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PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:39 am    Post subject: A new Home (RANK TRAINING) Reply with quote

Junichiro must've been walking for days as he had to go through the Rice Country and then most of the Fire Country to make it here. He came here because he had obtained a map from the Sound Village before he left and found the Wave Country it seemed like a place Junichiro could find a cheap place to live and to figure out what he was going to do next. He walked into the village expecting more poverty but that was not the case, the village was thriving. There must've been a story behind it but Junichiro really didn't care. He walked around the village the sky began to grow dark as night was about to happen for maybe the third or forth time without Junichiro getting any sleep. As he was walking however he saw a ramen shop, food also sounded really good so he walked in.
"Hello there, son what'l you have?" A large man was behind the counter he was...husky his eyes were squinted shut and his clothes were stained probably from ramen stuff. Good thing hes wearing an apron
"Um...well...I've never been to one of these places before so..."
"Ah! I know just the thing!" The man turned around and began preparing the meal. Junichiro slammed his head down on the counter exhausted from all the training.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: +0.3; Total of 0.3/5

Try doing some character development. Talk about his feelings, what he's leaving behind.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((holy crap! i actually got a mod this time!? 0_0. I mean that post was just the one to wait for mods until I rage quited but...whoa I guess I will start now))

"Here, try this!"
The man came back with a bowel of ramen, he almost got a sense of foreboding for it and decided he would wait for it to cool. The man who gave it to him had a sense of anticipation and as though there was a surprise in it.
"So, what is a kid like you doing here at this time of day by yourself?"
The man was probably one of those traditional parents and didn't talk to a lot of shinobi especially ones who didn't come from or left a village before
"...What do you care?"
The ramen man turned around from washing the counter behind him to look him in the eye.
"Its just...You remind me a lot of a women who used to come in here...looked a lot like you."
"My mother?" Junichiro looked up from the counter looking at the ramen guy expecting more
"She might've just been..Why did you two get separated or somethin'?" Junichiro slammed his hands onto the counter
"Where is she heading? When did you last see her? is she-"
Junichiro's stomach growled he really needed to eat and decided now would be the time to try some of the ramen. he took a bite his face instantly turning red
"AHHHH HOT!!" he covered his mouth the ramen was REALLY spicy and the ramen guy began laughing hysterically as he got Junichiro a glass of water of which he drank immediatly.
"Ah ha ha ha, Sorry thats just what she always ordered I thought you would like it to."
It was at that moment two dark figures walked into the ramen shop undetected by the gasping Junichiro they stood like sentinels blocking the door and nodded at the ramen guy. At first Junichiro thought the ramen was just spicy but he soon realized he couldn't stop coughing the ramen guys face went from normal happy to sinister happy as him and the figures behind him began to laugh and all faded to black.

He 'awoke' in a very dark area, he was able to walk freely but all eh could see was the darkness he walked around about calling for anyone to come find him but there were no responses. But then a light shone out and his mother was there she was gaging for breath another light shone and a dark figure was standing there a pentagram drawn of blood was around him as he began stabbing himself in the heart repeatedly each time his mother was convulsing screaming and coughing blood until eventually she was just a corpse still being stabbed the figure looked over at Junichiro and took off his hood, it was his Father.

He then actually awoke in what looked to be a basement there was a single lightbulb lite in the middle of the room and 3 figures were there all looking at him their anbu masks covered in blood.
"What? Where am I? Who are you?"
'Well Well Junichiro we finally found you."
the figure in the middle took of his anbu mask as did the others, the memories all rushed back of who these people were they sometimes came over and helped his father torture Junichiro and other victims they found these people were his old anbu squad.

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Village: Kirigakure, Kumogakure
Fame: 0 | 16
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Training Points: 1070
Inventory: 1 genjutsu kunai, Books about clans, genjutsu's and ninjutsu's | 1 Nodaichi, 1 ocarina, 10 kunai, 50ft wire, 3 smoke bombs

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: In the future PM a mod. if 24 hours pass PM an Admin.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: + 1; Total of 1.3/5
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Mikrah Ozanaru

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Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 3:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

((Last time I did that...Ah never mind its not important))

Junichiro looked at each of the anbu squads. The one on the left had a very husky yet muscular build there were scars all over his face but his eyes being so squinty he had never seen there actual colors this was the guy from the ramen shop and his real name was Oryk.

The guy in the middle was much more thin blood stains were all over his coat that covered his entire body except for the now exposed face which was surprising un-scarred his hazel eyes were locked onto Junichiro who was getting ever the more nervous as every second past. His name was Ranill.

The last guy on the right was a bit deformed there was a huge lump on his back causing him to hunch over and he wore a blind fold over both his eyes scars were also over this guys face and he was breathing quite heavily Junichiro had never seen this one before he must be one lost soul who allowed them to conduct experiments on his body.

They looked at Junichiro and then at Ranill who decided to speak first.
"Junichiro...Why...Why would you kill Raeden?  
Raeden was his fathers name but he never called him Raeden because it fueled his fathers strange ego as some kind of god.
"Jashin is not pleased with you"
Junichiro already wanted to leave which was when he noticed there was some kind of wall in front of him, though completely transparent and the ability to hear every word come out and in the wall he could not just walk through it.
"What do I care what your fictional god thinks?"
Oryk angrily replied
"Jashin is as real as the ground you walk on and he will smite the unbelievers like you!!
"Raeden was like the avatar of Jashin! And you killed him!"
"We always knew you would never convert to Jashinism on your own accord which was a reason we tortured you so but never killed you."

Junichiro's eyes narrowed onto Ranill as Ranill continued to speak
"We didn't kill you not just to punish you but because of your blood. Your the only heir to Raeden the avatar of Jashin! And we needed to keep you alive In case he died."
The guys had gone just as crazy as his father had almost as if they were completely influenced by his father...or by Jashin. he barely even knew what Jashin was all he knew was that he was some kind of god that his father and apparently now his anbu squad followed.
"But now...Now that we know it was you who killed him...We are going to take your blood so that Raeden may be avenged and we can make him our new avatar of Jashin as Oryk spoke he pointed to the deformed figure to the right.
"Hes right...And this means we can't have you living anymore."
They all began to laugh menaichally as the all rose in unison and began to chant Ranill reached into his coat and pulled out a small vial of which he dropped a bit on his tounge and then dropped the rest on the ground drawing the same pentagram that he saw in his dream. Junichiro's eyes widened as he knew full well what happened next.

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Village: Kirigakure, Kumogakure
Fame: 0 | 16
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Training Points: 1070
Inventory: 1 genjutsu kunai, Books about clans, genjutsu's and ninjutsu's | 1 Nodaichi, 1 ocarina, 10 kunai, 50ft wire, 3 smoke bombs

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 3:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: + 1; Total of 2.3 / 5
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Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
Fame: 5000 ~ 0 ~ 0
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ranill drew the pentagram slowly with his hands as though he were finger painting in kindergarten. A wicked smile ran across his face and as he spoke he continued to paint.
"Any last words...Murderer?"
Junichiro bowed his head and closed his eyes. I'm going to die here aren't I? My whole family....My whole family is completely insane...And those that aren't insane just get killed off by those that are. But....I can't die here, If I die here then Tori will always see me as that little brat who brings a bad name to the word shinobi...and my mother...I didn't even find her...I wanted to tell her...tell her that I was sorry...
His throat tightened and his eyes watered he was going to cry soon and this only made the others begin to laugh harder Junichiro looked up to make his last words.
"Before I...Before I die, I need to know what YOU BASTARDS DID WITH MY MOM!!"
A silence sweapt over the basement like a gust of wind that took all noise with it, even Ranill stopped painting as he looked into  Junichiro's eyes and Junichiro at his, the strange shade of hazel in his eyes went back to his normal eye color...green. The same happened for Oryk but not the deformed guy they shook their heads as if they were disoriented Ranil was the first to speak
"What the...What happened? Where am I?"
Oryk looked around the room until his eyes, now the normal shade of blue were locked on Junichiro. He immediately ran forward at Junichiro to hug him.
"Juni!!" Junichiro smiled holding back tears
"Oryk....." It didn't take long for Junichiro to be completely in Oryk's embrace
"Juni! Its been so long! How have you been?
It was at this point he knew he was with the Oryk and Ranil he knew before his father went insane, Junichiro didn't even speak he only buried his head in Oryk's shoulder and began to weep.
"What the? Juni whats wrong? Your...Your gonna make me cry to , you."
Ranil was still where he had been standing and noticed the nearly completed pentagram, he wanted to ask Junichiro what was going on but didn't want to ruin their moment. The deformed one looked around nervously and started creating some hand seals
"Hey! What're you doing!? Ranil rushed forward to stop him but was too late the strange eye colors returned to both Ranill and Oryk. The hug Junichiro had on Oryk turned into a choke hold as Oryk's giant arms clutched around Junichiro's throat Junichiro couldn't even say anything he could only gasp for air and Ranil went back to drawing the pentagram. The deformed figure began to speak there were two voices about him, One was just some adult male and the other...his father's voice corrupted by the land of the dead.
"Hello....Son"

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Village: Kirigakure, Kumogakure
Fame: 0 | 16
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 12:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: +1; Total of 3.3/5
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Village: Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure ~ Kirigakure
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Name: Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique
Type: Genjutsu - visual
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This genjutsu plays on the target's hidden or not so much fears. As such, it can differ greatly in particular effects, from showing them an important person in a dying state if that's what they fear, to making them think like they're standing on a small platform over an abyss if they are afraid of heights, to making them think there are hundreds of mice running around if they are afraid of the little animals. However, this technique is rather easy to defeat since it is quite obvious and will disperse if the target confronts the particular fear the illusion is played upon.




Junichiro clutched his hands around Oryk's hand trying to get free but the attempts were in vain as he was much stronger than Junichiro was. that voice...it sounds like my fathers...but how? hes supposed to be dead!
"Your right, Son...I should be dead. the pentagram now complete Oryk threw Junichiro back at the wall the barrier forming right after he hit the actual buildings wall. The deformed figure limped behind Ranill and handed a small dagger to him. After Junichiro spent some time gaining his breathe back he got up and only stared at the figure at a loss for words he...he read my mind...but how? the deformed figure began to speak again he seemed to be very twitchy and was quivering while he spoke he clearly was insane.
"Confused? Allow me to enlighten you. When I first converted to Jashinism my comrades grew angry at me as though I were some...Non-Jashinist!! I...I had to show them the error of not following Him but I couldn't figure out how...but then I remembered I had you!...You who was so young no one would be able to figure out how to stop my technique.
"Technique? What technique?
"When I was done 'testing my new found powers on you and you feel unconcious I planted a virus for my genjutsu in YOUR blood the virus acted like a medium for me, I could cast genjutsu through you! So one day I had killed a dumb ***** and it wasn't until later on I found out that she was of the Yamanaka clan.  
"Im waiting for the part where I should start caring" Junichiro knew for one that he couldn't get through the barrier AND that everyone here were being mind affected by his father meaning genjutsus where useless to use...except for on the deformed figure..
"I had learned of a technique not even Jashin had given me. I was able to injest enough of her blood and gain her jutsu!" "If you know anything of the Yamanaka clan you know they are famous for their mind body switch technique.

"So you...that day...that wasn't you?"
The deformed figure cackled with laughter as Junichiro's eyes widened as he came to sudden realization. He had never killed his father in the first place which is why he still lived, Junichiro assumed that when his 'father' walked in what he was looking at back then was actually an illusion as his father was off doing other things!
"Thats, right Junichiro I am alive and well...And now! free! free from the chains of my human shell!"
"But why? Why does it matter that I only killed an illusion then?"
The deformed figure walked out from behind Ranill who seemed frozen in time, as did Oryk. The deformed figures face morphed to look identical to his father his eyes staring deep into Junichiros
"Once you left I went watched through your eyes everywhere you went gaining intel on the areas outside of the Water Country, I mean there was no way I could just get out of the country I'm a wanted man now! Anyway as i hid in the water country and these two idiots... he pointed to Ranill and Oryk.
"They found me and tried to rescue me, however I easily bested them and now they are under my mind control genjutsu.
"Idiots!? These people were your comrades!! THEY WERE LIKE PART OF OUR FAMILY THAT YOU DESTROYED WITH THIS STUPID JASHIN STUFF!!
Junichiro slammed his fist into the wall behind him his father screamed at the top of his voice
"JASHIN IS THE ABSOLUTE DIVINE! AN INFIDEL LIKE YOU COULD NEVER UNDERSTAND!! Jashin only looked at Junichiro now, he seemed to twitch at Ranil's direction as Ranil brought up the dagger and began to cut up his own arm Junichiro cried out in pain as the cuts began to gouge into his arm he also had a strange throbbing sensation on his forehead.
"I can make the pain all go away if you only do me one thing....Go back to konoha.
Junichiro was breathing heavily at this point the cuts still destroying his left arm
"Konoha....Why?"
Ranil stopped cutting for a second
"You idiot, don't you see? I can cast genjutsu through you! The last time you were at Konoha I was able to see little bits of the city! If you actually look about the city instead of hiding, I could find where to plant some of my clones and use the ultimate technique LIMELIGHT! Me and you son....we could rebuild Konoha in our and Jashin's image!
His father lowered the force wall and went to hug Junichiro
"THAT was a bad choice of wording!"
without even a seconds notice took his genjutsu kunai and threw it at his father and then formed the two hand seals to perform Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu.




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Village: Kirigakure, Kumogakure
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Training Points: 1070
Inventory: 1 genjutsu kunai, Books about clans, genjutsu's and ninjutsu's | 1 Nodaichi, 1 ocarina, 10 kunai, 50ft wire, 3 smoke bombs

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