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Rin Shouten Status: Offline  Trainee

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Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 5:52 am Post subject: Adjunchas Gems |
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Adjunchas Gems
* ~ Only Six Adjunchas Houshou may be in rotation at a time; Five Adjunchas Shinju; Four Adjunchas Naiya
Name: Adjunchas Houshou (Adjunchas Gem)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Norimune - Kaneseitan
Description: This gem is only available to Norimune clan members who possess Norimune-Kaneseiten. They use the same material through a refining technique with their chakra to create a black-colored gem. This black colored gem may be used with a series of Norimune-exclusive jutsus and while not in use floats about the one who created it, and may be replaced easily.
Name: Adjunchas Shinju (Adjunchas Pearl)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Adjunchas Houshou
Description: This gem is only available to Norimune clan members who possess Norimune-Kaneseiten. They use the same material through a refining technique with their chakra to create a large white-colored gem. This white-colored gem may be used with a series of Norimune-exclusive jutsus and while not in use floats about the one who created it, and takes some time (one post) to replace.
Name: Adjunchas Naiya (Adjunchas Diamond)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Requirements: Adjunchas Shinju
Description: This gem is only available to Norimune clan members who possess Norimune-Kaneseiten. They use the same material through a refining technique with their chakra to create a shining white-colored gem. This white-colored gem may be used with a series of Norimune-exclusive jutsus and while not in use floats about the one who created it, and takes two minutes (posts) to replace.
Name: Norimune - Chakra no Yaiba (Blade of Chakra)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Adjunchas Houshou
Description: This jutsu utilizes one of the Adjunchas Gems, the strength of the jutsu depending on the grade of the gem used. Consuming one of the Adjunchas gems now surrounding the Norimune clan member, this jutsu will project a small blade of chakra upon the gem, which will then attack chosen enemy in spear-like fashion on the whim of the caster.
Name: Norimune - Chakra no Nankan (Barrier of Chakra)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Adjunchas Houshou
Description: This jutsu utilizes one of the Adjunchas Gems, the strength of the jutsu depending on the grade of the gem used. Consuming one of the Adjunchas gems now surrounding the Norimune clan member, this jutsu will project a barrier of chakra upon the gem, which will then defend the user against a single attack of the grade less than the gem used.
Name: Norimune - Soshi Uwabari (Elemental Coat)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Adjunchas Shinju
Description: This jutsu utilizes one of the Adjunchas Gems, the strength of the jutsu depending somewhat on the grade of the gem used and must have at least four summoned. Using their ability to change their chakra element only while forging, a Norimune consumes all Adjunchas Gems in order to surround themselves with a coat of chakra that reduces damage of the chosen element. This jutsu only lasts five minutes (posts).
Name: Norimune - Seishou Tsubame (Spirit Swallow)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Adjunchas Shinju
Description: This jutsu utilizes one of the Adjunchas Gems, the strength of the jutsu depending somewhat on the grade of the gem used. Using the Adjunchas Gems as a catalyst, the Norimune absorbs one of them into a normal-sized bow of chakra. This bow can fire arrows of the element of the user, the strength of said arrows depending on the strength of the Adjunchas Gem used.
Name: Norimune - Tenrai Seishou Tsubame (Divine Spirit Swallow)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S (Kinjutsu)
Requirements: Adjunchas Naiya
Description: This jutsu utilizes one of the Adjunchas Naiyu, the most powerful of the Adjunchas Gems. Using the Adjunchas Naiyu as a catalyst, the Norimune absorbs one of them into a large-sized bow of chakra. This bow can fire arrows of the element of the user, the strength of said arrows each holding the power of the S-rank Adjunchas Naiyu. The major difference between this bow and Seishou Tsubame is that the user may fire as many arrow as he has gems. _________________

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Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:11 pm Post subject: |
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I don't see anything wrong other than a typo for one of the gem colors.
However, I need a second opinion from another mod before I can approve this. _________________ Hatake, Eric
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 6:37 am Post subject: |
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Uh, this needs to be put into the Custom Weapons section. Though, if it is a Weapon that activates with a Jutsu, the jutsu needs to be posted here and the Weapon needs to be posted somewhere else. _________________
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 9:40 am Post subject: |
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These are jutsu that created the said gem. Much like my Scrouge of Pleiades. _________________

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Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 11:04 am Post subject: |
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I have no idea what the Scrouge of Pleiades is.
| Quote: | | Norimune - Tenrai Seishou Tsubame (Divine Spirit Swallow) |
Needs to be a Kinjutsu.
| Quote: | Name: Norimune - Chakra no Yaiba (Blade of Chakra)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Adjunchas Houshou
Description: This jutsu utilizes one of the Adjunchas Gems, the strength of the jutsu depending on the grade of the gem used. Consuming one of the Adjunchas gems now surrounding the Norimune clan member, this jutsu will project a small blade of chakra upon the gem, which will then attack chosen enemy in spear-like fashion on the whim of the caster.
Name: Norimune - Chakra no Nankan (Barrier of Chakra)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Adjunchas Houshou
Description: This jutsu utilizes one of the Adjunchas Gems, the strength of the jutsu depending on the grade of the gem used. Consuming one of the Adjunchas gems now surrounding the Norimune clan member, this jutsu will project a barrier of chakra upon the gem, which will then defend the user against a single attack of the grade of the gem used. |
Both need to be atleast A-rank. Why? Because only the strongest of shinobi can extend pure chakra out of their bodies. Not unless the gems help them do that, if the gems help them do that, then make the techniques B or C-rank.
Other than that, I can't really find any problems. _________________
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 12:34 pm Post subject: |
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Nah don't worry about it Zeke. I was merely stating it was a jutsu created item. That jutsu I mentioned is an example from my clan. But don't worry if you haven't seen it. _________________

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Rin Shouten Status: Offline  Trainee

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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 5:00 pm Post subject: |
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I don't know about the Chakra Shield and the Chakra Sword. I really think they should be B or A-ranked. Could you explain them more? Like how much power they have and whatnot. _________________
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 5:15 pm Post subject: |
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The Chakra Blade lances at an enemy like a spear and attacks the enemy with moderate speed. The barrier acts as a defense mechanism and will defend the user from Ninjutsu of one grade less than the gem used.
For example, if a shinobi attacked me with Suiryudan and I had an Adjunchas Naiya floating around, I could use the jutsu and the gem would project a chakra field to absorb the jutsu. _________________

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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 11:53 am Post subject: |
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I think it's fine personally, but I'll wait for Zeke to respond. _________________

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