Burning fist

Prowl NightWolf · Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:20 am Post subject: Burning fist

Name: Katon: nenshouken [Fire style: Burning fist]
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Main element must be fire; Must first know a fighting style such as Renge[Lotus], Jyuuken[Gentle fist], or other taijutsu…
Description: A Taijutsu created by Kodo Raptor It gives greater strength to his Taijutsu by adding his fire element into the mix. A Trigram appears on the ground with the Katon symbol in the center after the ninja holds the Tiger hand sign. The ninja’s own chakra surges from their body and burns like fire around them. The ninja will then attack in the same manner as the original Taijutsu. This jutsu gives the added effect of causing burns to an area touched by the chakra released. The chakra release will quickly causes strain on the body as time passes so extended use should be limited.

Roleplaying Characters:
Kodo Raptor - Leaf Chuunin
Airazor - Kodo's Peregrine Falcon pet-nin
Prowl "Yoru Ouka" Raptor - C Rank missing-nin
Skyshadow, Yoru's Nin-owl
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin | C-Rank missing Nin
Village: Konohagakure (Leaf) | None
Training Points: 00
Inventory: Bow/Arrows x10, Shuriken x12, Wakizashi x1 Feathers x??? | Tekagi x2(one for each hand), Soldier pill x20, Wakizashi x2, Kunai x20, Fuuma Shuriken x2, Smoke bombs x30, Feathers x???, Various items needed for outdoor survival.
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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 4:35 pm Post subject:

For the name, I say call it "Enjin no Hi", which basically means "Fire's Ring". That was off topic, just helping, heh. Anyway, it does seem interesting though, but what kind of strain would it put on the user since they'll be using the Lotus?
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Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha Katsuga
Shikami Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka" Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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MinatoNamikaze · Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 5:21 pm Post subject:

well its not specifically used with Lotus, he is just saying it would be better if used in conjunction I am thinking. but this is fairly nice looking. Constantly draining chakra I assume? if so add it if not then it doesnt make sense <,<
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Roleplaying Characters:
Ezekiel
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None
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin(SS Rank)
Village: Iwagakure
Training Points: 230
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Kaeor · Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 7:40 pm Post subject:

I already have a jutsu named Ring of Fire.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Kaeor Arumashi
Sesshomaru Ozanaru
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Kage ~ Jounin
Village: Iwagakure~Sunagakure
Training Points: 0
Inventory: Kunai x6, Shuriken x 15, Poison Senbon x30, Nodachi strapped at his left waist and hiltless katana at his back, Explosive Tags x15, The Harvester~x9 Kunai, x18 Senbon, x30 Shuriken, x1 Wakishizi, x1 Katar
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Prowl NightWolf · Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 9:05 am Post subject:

Kat: Well I didn't have a Japanese translation for the name so that would still be on topic

MinatoNamikaze: Naturally it would drain chakra that is a given with any Jutsu. It is a element inhancment of basic tai fighting styles. With the Jyuuken[Gentle fist] the Ninja's chakra would do the exact same thing as the normal Jyuuken[Gentle fist] only with the added effect of creating internal burns. With Renge[Lotus] the burn effects would be more direct. The temp in the circle would also increase drasticly. As it says a fighting style is required as well as your primary element being fire.

Kaeor: ??? Well then a name change is in order... Any ideas would be helpful... Very Happy

Edit: Okay so I changed the name from ring of Fire to Burning fist, and also rewrote the discription to include a chakra drawback.

Roleplaying Characters:
Kodo Raptor - Leaf Chuunin
Airazor - Kodo's Peregrine Falcon pet-nin
Prowl "Yoru Ouka" Raptor - C Rank missing-nin
Skyshadow, Yoru's Nin-owl
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin | C-Rank missing Nin
Village: Konohagakure (Leaf) | None
Training Points: 00
Inventory: Bow/Arrows x10, Shuriken x12, Wakizashi x1 Feathers x??? | Tekagi x2(one for each hand), Soldier pill x20, Wakizashi x2, Kunai x20, Fuuma Shuriken x2, Smoke bombs x30, Feathers x???, Various items needed for outdoor survival.
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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 7:46 pm Post subject:

I actually like this technique, but at the same time, you're not giving me enough detail. I mean, you do give enough detail but...how'd about I just come out and say it?

Do your fist catch on Fire?
Also, does your Chakra turn into Pure fire?
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Roleplaying Characters:
Chimiri, Jikota
Hyoushi, Ryuunosuke
Chimiri, Tetsuya

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin~Jounin~Jounin
Village: Sand~None(Mist)~None(Sand)
Training Points: 5
Inventory: 30 Kunai, 30 Shuriken, 10 Smokebomb, 30 Explosive Tags, 5 Soilder Pill, 5 Scrolls~30 Medical Senbon, 5 Poision Senbon , 5 Shuriken , 3 Soilder Pills, 5 Weapons Scrolls~5 Scrolls, 5 Puppets, 30 Shuriken, 30 Kunai
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Haldur · Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 8:16 pm Post subject:

The diction of the description is confusing. Try to keep it as simple as possible while providing an accurate description.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Haldur Thalion
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Gonin (Chuunin officially)
Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: N/A
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Prowl NightWolf · Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:32 am Post subject:

Zeke Jamora · Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 3:20 pm Post subject:

I see no problem with the jutsu. I'm going to accept it.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Chimiri, Jikota
Hyoushi, Ryuunosuke
Chimiri, Tetsuya

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin~Jounin~Jounin
Village: Sand~None(Mist)~None(Sand)
Training Points: 5
Inventory: 30 Kunai, 30 Shuriken, 10 Smokebomb, 30 Explosive Tags, 5 Soilder Pill, 5 Scrolls~30 Medical Senbon, 5 Poision Senbon , 5 Shuriken , 3 Soilder Pills, 5 Weapons Scrolls~5 Scrolls, 5 Puppets, 30 Shuriken, 30 Kunai
Personal Stats:
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