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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 5:47 pm Post subject: E-rank kirigakure Genin Mitsurugi,Heishi |
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Name: Mitsurugi,Heishi
Age: 14
Gender:Male
Height: 5'6
Weight: 125 Pounds
Appearance:
Race: Japanese
Hair: Short and black
Eyes: Black
Body: Well-Toned
Ethnicity: Kaminari no Kuni
Rank: E-rank
Reputation:
Village: Kirigakure
Bloodline: N/A
Main/Favored Weapon: Wakizashi
Element: Lighting
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu
Starting Inventory: Wakizashi,Kunai x5, Shuriken x10
Personality: Outspoken,honest, honorable and Self reliant. His arrogance blinds him at times.He's also quick to anger. Many would consider him selfish and vicious. But if they thought over it They would understand why he's personality is the way it is. He doesn't believe in evil or good even thought he has live with monks for most of his life. He loves to pick a fight and rarely backs down. Like many people his a sponge for pain. He believes that the pain he suffers in fights and daily training will lead to become stronger. He would pay with blood to become stronger. Even if he doesn't seem like it he enjoys puling pranks.
Special Abilities: N/A
Jutsus: Bushin,Kawarimi,Henge
Bloodline jutsus: N/A
Jutsus you want to Learn: N/A
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background: His father great and powerful with the blade reowned as one the greatest samurai in the world. Unlike his father Mitsurugi has no potential or an evil heart to follow his father's deeds. He was borned in the land of lighting but doesn't know where. As long as he could remember he was orphan. He wandered his country aimlessly not knowing were he was surviving of the land until one day. An old man who wielded a sword and wore a monk's robe and a bamboo hat. Found him and asked what he was doing out in the forest.Mitsurugi couldn't answer him because he could not speak due to his secluded life in the forest.
The old man noticed this and sighed. He grabbed mitsurugi by the arm, Mitsurugi flailed wildly trying to escape the old man's grip. "
"Calm down ,Kid. You're coming with me like it or not. Be glad it was me who found you and not some freak."
Mitsurugi calmed himself slighty. knowing that he could not brake the old man's grip.
They traveled for a while the old man's grip still unbreakable. Finally they made it to a temple They walked towards the gate and it opened as they grew closer.
"Master Zen you have returned.." The random monk stopped as he examined mitsurugi.He looked back at Zen questionalby. Zen eyed him with a i'll tell you later kinda look.
"Anyway I suppose he'll be needing a room Yakuho!" The monk yelled at the top of his lungs.
A small kid appeared quickly running at amazing speed toward the monk.
" Yes,Sensei?" He asked
"Show this boy to a room."
" Hai!"
"Wait, I should warn you he can't talk." Zen said quickly.
"Is that why you brought him here?" The monk asked with curiosity.
"No, His father was my apprentice."
The monk's eyes opened in shocK. Zen nodded. "He's Mitsurugi's son alright."
"The traitorous scum's son?!? " The monk said angered.
"Yeah, But he has nothing to do with him he was abondened in the forest."
The monk rubbed his temples as he tried to calm himself down.
"Why bring him here?"
"He's the only one that can beat his father i'm certain of this." Master Zen Finished
"But.." Zen growled. "ENOUGH his training begins tomorow."
-----6 years later---
Mitsurugi woke to the smell of smoke. He panicked as he got up from his futon. he quickly exited his room and noticed the sinister flames asthey burned everything that everything was in chaos bodies littered that floor extensevely. Mitsurugi Paled at the sight and emptied his stomach. "Wait, where's master Zen?!?" He asked/ shouted towards himself.
He Quickly got up proceed to run towards the training area as he reached he saw his master and looked helplessly as his master fought a strange man with a long ponytail.
They clashed blades and seemed to be evenly matched until the man with the ponytail dissapeared and cut off his master's arm
His eyes widened in shock. Using his anger to his advantage he scoped the area and soon found a sword lying around on the ground he charged at the strange man with a roar.
The man turned and deflected the blade it hurled upwards in the air and stabbed into the ground. He raised his katana to kill him but stopped. He smirked as he said: "My blood you have yet to mature i'll give you time until then your not worthy of my blade."
Zen tried to get the jump on The man as he talked to mitsurugi but it was to no avail as he turned around and shoved his blade deep into Zen's stomach.
The man laughed as he shushined away from the temple and left Zen to die.
" Master zen..." Mitsurugi whispered as tears fell from his eyes. "Here." He said as he gave a sword that was tied around his waist.
When your ready this blade will Reveal itself until train hard."
"But master, Where will i go?
"Go to kiri A man theres owes me a favor. Show him the blade i gave you and he'll know what to do with you..." Zen's voice grew soft and brittle. He embraced death as he finished his sentence.
"Master...Master... Master!" Mitsurugi yelled as his master died.
Tears streamed from his face as he griped the sword with unyielding dedication. His path was set who would avenge his master and his temple. _________________

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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: E-rank Village: kirigakure Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: N/A Inventory: KunaiX5, ShurikenX10,
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 5:50 pm Post subject: |
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ok, where to begin.
Nice use of the template
But not enough pesonality, at all.
And your History is more like a storybook than a history, but thats ok.
Lengthen your Personality to a Paragraph, and this will be acceptable. _________________
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Otori, Shizuka Miyu
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Amimura, Jato
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Shinobi Rank: SS Chunnin-D Genin-E Genin-E Genin Village: Missing-Kumogakure-Iwagakure-Kirigakure Fame: 915~0~200~0 Reputation: Training Points: 1711 Inventory: Fan Sword Kazemasa, 10 Senbon, 10 Kunai, 3 Blank Scrolls, and 1 Peice of Chalk -
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 5:54 pm Post subject: |
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No problem, would rather see someone get carried away, instead of being too lazy or not putting any effort up.
Edit: Approved.
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