a keeper.

Roleplaying Characters:
None
None
None
None
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank:
Village:
Fame:
Reputation:
Training Points:
Inventory:

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Yahoo Messenger MSN Messenger
OzanaruSyra
Status: Offline

Head of RPG
Head of RPG

Joined: 30 Oct 2006
Posts: 12762



Forum Credit: 250
Transfer FC
Buy FC
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 1:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nevermind, I must be going blind. All the other aspects still stand though.
_________________
Spoiler:






Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E
Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 1875
Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail MSN Messenger
MinatoNamikaze
Status: Offline

Gold Member
Gold Member

Joined: 19 Dec 2007
Posts: 3669



Forum Credit: 10
Transfer FC
Buy FC
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 1:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Edited it.
_________________
Thanks Doll Your a keeper.

Roleplaying Characters:
None
None
None
None
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank:
Village:
Fame:
Reputation:
Training Points:
Inventory:

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Yahoo Messenger MSN Messenger
OzanaruSyra
Status: Offline

Head of RPG
Head of RPG

Joined: 30 Oct 2006
Posts: 12762



Forum Credit: 250
Transfer FC
Buy FC
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
PostPosted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 1:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay. Approved.



_________________
Spoiler:






Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E
Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 1875
Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail MSN Messenger
Display posts from previous:   
This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.    Naruto RP Center V4 Forum Index -> Inactive profiles -> Old Templates All times are GMT - 5 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum


Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group

Skinned By Lavathing9, of the Naruto RP Center, This Skin Is ONLY For Naruto RP Center, Unless Given By The Creator.

Forum Topics and Posts Are Copyrighted and Protected by a Creative Commons License.
Forum Best Viewed In Firefox (Optimized For Version 3.5.4)
Forum Best Viewed In A Screen Resolution of 1280x1024 or higher.



NRC Affiliates
Roleplay Center DOT Com

Visit This Topic


Creative Commons License