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Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 8:11 pm Post subject: A Mission |
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(I guess this is the right place to post....?)
The black-haired, silver-eyed female stood, feeling the small grass snake slither slowly around her arm, concealed by her jacket sleeve. It was her left arm, and her slitted eyes and gaunt face moved a fraction of an inch to glance down at it for barely a second.
Then she looked up again.
Orachima frowned slightly, face otherwise blank.
She was waiting for the three other genin. Just the thought of having to work with others made her hiss in disatisfaction. It was such an.....annoyance. And they slowed her down.
She was techically strong enough to progress on her own, fight without a teammate or two, but, she had to admit....they did help until you got strong enough to beat everything.
And she coudn't wait until she got the true power necessary to achieve that. Her silver, slit-pupiled eyes grew malicious at the idea.
Aware that no one was near, the snake slithered out of her sleeve and up her arm, twining very loosely around her neck. The dangerous light in her eyes dissapppeared.
A smirk twitched at her lips when it did this, and she was reminded of the legendary Orochimaru, after which she was named closely. To most people's repulsion (or what would have been, seeing as she didn't tell anyone) she was honoured to be named so closely after him.
It gave her pleasure to become more and more similar to him in personality as the years passed.
At first, she had never known about him, and only grown that way because of the loneliness and no other way to live than to steal and kill, but once she heard of him and everything he had done, she had been obsessed with him, growing on his ideas; mimicking them and enhancing them; practicing them.
And she even had the privelege of looking similar to him, with the long black hair and slitted eyes (though his were yellow; she wished she had yellow, they were so much more snake-like). Along with being with snakes more than most people.
Her eyes moved to the snake around her neck, and she smirked again, eyes narrowed slightly.
Orachima, now just thinking about her hair, decided she would keep it down, not tie it up into complicated, multiple pieces. It took too long, and she didn't feel like bothering with it now.
The snake around her neck tightened, just enoguh so it was snug against her throat, and her snake eyes narrowed more, in wariness, her smirk dissappearing.
It dropped from her neck and slid away, and she crouched, slipping a kunai into her hand. But her eyes saw and sensed by the movements of the human that this was one of her mission partners.
She straightened, dropping the kunai back into it's previous position, and silently thanked her little snake friend.
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:37 am Post subject: |
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Kanae didn't know how, but somehow she had been allowed to leave Konoha for a mission. And there was her explanation, a mission. She quickened her pace to Suna as much as she could, after all, it wasn't safe for a genin to be traveling alone for three days. She jumped from tree to tree until she finally reached the great desert were Suna was somewhere in. 'trAvelling wasn't really what I expected, that's for sure'
She quickly put on a long coat and slid on the hood; this sun could actually burn her skin to crisp. She walked the dessert until soon enough reaching Suna and, man, was she happy to see it. She entered Suna carefully, just in case anybody thought she was an enemy. She had a permit from the hokage to go on this mission, but would the people in Suna believe that? No time to be thinking about that. Kanae stood inside Suna and what a peaceful quite village it was, compared to Konoha.
"Now, where were we gonna meet?"
She asked the villagers around for help and, thanks to them, she ended up finding the place. When she got there, a small grass snake slithered between her legs. "Eep!"
She jumped out from behind some boxes and found herself infront of aother female shinobi, and from the looks of it, she was from the sound. "Um, Orachima I presume?" _________________ Kanae Ganjou

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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 3:47 pm Post subject: |
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Orachima's face was a mask of disgust at the other ninja's fear of snakes, but only for the second that the other wasn't looking at her face.
Only a slight smirk touched her lips as she dipped her head to the other girl.
"And you are Kanae, hmm?" she replied.
It wasn't really a question, just a statement of what she knew was fact, even though she did put a questioning tint on the end of the sentence.
Her silver, slitted eyes actually looked up at the girl now.
"Ah, Konoha," she thought.
Then she spoke again, eyes slightly narrowed.
"I hope you weren't afraid of my little snake friend over there. Or thinking of harming him."
There was a tone of malice, but only the slightest bit, barely intelligible. She smirked, and turned the slightest bit away, only a few inches.
"And did you happen to see anyone else on your way here?" Orachima asked, glancing Kanae's way for a brief moment, her voice light, but devoid of any emotions.
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:27 pm Post subject: |
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"Well, your little friend just startled me," replied Kanae. Something in Orachima's tone bothered her. For some reason she felt as if she was being treated as a person of minor rank, when they were both clearly genin. Kanae felt weird, doing a mission with an otogakure shinobi. It was like fraternizing with the enemy, but she couldn't do anything now.
"And did you happen to see anyone else on your way here?" she heard Orachima say.
"Well," Kanae looked at Orachima straight in the eye. "They should be arriving soon." Atleast she hoped they would. _________________ Kanae Ganjou

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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 7:04 pm Post subject: |
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(I'm kind of waiting for someone else to reply.....
But I'll reply once more because now I can't resisit ^__^)
Yes. They were both genin. But Orachima had had experience before even becoming a shinobi, before the academy, actually, experience with killing, stealth, stealing and even a few jutsus.
So, this girl really was almost of minor rank to her. She was a girl, not even a teenager yet, somewhere around eleven or twelve, and there she was, acting like she was all high and mighty to a fifteen year old, someone having been a teenager for two years, and therefore four years older than her.
People like her really annoyed Orachima. They always got too easily annoyed, too easily angered, or too easily depressed. Couldn't they try and hold back their emotions for once, control themselves, try to not get themselves killed by annoying their enemies?
She caught a look on the girl's face and smirked slightly.
"Don't worry, our villages are allied, so you don't have to worry about that."
She watched the female's face now, her sharp, silver snake eyes missing no emotion.
"I only hope so. I hate to wait."
She said it in a way that would send chills down someone's spine, the tone was so menacing. Not towards Kanae herself, just in general.
"I know the rest are genin, and there's only one male. I think he's older than me. The two girls are someone around eleven and twelve."
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 9:13 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: No offence, but you really need to paragraph.
IC: A jovial laugh and humming accompanied the boisterous girl that walked through the hot sands. She appeared clearely from a distance, neither wasting the effort to be stealthy or reserved. As she neared the two she heard the voices of them. Although she had not seen pictures of her partners, she could tell by their conversation that these were her mission partners.
" Well hello there!" She burst with a bubbling happiness. " Welcome to Sunagakure No Sato? This your first time? It's a wonderful place. Lovely when it gets dark. I'm Hime Mitsuhaki of the Mitsuhaki Clan." She bowed slightly, but stopped as her eyes laid on a creature hidden among the grass.
" A snake, I'm assuming? Interesting. We don't get many of those around here." She stopped instantly, standing like a perfect statue in that bowed position. She didn't even seem to be breathing.
Her bright smile remained but turned visibly colder. She let it drop quickly soon. Already she could guess the personality of the older shinobi. She had a one-dimensional personality and she made no move to hide it.
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Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 3:35 pm Post subject: |
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(I actually am. Paragraphing is hitting the enter key, or one line down in a book. That's what I'm doing. What you call paragraphing is simply putting a line in between each paragraph, which I find annoying to read, and I hate to do it; I only do it when time passes or I have more than one character in the thread and post
Also, she doesn't have a kunai in he hand, so I'm just ignoring that....just telling you so Hime doesn't say more suff about it in your next post)
You can't be serious. This just...can't be happening, you can't be serious. This one was even worse than Kanae, the worst of the worst.
Orachima hated these ones the most, the people who were happy and constantly bouncing around and annoying people with their way overboard optimism and joy (really everyone who's not as optimistic themselves).
She dipped her head to the next one of their partners, the last girl. Acted younger than Kanae, but she was about the same or a little older.
She was from Suna, obviously, so the next one would be the older male from her own village.
"Oh, the grass snake? He's my little friend; I brought him here."
There was silence from her as kanae introduced herself, then she spoke her own name and origin.
"I am Orachima, from Otogakure."
She paused, then added, "We have only to wait for one more. He's an older male genin from my own village, named Akechi."
It was no suprise that he hadn't come with her; she was truly a loner unless forced into three-man teams, which she probably would be soon enough. And she wouldn't have liked him coming with her, for exactly the same reason; plus also having some quick things to do beforeheand....
She squatted down, body tense, ready to jump up and start the mission when the other arrived.
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 8:06 am Post subject: |
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(Hope it's okay if I go....it's just kind of been sitting here, so...yeah)
This one....he had been sitting there watching them for a while. He was not Akechi obviously, but he seemed to demand rspect.......he was the Kazekage, that's why.
She bowed slightly, lowering her eyes as she did so, then looking back up at him as she straightened.
"There's a mission we were sent here for, sir."
She almost flinched at having to call him "sir", but controlled herself.
"We're all in the same team, but the fourth one, one from my own village, doesn't seem to be coming."
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