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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:26 pm    Post subject: Alex's strength[rank training] Reply with quote

ooc: excuss the fact that i cannot post 40+ lines like i see alot of poeple do here, but i'll do my best.

Alex entered his house sipping the last of his tea just after learning his fifth class and he was just coming home to wash out his cup after he had just finished it. Instead of refilling his favorite tea cup he was going to his favorite tea shop where they sold all kinds of assorted teas. He never really knew the name of the tea shop he just knew what it looked like and loved going there. Anyways, Alex left his house and started on his way to the tea shop and he was going to buy one cup and then go to training ground 2.Alex entered the tea shop and ordered his tea and sat down to wait for it to be ready. Once it was he got up paid the tea shop worker and then took a walk towards training ground 2. Alex found it easy to be able to drink and walk at the same time and most people could not do it because they were afraid that they were going to spill on themselves. Alex also did not want to spill on himself but he had gotten used to walking a drinking, he did not really know how, but he did.

When he finally reached the training grounds that he had planed to get to, he saw that it was already taken, so he had to check out another training grounds. And lucky for him training ground 1 was open and no one was using it for now. Alex entered through the fence gate and put his tea on a wooden post and then started to train his basic combat techniques on the dummy." I really need to get more friends, then training would be a lot more easier ". Alex thought to himself as he drew his bow and pulled out and arrow, swiftly putting it in its place and drawing it back. His digits wrapped firmly around the arrow , he could shoot pretty fast and still hit his mark, but this he was pushing, he was going to be shooting an arrow at a target that was much further away then normal. He was used to targets being 25 to 50 yards, however his new target was 60 yards, and behind that Alex's next was 70, then finally 80 yards.
Finally releasing the arrow, it would silently skim the air and strike the target with a nice powerful hit not dead center but nearly. This is still a great feet for Alex. "damn it, i got to get better, if my genjutsu fails I must be ready for my long range "he would retort. Already another arrow loaded he would fire it swiftly and causing it to pierce the air , the arrow was spinning adding a increased accuracy improvement. Hitting his mark the target would seem to go into the ground. Alex's next target was 70 yards, this would prove some what of a challenge

"working with your arrows hmmm son?" Alex's father would walk up to him and continue "that's good" .Alex would continue focusing muttering a few words " father, please, I'm fairly busy , I need to hit these targets" Alex would release another arrow, surprisingly hitting the 70 mark, it could have been just luck but who knows. What ever the matter may be, Alex drew two arrows and attempted a multi-shot , shooting both and they would not be far off the target, this human like target, had 11 main points to hit. The head, heart, neck, shoulders, elbows, thighs , knees . Alex is determined to hit it in all 11 before his arrows run out " 20 more" Alex would calmly say. Springing his arrow into its place, firmly griping it and pulling back, he would release it and hit the left thigh. In a ninja fight this would not kill but slow the enemy down. The next shot missed and hit the chest, he was aiming for the heart but missed. Getting absurdly mad, his father would calm him down, this new sense of relief would bring his mind in a state of focus, pulling the strongly firm bow string back, he would release his arrow and pierce the right side of the head of the dummy, this was an accomplishment, a 80yard shot to the head, however this was enough training on long range shots for him , he had to train either on speed firing or accuracy while moving.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: +1.2 Your doing just fine
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alex would have left the training grounds and headed for the ramen shop, it was his favorite place to eat, next to the fine resturants of konoha, but they are way to expensive. alex arrived at the ramen shop starving and ordered one larger bowl of beef ramen noodles."One bowl of beef ramen noodles please." The young Itichi said with the little energy he had left"Coming right up"The ramen chef said with a smile on his face. What seemed like an instant, the smell of finely chopped roast beef. Peppers, onions and assorted vegitables surrounded the air, and a bowl was placed in front of Alex, quickly paying for it, he would start to slurp it down with much enjoyment this was a treat for him to have, the cooks really took time to prepare this. Alex decided to leave a tip and head for home. Greeted by his father, he would smile "how was training after I left, son?" his father asked. "good, it could have been better but, it s just not going to happen" retorted Alex. Just then Alex would hit the floor, his face smarting, his father had hit him " NOT WITH THAT ATTITUDE! , I told you I hate hearing you doubt your self" . Rising to his feet, Alex would go to his room for the night
The next morning .....
When Alex woke up he looked at the clock and saw that it was only 3 o'clock and was a bit upset at first because he usually woke up at four to train. However, even though he was an hour early from when he usually woke up, he was probably the only person in konoha that like to get up before the sun rose. The reason he got up so early was because it was always cold in the morning and he enjoyed the cold weather which was not one of Konoha's main forecasts. When he got up he took a shower and then got dressed in his usual gear, or shinobi ware, and headed out the door and towards the norther gate of Konoha.After reaching it, he would hold out a slip of paper which allowed him to head to the forest to train.His quiver was full, bow was stringed and rigged for perfection. His specialty in genjutsu with his power of his bow, made him leathal. He would head into the forest, armed and ready, but as he did, someone was there it was an old enemy of his , ikiro. "i see you finaly got ticked and stole a genin head band Alex" said ikiro bluntly. " i did no such thing! " Alex briefly responded.Ikiro would then say as he pulled out his Katana."prove it ". No words are needed, as Alex drew an arrows and sliped it into place, pulling back hard, then releasing it would hit ikiro's left knee cap, this was intended. It would slow his movments down " next one. . . . is through your HEART!, NOW SHEATH YOUR BLADE! " Alex wont fool around when it comes down to things such as this. "heh, your right, i dont need my blade " ikiro would say.

Attempting to make hand signs was a fail , an Arrow was shot through his right hand."gotta do better " alex would say ashe smirked , arrow allready loaded " i'm more talented then i was before , now we are at an equal level! " he continued. Limping away ikiro would sneer, leaving he was wounded and shocked, he was always ahead of alex, but not any longer.

Later that day . . . .

Alex entered the bathing house and relaxed for a bit. He was there for about a half an hour before he thought that he was relaxed enough and then got dressed and left bath house and headed for the tea shop to refill his cup of tea and then he was going to head home, yet this was wrong, he turned and could have swore he saw his brothers face for a slight moment. His father layed dead on the floor , a couple other people were demolished too. Alex was scared now , rushing to his fathers side, he would try to feel a pulse, nothing . . . . something was wrong , he was right ,his brother was around he began to draw his bow, yet his string was missing, so were his arrows. Reaching for kunia, they were gone. His wire, was also gone. It seemed like he was raided from all directions, somthing was dredfully wrong.untill suddenly, he heard a voice "wake up alex .... " . He didnt know what this ment, it echoed in his head, he turned to see his brother, dressed in an anbu uniform ,he didnt have a mask though, he musta stolen the uniform. He smirked as he kept vanishing into the shadows, Alex was confused , the same voice would echo "wake up ! ". Alex began to understand , somthing had happened, yet someone was trying to save him. From the ground the earth would raise, his old enemy ikiro would come up , half dead , his body was that of a earth zombie. This confused alex more , however he heard a new voice, some of that which reminded him of his sister "wake up please!", it WAS HIS COUSIN ,he instantly knew what had happened, he was in a genjutsu, but the minute he realized this, he woke up in the hosipital, he was shaking , sweting and dripping blood, he was heavly injured, somone must have saved him , but his brother put him in a genjutsu first. ," brother...." he would mumble, his father was immidatly at his side " he was around , your cousin was coming to visit when she saw him , she said you turned around then fell to the ground, thats when she sprung to action.

several days later , after recovering from the hospital

Alex would be allowed to leave the hospital , he has bandages around his body, and arms. His left leg was slightly fractured, so he had a cast, and a walking stick. This was going to heal pretty fast, he was not worried. Alex would head for home and collapse on the couch, his father would be at his side, seeing if he was okay, feeling reliefed when he saw it was nothing but a sheer brute loss of energy just walking from one place to another.

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Shinobi Rank: C-rank genin ; C-rank genin
Village: konoha ; missing nin(E level)
Fame: 0 ; 0
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC:  When you're talking, put it either separate from your RP'ing, or put it in another color so it'll be easier to read then I'll grade it, ok?


Edited:  Thanks.  +2; Total:  3.2/5  You're doing very well!  ^_^
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ooc: fixed
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 8:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ooc: ty ty, almost half way to what i want, i plan to keep going till i'm C-rank or B-rank , depends a few things though


ic: the next morning

Tired of his physical training, Alex would wake up, still weakend, he was in no shape to do much. Insteed he felt like chakra training. Alex stretched out a little bit as he looked over a book that described various kinds of chakra. His strict (also loving ) father had given him several books, several of which had been third grade books that talked about chakra. He had immediately ditched those writing them off towards his  fathers area, and he had picked up several books that talked about chakra more in depth.  I guess even though I have the need to reach the full extent of my bloodline, I’ll need to develop my chakra control even more, that won’t be wasting so much chakra when I do use it. He flipped through the pages assimilating the information eagerly with each page he flipped, there was more and more information about chakra, and what steps he needed to do to control it.After he had read everything for the most basic of chakra molding, he would fold his hands into a hand seal and start meditating trying to mold his chakra. It took only a little bit of concentration, but he could visualize in his mind in shaping the energy that ran throughout his body. " hmmm , simple , not much chakra getting wasted, lets see what else. ". After a bit, this would bother him, he was bored of the fact that this was getting to be annoying.

Silence broke suddenly, his left eye although shut twitched in aggrivation as a vein slowly faded into existance beneath the thin layer of skin that covered his left temple. The corner of his mouth rosed as the white teeth within came into view behind a set of lips. Perhaps it was the bird perched nearby that found it appropriate to bug the living shit out of him. " DAMN BIRDS! GET OUT OF HERE! ", Alex was annoyed, he rather be out in the field training, getting stronger to hunt his brother.He glanced upward at the bird who then took to the air as if instinctively, a good choice indeed thought the young man, visions of the little bastard stoned to death resting atop his feet crossing into focus , he was spinning the chakra in his hand, like a rasengan but no where near that level. It was more of a gental crashing wave that circled his hand.  A small bamboo canister filled with a mixture of sake and a pungent traditional family tea appeared from his fathers hand " you may be too young for this, but to me your a man, you survived multiple times wheres your mother and sister have not" .He would then set it down in from of Alex. The makeshift bottle rose slowly as Alex instinctively leaned his head backwards, mouth wide as the light green liquid poured from within the confines of the bamboo construct. It tasted funny at first, it was differant and it soothed his mind, he was calm and his muscles relaxed.Slowly his pain from the wounds dimmed.

He would then go back to chakra training, but his focus was to bad to do anything. He decided to turn the tv to a channle where it showedd previous sparring match ups. It was a uchiha verse a ninjutsu prodigy. A simple calculation would prove that the uchiha would win.  But this sparked Itichis interest when he viewed the spar " i must go and train " he would say. But after a bit of silence " nope " from out of no where, his father would appear saying it. Grumbleing and mumbleing under his breath, Alex would sigh and go back to reading some books , one happened to be a list of jutsus . Katon jutsus , in depth , powerfull techqniues. He sighed , ninjutsu wasnt his favorite, yet he felt it wouldnt hurt to learn about them a bit more. He started to read and it said somthing about uchiha .  "very simple move, it expels a large stream of fire from the user's mouth.  . . . . fire ball jutsu, pretty simple as for the looks of it. " . Alex would sigh he quite frankly was bored . Tossing the book to the side he would prop him self up on the coach and go to sleep.

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Shinobi Rank: C-rank genin ; C-rank genin
Village: konoha ; missing nin(E level)
Fame: 0 ; 0
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Training Points: 0
Inventory: **bow,Arrows(30),kunia(5),smokebombs(4),wire,explosive tags(5)**buster knuckles , shuriken(20) **

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 9:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC:  Split your second para in half.  Hard to read...

Edit:  Thanks.  Keep this in mind while you're RP'ing, ok?  ^_^  +1.8; Total:  5/5  Rank Training complete!  Please post in the "Template Change" section, while following the Template accordingly, or you may continue to Train/RP here, if you choose to.
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Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin/Missing-Nin [E-Rank both]
Village: Konoha (originally), Kiri (currently); Konoha; None (formerly Oto)
Fame: 2,000, 0, 0
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Training Points: 650
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire; Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Chakra Wire (5 strands; 20' each); Kodachis (x2; on back), Kunai (x10), Shuriken (x10), Bells (x5; in pouch), Chakra Wire (5 stands; 15' each)

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 9:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Shinobi Rank: C-rank genin ; C-rank genin
Village: konoha ; missing nin(E level)
Fame: 0 ; 0
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Training Points: 0
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 9:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

+1.8 Training complete
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 9:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

its not really completed , i still have more ranks to achieve BUT, ya

Rank E to D : completed

D to C : now starts on my next post
points go back to 0, i need 5 more to go to C-rank ( i think)




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Village: konoha ; missing nin(E level)
Fame: 0 ; 0
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Inventory: **bow,Arrows(30),kunia(5),smokebombs(4),wire,explosive tags(5)**buster knuckles , shuriken(20) **

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