Deston Ether Stream

Register · Status: Forum Credit: Transfer FC Buy FC

Roleplaying Characters:

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank:
Village:
Fame:
Reputation:
Training Points:
Inventory:

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

FinalWord · Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 1:11 am Post subject: Deston Ether Stream

Name: Deston Ether Stream
Age: 11
Gender: Male
Height: 4'8''
Weight: 76Lb

Appearance: Deston wears a loose plain white T-shirt under a black hooded jacket, he general wears the collar on his jacket stiff upward so that it covers much of his face. Around his chest on top of the T-shirt under the jacket are large thick belts that help keep his ribs from coming out of place. The belts continue down his left leg and his right leg is covered in a loose white cloth pant leg. he wears many armbands around his left arm as well and black fingerles gloves.

Race:

Hair:

Eyes:

Body:

Ethnicity:

Rank: D-Rank
Reputation: 0
Village: Cloud

Fame:

Title:

Bloodline: N/A
Main/Favored Weapon: Lynx Paw- A katana with a sickle on 6 foot chain attached to the bottom.
Element: Lightning
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu-specialization, Taijutsu-minor
Starting Inventory: Tanto, Wakazashi, Kunai X20, Wire (25 feet)

Personality: Deston is always full of energy often found running around to try and expel this energy. While hes very outgoing he doesnt like to talk much to people he doesnt know, once he knows someone well he generaly doesnt stop talking. He is able to tell how someone is feeling just by looking at them or being around them so if someone around him is sad he feels sad if someone is happy he feels happy, it Makes Deston quite co-dependent, always wanting to make others feel happy so that he can be happy.

Special Abilities:

Name: Elemental Spirit
Requirements: Gained at Character Creation or 5 For Basic Level, 5 Points For Advanced, Can't have Bloodline That Already Boosts Elemental Damage.
Description: You where born with a strong attunement to your primary element, in such a way that you develop some advantages and disadvantages based on what it is. At the basic stage, you can make your jutsu do 50% more damage or cost 50% less chakra. You gain 50% reduction when being attacked with the element, but you take that much additional damage from the one it's weak to. You are considered to have bloodline like attunement to it. Your physical attributes also are effected by the element in question (wind is more agile, earth is slower on average but tough, etc.).

At the advanced stage, you can make your jutsu do 100 percent more damage or cost 80% less charka. You gain immunity to the element if the damage is C rank or lower, only take 10% damage from B ranks, and 20% damage from A ranks or higher. The opposed element deals twice as much damage to you. You can also learn jutsu of that element as if your styles where one higher. If you learn jutsu from the element it's weak too, you learn them as if your styles where one step lower.

Jutsus: Henge, Bushin, Kawarimi,

Name: Raiton: Raikyuu - Lightning Ball
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: After forming the necessary hand seals, the user will create a large, several feet in diameter, ball of lightning in their hands. This ball can then be launched at a target and will travel at average speed. When it comes in contact with something, it will burst, damaging and shocking anyone it touches and also slightly shocking anyone within three feet of its edge at the moment of impact.

Name: Raiton: raihouden - Lightning release: Static discharge
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Lightning element
Description: This jutsu causes the ninjas lightning elemental chakra to become unstable and discharge at random intervals. With proper training a ninja can learn to focus this discharge and use it as both a weapon and a shield.

Bloodline jutsus:

Jutsus you want to Learn:

Name: Kai - Release
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: A very useful technique that dispels or prevents the effects of genjutsu in its early stages. To perform it, the user only needs to hold their hands in a tiger hand seal and channel some chakra into it. A lower-level genjutsu will be dispelled without any harm to the user. This can also be done on someone else, in which case the user must touch them before releasing the technique. However, it is a low-level ninja skill, as there are more effective ways of countering genjutsu. This will only dispel genjutsu of B-rank or below.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance. While it may seem like the user simply appeared or disappeared, the technique is actually a momentary increase in movement speed towards a set location.

Name: Kage Buyou - Shadow Dance
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This taijutsu technique is utilized to get behind your opponent in mid-air. The user would usually kick their opponent upward from a low position, launching them into the air, and follow them using this jutsu. They will appear right behind the target, repeating their position like a shadow. From there, a number of attack options is presented to the user.

Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background:
Destons Parents lived in relative poverty but did everything they could to make Deston happy. His time as a child was most often spent with his great uncle a strong ninja himself, were he tried to teach Deston to control his excessive energy, that quite often disrupted to peace of their neighborhood. When Deston was seven he was out expending his energy by running around the nearby mountains as he so often did not knowing that a storm was brewing. Lightning rained down all around him and rain drenched him to the bone. He was unable to return to the safety of his home until the storm past but when he did return he was determined to harness the power of that storm. From then on his training with his great uncle intensified by Destons own wishes. When his parents realized that he would have talent as a ninja they sent him off to train in the acadamy. During his time at the acadamy he began to realize something about himself, he didnt actualy care about others or what others thought of him, he didnt ever feel sad because of someone, he never felt happy just because someone existed, he didnt care enough to get angry when people insulted him or be sad because someone didnt like him. He realized that if he could make others happy, however, the for some reason he himself was happy, and so he surrounded himself with people that were easily made happy. While many of the students enjoyed his company he had a rough time, he wasn't the brightest or the most talented but he was driven like no one was, practicing jutsus that were beyond his experiance determined to make them his own. He failed miserably and he graduated relatively low in his class. He has worked hard to better himself since then determined never to be just the 'best of the worst'.
_________________
"A life born in space returns to Mother Earth With mutually cherished memories, pure love, and an unyielding promise, I Promise in my own name to take on all her love hope and grief forever and ever."
- Anew Returner AKA "Lockon Stratos"

Roleplaying Characters:
Deston Ether Stream
Riven Myst
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin, Genin
Village: Kumo, Kiri
Fame: 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Tanto, Wakazashi, Kunai X20, Wire (25 feet); Smoke Bomb*10, Decrative Katana, Wire (25 feet)

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

Pikminavenger · Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 1:18 am Post subject:

since you are from cloud, and you have lightning you get a free C rank lightning jutsu.
_________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Hio [D-Class.Missing-Nin] [S-Rank]
Erika Guren [Jounin, S-Rank] {Guren Clan Leader}
Kaede, [Genin, E-Rank]
Chachamaru, [Genin, A-Rank]
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Rank, S-Rank, E-Rank, A-Rank
Village: None/Iwagakure/Iwagakure/Konohagakure
Fame: 100, 400, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 750
Inventory: See profile's, 6 Extra rank trains

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

OzanaruSyra · Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 1:24 am Post subject:

Wrong template. Use the one in the Code section (further down).
_________________

Spoiler:

Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E
Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 1875
Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

FinalWord · Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 1:27 am Post subject:

*removed for space*
_________________
"A life born in space returns to Mother Earth With mutually cherished memories, pure love, and an unyielding promise, I Promise in my own name to take on all her love hope and grief forever and ever."
- Anew Returner AKA "Lockon Stratos"

Roleplaying Characters:
Deston Ether Stream
Riven Myst
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin, Genin
Village: Kumo, Kiri
Fame: 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Tanto, Wakazashi, Kunai X20, Wire (25 feet); Smoke Bomb*10, Decrative Katana, Wire (25 feet)

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

OzanaruSyra · Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 1:34 am Post subject:

Yes, but just edit your first post.
_________________

Spoiler:

Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E
Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 1875
Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

FinalWord · Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 1:41 am Post subject:

*fixed*
Thank You
_________________
"A life born in space returns to Mother Earth With mutually cherished memories, pure love, and an unyielding promise, I Promise in my own name to take on all her love hope and grief forever and ever."
- Anew Returner AKA "Lockon Stratos"

Roleplaying Characters:
Deston Ether Stream
Riven Myst
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin, Genin
Village: Kumo, Kiri
Fame: 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Tanto, Wakazashi, Kunai X20, Wire (25 feet); Smoke Bomb*10, Decrative Katana, Wire (25 feet)

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

OzanaruSyra · Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 1:49 am Post subject:

1. That weapon looks custom, meaning it needs to be made in the custom section. Requires 100 posts (Trust me, easy to get).
2. Your fighting styles are messed up. Without a bloodline you can have 1 Specialization and 1 Minor OR 1 Major, 1 Minor, 1 Minor.
3. Copy out the full jutsu descriptions. A lot easier for us.
4. Same goes for the SA, copy out the description. SA require administrator permission as well.
_________________

Spoiler:

Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E
Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 1875
Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

FinalWord · Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 2:22 am Post subject:

1.For my Weapon, am I able to keep it labled as my favored weapon but not have it in my inventory, and RP myself into getting it after 100 posts and approval or do I need to remove it and put something else in.

2.Is all that was messed up with my fighting styles that i didnt have them labled as specialization and minor?

3. copied Justsu descriptions

4. copied SA description, Do I have your permission to use it or do I need to apply for that somewhere else?
_________________
"A life born in space returns to Mother Earth With mutually cherished memories, pure love, and an unyielding promise, I Promise in my own name to take on all her love hope and grief forever and ever."
- Anew Returner AKA "Lockon Stratos"

Roleplaying Characters:
Deston Ether Stream
Riven Myst
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin, Genin
Village: Kumo, Kiri
Fame: 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Tanto, Wakazashi, Kunai X20, Wire (25 feet); Smoke Bomb*10, Decrative Katana, Wire (25 feet)

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

OzanaruSyra · Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 2:25 am Post subject:

No, you're fine for everything. Approved.
_________________

Spoiler:

Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Vechalia Ozanaru
Mikrah Ozanaru

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Genin, E ~ Genin, E
Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 1875
Inventory: 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers, Vorcrist ~ 10 Needles ~ 2 Tonfa, 5 Shuriken, 5 Kunai, 3 Needles

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!

Pikminavenger · Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 2:27 am Post subject:

1. you can no problem with that, and if you ever want that changed then do so.

2. Yep ^_^

3. Alright looks good.

4. You don't need admin permission just Curtis's as it is his SA, bu tother than that I don't see anything wrong with the template.

_________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Hio [D-Class.Missing-Nin] [S-Rank]
Erika Guren [Jounin, S-Rank] {Guren Clan Leader}
Kaede, [Genin, E-Rank]
Chachamaru, [Genin, A-Rank]
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Rank, S-Rank, E-Rank, A-Rank
Village: None/Iwagakure/Iwagakure/Konohagakure
Fame: 100, 400, 0, 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 750
Inventory: See profile's, 6 Extra rank trains

Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!