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PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2007 9:41 pm    Post subject: Enon Ichuri Reply with quote

Name: Enon Ichuri
Age: 16
Gender: female
Height: 5' 5"
Weight: 110 lbs

Appearence: Enon wears an outfit that looks like Sakura's except it's white with orange, blue, and gold mixed in random patterns (that looks awesome). Her shoes are the same as everyone elses' only they're black instead of blue. Lastly, around her neck is the blue ribbon that should hold the metal plate showing which village she's from, but it has no metal plate.

Race: White
Hair: light blonde pulled back near upper back of head in many small pigtails
Eyes: green with flecks of silver
Body: Athletic
Ethnicity: Fire Country

Level/Rank: Genin
Village: Leaf Ninja
Bloodline: n/a
Main/Favored Weapon: kunai knife
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: Genjutsu, Taijutsu
Starting Inventory: 5 Shuriken, 3 Kunai Knives

Strengths: Genjutsu and Taijutsu. She's very clever when it comes to conversations with people and in battles (equations and problems). tends to copy jutsus very easily after watching the jutsu be performed afew times. kind, quiet, and easy to trust. great stealth

Weaknesses: She doesn't understand many things because she never graduated from a ninja training school. She very secretive, and won't let anyone in. forgets the jutsu she's copied after about a day. doesn't listen very well

Jutsus: Henge, Bushin, and Kawarimi (others unknown. I'm sorry, I thought I had her pretty well planned out)

Bloodline jutsus: none

Jutsus that wants to learn:

~Kinobori [Tree Climbing]
~Shadow Clone
~Genjutsu Release
~Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking] (she's never seen anyone do it so she didn't know that osrt of technique even existed)


Missions Completed: (All 0 For Now)
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: father died in Leaf Village alongside Enon's uncle when the Nine-Tailed Fox demon was attacking. Enon and mom left the next day. they've been wandering since then. mom died a year and a half ago in a far off village. Enon wanders now like before. never went to ninja training school, her mom trained her as they went from place to place. mom gave her the thing around her neck. doesn't remember uncle but hears rumors that he had a son. follows rumors and ends up back in Leaf Village.

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Enon ran across the roof tops, the night sky surrounded her like a blanket. The moon shown high above and made her appear as if she were some sort of phantom. "This isn't how it was supposed to be! I have to do something! I must!"

Behind her, more figures followed. Enon knew they were there but she didn't know who they were and if they were enemies or friends. 'They can't be here! They need to leave. Think. Think!' She continued to run, but they were starting to catch up. "I got it!!!"


Roleplaying Characters:
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No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: none
Village: Leaf
Training Points: N/A
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2007 9:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wrong section, dude, I'll most it for ya. This goes to the "Profiles" section.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 6:54 am    Post subject: Re: Enon Ichuri Reply with quote

Okay, let me help you a bit...

wise_ninja wrote:
Name: Enon Ichuri
Age: one year older than Naruto - he was 12 in the original and is 15 in shippuuden, but don't expect to be interacting with characters from the original story.
Gender: girl - the term is female
Height: 5" 5 - it's written 5' 5" (as in 5 feet 5 inches)
Weight: 115 - please put "lbs" after the number

Appearence: Enon wears an outfit that looks like Sakura's except it's white with orange, blue, and gold mixed in random patterns (that looks awesome). Her shoes are the same as everyone elses' only they're black instead of blue. Lastly, around her neck is the blue ribbon that should hold the metal plate showing which village she's from, but it has no metal plate.

Race: White
Hair: light blonde pulled back near upper back of head in many small pigtails
Eyes: green with flecks of silver
Body: Athletic
Ethnicity: Leaf Village in the Land of Fire - put Fire Country

Level/Rank: unknown - you start as genin
Village: none, but mostly Leaf - okay what is this supposed to mean? she either must have a village, or be a missing-nin
Bloodline: related to Naruto? (I don't get it) - bloodline limits, like the Uchihas' Sharingan, Hyuugas' Byakugan, Haku's Hyouton etc. There are also many custom bloodlines available in the corresponding section of the forum
Main/Favored Weapon: kunai knife
Element: unknown (I don't get it, sorry!) - you character's element. Defines which ninjutsu he would be able to use, for example Sasuke uses many Fire techniques, while Kakashi seems to like Water techniques (remember the fight with Zabuza), and Chidori is Lightning element. There are also Earth and Wind elements.
Fighting Type/Style: Genjutsu, Taijutsu
Starting Inventory: unknown - put things like shuriken and kunai here

Strengths: Genjutsu and Taijutsu. She's very clever when it comes to conversations with people and in battles (equations and problems)

Weaknesses: She doesn't understand many things because she never graduated from a ninja training school. She very secretive, and won't let anyone in.

Try to add more strengths and weaknesses, but remember, they must be even

Jutsus: Henge, Bushin, and Kawarimi (others unknown. I'm sorry, I thought I had her pretty well planned out)
That's fine since you only start with the three basics

Bloodline jutsus: none

Jutsus that wants to learn: none

Remove this whole section:

*Genin: E-C Rank
*Chuunin: E-B/A Rank
*Jounin: E-A Rank
*Kage, Sannin: E-S-Rank

*Missing-Nin: (I don't get it)

Remeber How Much:*

*Genin:Up To 8 Jutsus
*Chuunin: Up To 10 Jutsus
*Jounin: Up To 15 Jutsus
*Kage, Sannin: Up To 20 Jutsus
*Missing-Nin: Same as Above (matters what Rank you WERE.)


Missions Completed: (All 0 For Now)
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: father died in Leaf Village alongside Enon's uncle when the Nine-Tailed Fox demon was attacking. Enon and mom left the next day. they've been wandering since then. mom died a year and a half ago in a far off village. Enon wanders now like before. never went to ninja training school, her mom trained her as they went from place to place. mom gave her the thing around her neck. doesn't remember uncle but hears rumors. follows rumors and ends up back in Leaf Village.

Sample Post:

Enon ran across the roof tops, the night sky surrounded her like a blanket. The moon shown high above and made her appear as if she were some sort of phantom. "This isn't how it was supposed to be! I have to do something! I must!"

Behind her, more figures followed. Enon knew they were there but she didn't know who they were and if they were enemies or friends. 'They can't be here! They need to leave. Think. Think!' She continued to run, but they were starting to catch up. "I got it!!!"

ATLEAST have 2 paragraphs here. (remeber a paragraph is ATLEAST three sentences.) Remove this as well

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I-no

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Village: Konoha ~ Iwa ~ None ~ Oto
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 1:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

how's that? any better?

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 1:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you're back in the Leaf Village, it can be assumed that your a Leaf Ninja. Also, even if you're not, I suggest you be one, since being a missing-nin at that low of a rank is very dangerous. A little more detail on your strengths and weaknesses. I also suggest that you put kinbori(tree climbing) and water walking(don't remember the japanese name) in your want to learn, or else you can't become a chuunin.

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Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: 185
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 1:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Under "jutsus I want to learn", you need to put at least Kinobori [Tree Climbing] and Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking]. You may add more there, but keep in mind that Genin can only learn up to C-rank jutsus. You can look at the Non-Custom Jutsus in the Rules Section, or in the Custom Jutsus section.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

this is so confusing, lol. I never realised how hard it was to be a ninja ;D

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Don't worry, you'll get there. Lots of people have trouble with their applications at first.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

you see, Enon's confusing. she doesn't exactly care about being a ninja. she only wants to find out if the rumors are true and then over time, she'll grow and really want to be a great ninja and defend the village...sorry, I sorta had lke a story sort of thing for here -_-, is that ok?

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not exactly. When you're a missing nin, you can be hunted without any discretion. Your character will not be welcomed in any villages, unless they're corrupt or something.

You can be a Leaf Ninja without even caring, or having anything to do with, the Leaf Village. Just look at my character. Same concept, except she is with Mist.

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Tetsuga Setare
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Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: 185
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